Hey guys, listen, I've had some wonderful advice posted on one of my chapters, but in order for me to listen to it I'm going to have to rewrite the whole thing. So to sum it all up, I'm sorta starting all over again from ground zero. Don't unfavorite or unfollow the story though, it's not disappearing, just reposted at a later date hopefully improved
Yours truly,
Rammona J. L.