I know that this topic has been beaten to death then brought back to life and once again beaten down. But I thought I would try to provide my take on how things should happen and give some other people entertainment during the long summer. This is kinda my first Fan Fic so I would appreciate all the reviews I can get, the good, bad, and the ugly. Thanks, and hopefully…Enjoy! Oh and I don't own anything, ya da ya da ya da….
"I hate you for ruining this for me!" Those words echoed through Lorelai's ears as she walked down the porch steps to stand above her daughter. The daughter who just moments before she had seen coming out of her bedroom with her married ex-boyfriend in a… well less than innocent state. Lorelai was having a hard time believing that her baby had finally taken that step. But oddly enough, Lorelai realized, that was not what was bothering her the most. Sure, she was upset that Rory had finally taken that "last step into womanhood," but not as upset as she was about whom Rory chose to do "it" with. How could her level-headed daughter have sex with a married man?
Lorelai looked down again at her daughter who was sobbing. Tears came to her eyes. She said softly, "I have to go, um, I have to think about things. Why don't you go inside and um well just go inside." For the first time in Lorelai's life she was having trouble speaking. Things had definitely changed in the Gilmore house.
"You're the other woman." Those words kept running through Rory's head. This night had quickly gone from wonderful to terrible in the blink of an eye. One moment she was feeling happy and elated then realization hit and now she was miserable and crying in the grass. She had slept with Dean, and worse than that she had slept with a married Dean. The realization of that fact hit Rory again, causing her to cry even harder. She was running the night's events in her head and she had reached when her mother had said those horrible things to her. She was so angry at her mom for saying those things to her. She was even angrier because she partly knew it was true. She didn't want her first time to be like this but it was over now and there was no going back. Tears were now streaming down her face and she heard her mother whisper the words she hated to here. "I have to go." Rory desperately wanted to call out to her and tell her not to leave, that she needed her. But a mixture of pride and anger kept her from uttering those words. Rory felt lost and there was nothing she could do about. She had made a mistake, probably the biggest one that she had ever made. Her head had failed her and now she was stuck knowing she had slept with a married man and the specialness of her first time was now gone, worn away to show the dull reality of the truth. She had slept with a married man.
Rory heard her mother's footsteps echo on the driveway and the Jeep's motor start through the ironically peaceful night. She looked up in time to see the headlights flash across the front lawn then head in the direction of the Inn. Rory, slowly got up, muscles sore, and climbed the porch steps and entered the house. She walked the familiar steps to her room, but when she arrived at her door she saw the rumpled bed and again the tears started flowing. She turned her back on the room where her world had changed so quickly and headed to the freezer and got out some Ben and Jerry's. She grabbed a spoon and plodded to the couch. She pushed in a video and knew things had undoubtedly changed. For the first time in her life she wanted her mom more than anything in the world and she wasn't there. The video started and Rory dug her spoon into the ice cream and tried to lose herself in the magic of Willy Wonka and Ben and Jerry's.
Please review and give me some suggestions on where I should take this story, I have some ideas myself but I could use some help….Thanks! Sorry is was short but they will probably get longer as I go on with the story.