This is my first story, i won't tell you to go easy on me but it would help if you critiscize
I do not own OHSHC cuz' if i owned it it would look like crap
Grief
As she knelt on her father's grave one last time, she felt as if a piece of her heart was destroyed. There was no one to come for her, no one who could comfort her now in this time of grief. Her friends were all far away busy with their work or families or whatever, she didn't care anymore. The waves of sadness slammed at her hard, when she finally needed someone with a helping hand there were no one who cared. Haruhi felt her tears pouring she just let them fall. When twilight came she felt a warm hand touch her shoulder, she thought that it would be one of her selfish relatives laughing at her crying face, but it was one of her friends actually two people she considered her best friends, Hikaru and Kaoru. She wanted to run away, she didn't want them to see her like this but when she started to run hikaru grabbed her and embraced her and said "Haruhi, don't run away. It's okay you can cry now" When I started to struggle kaoru hugged me as well and said "Don't hold back let it all out, we're for you" She didn't realize it for a while but hikaru had carried her to their private limo. Inside the car, Haruhi felt a little drowsy 'it would be okay to sleep...for awhile...just a little nap...'
When she woke up, she was in a familiar room. This particular had the colour orange for it's ceiling and walls. The table on the left side of the bed had three pictures. One was a picture of the Host Club which was taken when they were serving guests. Another was a picture of the twins when it was the beginning of school. The last one was a picture of her between the twins in the alps when they had trip there. Then she remembered where she was. She was in the room of her two fellow hosts, Hikaru and Kaoru Hitachiin.
What do you think? please review and tell me_
~Stardust311