Yo, This is IMPORTANT! I've realized that my characters actually suck in comparison to what I wanted them to be (Jackie). So! 'm slowly fixing them up. But, to be honest, I DON'T want to write right now, since I have a lot going on, so please be patient with me.
Two boys walked down a rainy path together, chatting. The japanese boys were none other than students of Saotome Academy, learning to be idols. The red headed boy with red eyes was Otoya Ittoki and the blue head with blue eyes and a beauty mark under his right eye next to him was Hijirikawa Masato.
It was pouring rain at the time, pounding the ground with heavy drops of water. They walked under two separate umbrellas which matched their hair colors. They stopped in their tracks when they heard a whiny cry. They looked around and then the red headed boy suddenly yelped, rushing over to a bush. Peeping in, they saw a girl with very long, brown hair, tied back in a ponytail. She was soaked head to toe and was in the fetal position, crying into her already wet knees. The only thing she had on her was a small, red, waterproof shoulder bag.
The two boys suddenly exchanged a quick conversation before turning back to the girl. They said a jumble of words to the girl to in which she cried louder. They tried again when the girl looked at them with big, puffy, reddened, blue eyes and answered:
"I don't know Japanese." She said, hoping the message got across. The boys exchanged worried glances before the redhead turned back to the girl with a worried look. He pointed to himself and said:
"Otoya Ittoki." Then he pointed at the blue headed boy. "Hijirikawa Masato." The girl noded and pointed to herself, speaking in a low voice.
"Jackie." She said softly. Otoya Ittoki smiled and held out his hand, causing her to flinch back. Ittoki flinched for a second too, frowning before smiling and trying again. This time the girl looked at his hand before shakingly holding out hers, reaching for him, flinching back every once in a while. She finally took his hand and he helped her up. Smiling, Otoya Ittoki took off his blue coat and hung it over her shoulder to keep her warm. He held her in a one armed hug and led her down the street, Hijirikawa Masato following.
They walked down the path in silence, knowing neither would understand the other. The redhead made sure to hold the red umbrella over the lost girl's head. The girl, meanwhile, wept silently, praying that the people who had found her weren't taking her somewhere bad. After all, they could be anyone. But the look in Otoya Ittoki's eyes gave her a feeling of comfort, so she went with her gut and followed nicely.
The girl turned to the blue headed boy. He was walking with an emotionless face, staring straight ahead with his dark blue eyes. Suddenly, he glanced at her. Their eyes met for a second. His eyes looked right into hers and his mouth opened slightly. He then turned his head away, suddenly destroying the contact.
Soon the two boys led her to a large building. The frightened girl's eyes widened at it's sight. Was it theirs? It was big and white, covered with expensive looking windows. It's entrance was huge and the garden around it would be beautiful if not for the rain. It even had it's own 10 foot steel lined fence around it. It was a huge mansion!
Suddenly a man in what seemed to be a police outfit rushed over, stopping them. He began to babble in Japanese, pointing at the girl. The girl, hopelessly confused, simply looked back and forth between the protective redhead and the police man. The only thing she could make out was the redhead saying her name.
The guard called out and another 'Police man' who came out, got on a phone, and beginning to speak to someone on the other end. The guard closed the phone and nodded. Finally, the guards nodded to the three teens and stepped aside. Otoya Ittoki smiled and said the Japanese word for thank you, 'ArigatÅ'.
The redhead and the bluenet led the brown haired girl down to the building. Once inside, the two boys shook out their umbrellas and closed them, giving the girl a chance to look around. She stared in amazement at the decor and architecture. The ceiling was high and beautifully done. Paintings hung on the walls and stachus lined the floor.
The redhead called to the brunet and walked down a hall with Hijirikawa Masato beside him. Afraid of getting lost in such a large building, the girl rushed over to the boys, lightly gripping the back of Otoya Ittoki's shirt. He smiled lightly at her before turning his head and saying something in Japanese to Hijirikawa Masato. The blue haired boy nodded in response, smiling at the girl lightly. Though she didn't know what they actually said, she had a good idea.
"She's really scared." Otoya Ittoki might have said, causing Hijirikawa Masato to nod in agreement...Or something like that. The girl sighed, feeling helpless in the situation. She hadn't felt that lost and confused since her first day in spanish class as a freshmen in high school, which she still was.
Suddenly a bell rang through the air, causing teens from the rooms that lined the hallways to pour out. The girl gripped the back of the redhead's shirt tighter, afraid to loose him. Walking down the hallway, the teenagers stared at the crying teen that was stuck to the boy's back, speaking unknown words about her to their friends. The girl, by then, figured out that this was actually a school she was walking through, which explained the uniforms everyone was wearing. She suddenly became more grateful for the redhead's jacket still strung across her shoulders, helping her blend in with the crowd a little more.
Suddenly they came to a stop. The girl peaked out from behind her new redheaded friend to see the problem. Standing in front of them was a long haired, blond boy, holding a rose on his hand. His blue-gray eyes were mischievous and his face was twisted with a smirk. He spoke to Hijirikawa Masato, the blue haired boy speaking with intensity. The blond's eyes wandered until they met with the girl's. His smirk widened, causing the girl to shutter and move closer to her new companion.
The blond came around and bent down to her, speaking in Japanese. The girl simply stared at him, confused. After waiting and getting no response, the blond turned his head in confusion.
The redhead suddenly flipped his arm back, holding it between the blond and the girl. He suddenly raised his voice at the blond. The blond boy didn't seemed too phased by the yelling but looked more interested with the scared girl.
Suddenly another blond boy showed up. This one had blue eyes as well, a hat on top of his head. He was rather short, shorter than the girl. He first talked to the other blond before looking at the girl who clung close to Otoya Ittoki. He pointed at her and began to babble. The other blond responded to him, causing the short boy to nod his head.
Suddenly the blue haired boy cut in, bowing quickly to the blonds before taking the girl's hand and pulling her along. She complied quickly and easily, not comfortable at all around the blond boys. She hated it when she didn't know what to do, it made her feel week, which she was, but who wants to be reminded? Then again, who wouldn't feel weak? She was in a strange place filled with strangers she didn't understand. She didn't even know where they were going.
The redhead caught up with them, falling into pace with the rushing boy. He began to speak, getting a short cut answer from Hijirikawa Masato in return. Otoya Ittoki sighed in response.
Suddenly they came to a stop. They stood in front of a big door, staring at it. Otoya Ittoki knocked on the door while Hijirikawa Masato led the girl to a seat just outside of the door, on the opposite wall. A voice from inside called out and the two boys slipped in. They closed the door behind them, leaving the girl in silence. Sitting alone, the girl stared at her feet, wishing she was home.
Hearing footsteps, the girl looked up. She spotted a blue, messy haired boy walking down the hallway in a white shirt. He seemed rather cold from his demeanor. As he approached her they locked eyes. He stopped and stared at her. Then, after an awkward silence, he said a short line in Japanese. The girl, upset about not understanding, responded the best she could.
"I speak English." She said. They held a gaze for a minute longer before the boy looked away and continued down the hallway like she wasn't there. The girl sighed and pulled the borrowed blue jacket closer to herself, shivering. Why was it so cold? She breathed hard on her hand, warming it's blue color.
Suddenly the door opened again. The girl looked up in hope. Walking out was her saviours, followed by three other people. One had long, pink hair, dressed in a beautiful, plain dress of white, simple yet stylish. The second one was a blond man with his hands in his leather pockets, dressed in a gray business suit. The last was a bigger man with brown hair. He was dressed in a suit, a crazy tie, and had sunglasses on. Why was he wearing sunglasses inside? Otoya Ittoki gestured to the girl and spoke to the three new faces. They nodded in response.
Suddenly the pink haired lady walked over the the girl and smiled. She bent down to be at eye level, making sure not to move to much, afraid to scare the girl further. She spoke kindly and softly.
"Tsukimiya Ringo." She said, pointing at herself. In response the girl did the same.
"Jackie." She said. The pink haired lady nodded in response and pointed at the blond.
"Hyuga Ryuya." She said and then pointed at the last man. "Shining Saotome." The girl nodded, understanding. What kind of a name was Shining? The woman thought for a second, taping her chin. Suddenly she smiled and pointed once more at her self. "Japanese." She said. Jackie nodded and pointed at herself.
"English." She said. The woman smiled, nodding. She turned to Hyuga and said something to him. He nodded in understanding and walked back into the room. A few minutes later the man came out again, speaking to the other man. He nodded and both of them walked back into the room together. Suddenly there was a ringing. The loudspeaker went on and Japanese was spilled out into the air. The loudspeaker turned off and the two men came back out.
The lost girl looked at them all, not sure what to do. The awkward tension was building and it was getting unbearable. Suddenly a voice called out. They turned their heads to see a girl running down the hallway. She had bright purple eyes and long, red hair. She waved as she ran, smiling widely. She came to a stop in front of them, panting. She turned to the adults and asked them something. The blond man responded, pointing at the brown haired girl. The new teen looked at the girl and smiled. She walked over and bent down.
"Hello." She said, speaking english in a weird accent. The lost girl sat up and began to speak.
"Hello." She said back.
"What is wrong?"
"I was going to Florida and ended up in Japan." The redheaded girl's eyes widened and she sighed, turning to the others and translating. They gasped in surprise and the redheaded girl turned back to the lost girl.
"I'm Tomochika Shibuya, but you can call me Tomo-chan." She introduced, smiling. "Do you know how to contact family?"
"I'm not to sure." Jackie said, ducking her head down. Tomo turned to the others and translated.
"Okay. How about this. We can connect a call home for you." Tomochika offered. Jackie lifted her head and, for the first time, smiled a little and nodded. Suddenly the man with glasses shouted and began to spin around. Confused, Jackie turned to Tomochika.
"Is he sane?" She asked, causing Tomochika to giggle.
"Don't know." Tomochika admitted. "He said that you can stay in my room until your family gets you."
"Thank you." Jackie said, nodding. "Can you thank him for me?" Tomochika nodded and spoke to Shining. Tomochika held out her hand to Jackie, who took it. She helped her up out of her seat. Jackie pulled Otoya's jacket off of her shoulders and handed it to him. He smiled and thanked her. Tomochika pulled Jackie down the hallway and into another room, the others following us. In the new room was a bunch of phones.
"Where are you from?" Tomochika asked.
"New Jersey, America." Tomochika nodded and walked over to one of the phones, typing in some numbers before handing it to me.
"Put in your number." She instructed. Jackie nodded and punched in her number. The phone range on the other line. Suddenly it stopped and was replaced with a familiar voice.
"Hello?"
"Mommy..." Jackie whispered into the phone.
"Jackie, what is it?" She asked.
"I'm in Japan." Jackie said, not wasting anytime to let her mother in on her crisis. Her mother went silent on the other line for a moment before speaking.
"How?"
"I think I got on the wrong plain." Jackie sighed, letting a tear roll down her cheek, though she didn't let it affect her voice. The talking continued for a while before Jackie hung up, her eyes now filled with a sorrow instead of relief. She turned to Tomochika, frowning. "They can't pick me up, we don't have enough money."
"Oh dear." Tomochika frowned, hugging the abandoned girl. Tomochika turned to the others and shared the news. The began to exchange conversation on the topic, trying to work something out. Finally, at an agreement, they turned to Tomochika to translate. "Jackie, they say that you can stay here until you can get picked up."
"Thank you." Jackie thanked, wiping her tears from her eyes.
"You can stay with me and I'll lend you some cloths." Tomochika offered. Jackie nodded her head and was lead out of the room by Tomochika. How could she have gotten herself into this kind of situation?
Hello Everyone! This is the first chapter of American Dream! I hope you all like it as much as I do~ Please be nice, I know lots of people don't like replacing Haruka with an OC (And many do), and, to be honest, I don't like replacing her either, nor do I like reading those stories, but please be nice. I don't know if I'll be keeping this up, so please give me some positive reinforcement!
In case you don't know, obviously the two boys Jackie met are Otoya and Masato. The boy that Otoya and Masato were talking to when they suddenly stopped was Ren, and Syo was the other blond that showed up.
And the boy with messy hair that Jackie talked to for a moment was Tokiya.
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