Hello! It's me! I wrote this in one night I don't know if I like it yet, if you review and tell me what you think, and you all like I'll write chapter two, but I'm not sure so let me know! Thanks!

-SS11


They warned us, they really did. They said to leave the whitch alone, to stay away. There was a chant, all of us knew it, all of the children throught our mothers and fathers had made it up. But now I know how wrong we all were. But I cannot tell them, I cannot do anything. But I think of her, the whitch, and I remember her chant.

If you don't leave the whitch alone,

her cold heart can turn you to stone.

He hair is made of snakes

With a wretched ugly face.

Claws and teeth,

She wants to kill,

Be careful because,

We know she will.

Again and again. I heard her song. I hear her raspy voice, I see the night she caught us. We were careless, and now all I can do is sit, sit and think. You might say I should get up and leave, but if you were me, you would know I couldn't. I'll tell you why but right now, you must leave the alone, or she will get you too, and you will feel the pain I am feeling, and you will wish you listened.


It was a very dark cold night, we were going to have a campfire in the woods. Our parents made us promise to stay away from the homes on the other side of the forest. We knew they were nervous about something and nobody knew what. So we went, and hiked through the woods.

"Mel?" my brother asked me, "How much further?"

"Can't be that far," my friend, Blythe, answered for me.

Blythe is a tall semi quiet girl. She has dirty blond hair and soft green eyes the color of the ocean. She was only loud when she was angry, and she knew some nasty words when she had a reason to use them.

"Right!" Reese said coming up behind us, "We are quite close!"

Reese, however, is lould and constantly smiling. She had bright blue eyes that matched the blue streaks in her chocolate brown hair. She can either make you smile, or annoy the heck outa you. Sometimes both.

"How do you know?" Paul, my brother, demanded to know.

Reese lifted her map for him to see.

"Oh," was all he said, "I had no clue!"

Blythe and Paul started argueing, which is no surprise, they do that every time they see each other. Reese and I slowed down and let them get ahead.

After Blythe and Paul had gotten further down the path Reese whispered to me, "Why were our parents all freaked out about us having a fire? I mean, we've done it bunches of times before!"

"I don't know," I murmered, "they made me promise to stay away from the othwr side of the woods."

"Same here!" Reese exclaimed.

"Shhhhhh!" I hissed, "I don't wanna freak Paul out!"

Too late, Blythe and Paul heard them and waited for the other girls to catch up.

"Paul is stupid!" Blythe declared.

"Not true!" Paul exclaimed, "Blythe is just special!"

And that is when Blythe looked Paul in the eye,then smacked him, hard. Paul just blinked.

"Ow!"

Before Paul could punch Blythe in the face, Reese announced, "We're here!"

'Here' was a little clearing with a soft dirt layer. There were oak and maple trees growing around the edges. The perfect spot! I started setting up the fire pit, but when I realized that no one was helping I looked up and saw Blythe and Paul just standing there glaring at each other. Reese watched them with (no surprise) a smile on her face.

It just happened to be that moment that Reese choose to leap between the two and start singing annoying campfire songs. By the time Reese had sung three of the most annoying songs she knew. Blythe and Paul sat down as far away from each other as they could.

Reese laughed (not a good thing, trust me) and pulled every sugar treat I knew of out of her bag, "This is going to be fun!"

"So much fun..." whispered a raspy voice from the bushes, "so much fun..."


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