Well hello there, ok this is the first chapter of a story that has been in my mind for ages! It was really bugging me and I feel happy to get it onto FanFic.
*****Anyway this story will only be continued if I get reviews so you like my story review it, if you don't then we are back to the bridge idea… haha ENJOY****
Kiata's thoughts Demon Real story
Chapter 1: TheMission Starts
A scream pierced the night sky, a scream filled with pain, a scream of terror, but most of all a scream with loss... The young girl looked into the eyes of the person who held her by her hair; she looked into the eyes of the one who killed her family. She was met with a smile, a smile that made chills go down the young girl's spine.
"You are going to come with me, Kiata." The man's voice was taunting her as she saw the blood of her parents splattered across his face.
Kiata once again screamed and twisted her body only to feel more pain as her hair was ripped from her scalp. Suddenly a sharp pain came to the back of her neck; this pain was shortly followed by darkness. The last thing the 5 yr old saw was the face of her parent's killer the face of the Legendary Snake Sannin…..Orochimaru…..
~~~~8 years later~~~~
She looked at the black cloak in front of her, the meeting had been called 5 minutes ago, she had her hat in her hand, but her cloak was still on its hook; still in front of her. Kiata wasn't scared of the cloak; she was raised by some of the world's most feared criminals, fear isn't something she felt normally. No she was merely looking at the design, the red clouds patterned across the black material, a smile spread across her face, she had been the one to come up with the clouds. She was only seven and had stolen Pein's plain black cloak and had decided to paint pretty clouds on it, but the only paint she could find was red, Pein had tried to wash it but since that only made Kiata cry, he instead made it the official outfit of the Akatsuki; he was just happy she hadn't found the pink paint.
Kiata laughed and grabbed the cloak and in one swift move put it on along with the hat, then the person who was raised by the Akatsuki skipped all the way to the meeting room. Yes that's right Kiata grew up happy, although she does go dark if needed, but normally she is a happy, hyperactive 13 yr. old. Kiata walked through the double doors into a room filled with criminals and had a few heads turn and glare at her for being late, so being her,
She announced in a loud voice "Cause the party don't start till I walk in!" she then skipped over to her seat; that was next to Sasori.
She stopped for a second, Itachi and Sasori sat next to each other, and this made an evil grin spread across her face as she jumped into Itachi's lap and hung her feet into Sasori's lap.
"Comfy?" Itachi asked with his normal expressionless face, but you could tell from his tone he was ticked off.
Kiata responded by squirming around a bit and looked up into his eyes and smiled widely "Quite!"
"Ahh! Tobi get off me!"
The room was interrupted and every looked to see Tobi trying to do what Kiata was doing expect with Deidara. Commotion started to build up as people started to yell at each other across the room.
"All right! Enough!" Pein's voice silenced the room. "We have an important issue to address…it is to do with Orochimaru…"
a small chill went up Kiata's spine; a deadly silence came upon the room.
"He isn't after Kiata again?" Sasori's voice showed a hint of worry as he broke off the silence.
Kiata had worked her way into her own seat and was staring at the back of her hand as if it had just become the most interesting thing in the world. She could feel all eyes on her, she wanted someone to speak, she didn't want everyone to see her if she broke down… No she was Kiata nothing broke her, she put on her expressionless face and lifted her head and looked towards Pein, waiting for the answer to Sasori's question.
"No he isn't after Kiata, but we have got information that could help us weaken his forces and maybe even kill him, if we are lucky." Kiata let out a breath that she didn't even know she was keeping; she heard a few other people let out sighs of relief as well.
"Well, what the fuck is he doing?" Hidan, showing his impatience side, yelled out.
Kiata jumped over to Sasori and covered his ears. "HIDAN! Don't use such fucking horrible language!" Kiata yelled across the room.
Sasori placed his hands calmly over Kiata's and removed them from his ears and told her to sit down. Kiata could tell Sasori was still troubled over Orochimaru and to be honest she was too. Sasori was always a bit more protective of Kiata than everyone else, the whole gang loved Kiata and protected her but they were like brothers, and sister(Konan), but Sasori was like a father, and very protective.
"Ahem! In case you lot have forgotten we are here for a meeting not a tea party!" Pein's voice rang through the meeting hall; a deathly silence fell upon them all...
"Good. Now for the real reason we are here. Orochimaru is planning on attacking Konoha along with the sand village; Zetsu manage to get this information without being detected, so our knowledge of it is unheard of so far. Orochimaru will be using all his forces; this is our time to attack, with all of them preoccupied with the attack no one will think we would be there. It is perfect his forces will be weakened and preoccupied and if we try hard enough our existence in the battle won't even be noticed. But we must prepare, the attack is about 2 weeks away and is going to take place during the final exams in Konoha. I am putting some of you out as information finders, others will be scouting around for fighting spots and finally I want one of us to infiltrate the leaf and wait there till the attack, this allows us to have someone on the inside, plus they can find out a bit of info; any questions?" Pein finally finished off his lovely, long assed speech.
"Why on earth would we do it now?" Kakuzu stated
"Well, not only will his forces be weaker but we believe he is after a certain Uchiha, and if he gets his hands on the Sharingan it could devastating, not even we could stop him."
Pein looked around for any more questions.
"Alright then, now to your assignments..." he was cut off by a certain young girl
"I want to go to the leaf!" Kiata's voice was firm and the whole Akatsuki rolled their eyes, knowing this voice meant she was about to be stubborn.
"No, you are too..." Pein didn't get to finish off his sentence before, once again, being interrupted.
"I am too what? I have been training since I was five, I can take out ANBU; if I wanted to. I am not a child, plus I am perfect for this! You can't send Itachi as he knows the streets to well, it might raise suspicion, Deidara explodes everything, Sasori carries puppets around with him, and Zetsu eats fucking people! I could carry on but I won't, this isn't exactly hard all I got to do is go and stay undetected in the village. If I do get in trouble I will just escape, I am strong enough! PWEASE!" she finished off using her secret weapon; the puppy eyes.
"Ok." Pein voice sounded unsure
"Yay!" Kiata pounced up and hugged Pein around the middle.
"But..." Pein said with a firmer voice playing.
"Boo, no buts, boo!" Kiata said detaching herself and looking at Pein.
"But Itachi and Sasori will stay near the village, in case help is needed." Pein nodded at the end, happy with his decision.
"But..." Kiata started to whine but was stopped.
"No butts about it!" Pein voice stated harshly.
To which Kiata giggled "You said no butts...haha...BUTTS!" at this point Kiata was rolling on the ground in fits of laughter, every now and again yelling out "Butts!"
~~~~Half an hour away from Konoha- the next day~~~~
Kiata sighed they had stopped, once again, in order for Itachi and Sasori to once again go over the plan and ALL of its safety rules; Kiata just tuned them out after the first 3 speeches.
"KIATA!" Sasori snapped.
Kiata who was once sitting on the edge of a large tree branch inspecting a leaf was now upside down hanging to it by the chakra in her feet.
"What the FUCK Sasori! I could have fallen!" Kiata screech as she pulled herself up.
"Technically you did fall." Itachi pointed out in the I'm-smarter-than-you-are tone; to which Kiata poked her tongue out as she finally sat back on top the large tree branch.
As she sat on the good 1 meter thick branch Sasori started to speak again "Did you listen to a word I said?" Sasori said with a very irritated voice playing.
"Yes, mum." Kiata taunted back as she rolled her eyes and leant back against the tree base.
"Fine then I want you to tell me everything I said" Sasori said implying that she hadn't listened.
Kiata let out a sigh "At the moment I am wearing a seal that changes my scent, charka signal and appearance, so in other words changing me completely and no one, not even Sharingan users, can see it. I am to go into Konoha and stay there until the invasion. You and Itachi will be about 1 mile away from the village in case I need help. I will walk in and show them my fake ID that Zetsu got me and happily live there. You guys will find out where I am living and drop in my ninja bag that holds my ear piece, for communication, scrolls that contain weapons and other items, and my cloak. This bag is not to be taken out of the apartment until the invasion, I will have to get a job in order to earn money and not cause suspicion. I am to call you and Itachi if help is needed. Did I forget anything oh great Sasori, master of the boring speeches?" Kiata ended while raising an eye brow at Sasori.
When Sasori's eye visibly twitched she took it as a yes and grabbed her bag with the ID and a few other supplies that a traveller would need. With a quick hug to Itachi and Sasori, both giving a little hug in return, she jumped down and continued the walk to Konoha alone.
~~~~~5minutes later~~~~~
~~~~Inside Kiata mind~~~~~~
I BOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEDDDD!
You could set me free and we could go and kill people…Bwahahahaha
Ummm...let me see…..NO!
Party pooper
Says the evil demon that won't leave me alone!
I am sealed within you it isn't like I chose to be here. You could always release me I promise to behave
Yer well if you weren't going to destroy my body and take over the world then i might release you
Really?
I am not stupid! OUCH WTF!
Yer umm miss I am so smart, you just ran into the gates of Konoha…
Shhh it you
Shhh it? Really?
Just shut the FUCK up!
Ok I can tell when I am unwanted
Good.
Fine.
Just go!
~~~~Real World~~~~
The two guards at the Konoha gates looked at each other and back at the girl who had just ran into the gates that were renowned for being big and eye-catching. They continued to stare as she looked like she was having a battle in her mind…and was losing it.
"You know it's rude to stare." Kiata said as she walked over to the guards and ruffled through her bag for the ID.
"Umm, sorry ma'am" one replied while the other composed himself.
"Here you go!" Kiata chipped in a happy voice as she almost knocked out one of the guards as she handed him her ID.
As one guard checked the ID the other stared once again as the girl seemed to be fighting inwardly…again.
~~~~inside Kiata's mind~~~
Yer just knock out one of the guards, they are never going to suspect us
Geez what happened to you leaving, what you get lost?
Don't worry about me getting lost; there isn't much space up here to get lost in.
Grrr…
Now who sounds like a demon?
Shhh it!
Again with the Shhh it?
~~~~Real World~~~
The girl let out a frustrated sigh and turned to the guard holding her ID.
"Well Miss Hoshichia, welcome to the Village Hidden in the Leaves." Kiata smiled and thanked them as she put her ID away
A smile found her face as she thought of her name, Hana Hoshichia; she came up with the first name while Kisame and Itachi came up with a last name that combined the two of theirs. Completely idiotic but it worked. Kiata smiled again, but this time hidden behind the smile was a smirk this smile played on as she walked through the streets of Konoha.
Operation Infiltrate the leaf, may now begin….
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Great I have been here for 2 minutes, 2 MINUTES and I am already lost! Kiata let out a frustrated sigh as she walked around in the dense forest; her paced slowed down as she started to sense around her; just to make sure she wasn't being followed.
Ok no one's following me, but I don't like how much water is in the air... Kiata turned to the west, and sure enough there were huge dark clouds.
That storm will hit in about an hour, I still have enough time to find a hotel. Oh well if i don't, I do enjoy a good rain storm! And it was true, plus the storm could never hurt her, for one main reason; her kekkki geki. Yep she was the only one left of her once great clan, the only one with the power to control water. Suddenly she ran into something, it was hard, yet another tree...
Where the hell did that come from?
Gee I don't know, maybe it walked over and punched you in the face
You think so?
No.
Well then, could you ever so politely F off
Geez someone's cranky
Geez I can still hear you, what part of F off don't you get?
Ok I am gone, but you can get yourself out of this forest.
Wait no! HELP ME!
Bwahahahaha...
The demons voice faded out until it was just Kiata and the forest; she kicked a nearby tree and fell down onto the grass. She spread out her arms and legs to make a star shape.
I could find my way out, but if I use my senses too much and someone catches me, especially a ninja, things could get real ugly real fast. This is my first mission alone I won't stuff it. But if I can't stuff it up, what can I do?
Kiata looked up to the sky it was almost sunset, a storm was less than an hour away and she was stuck in a forest; her day just kept getting better and better. Suddenly she sensed a presence, it seemed like it was coming towards her, they had massive chakra levels but they weren't real mature.
Maybe a chunnin?
The person finally came into the clearing, she sat up and got a good look of him; bright blonde hair with deep blue eyes, he was pretty short and he had an orange jumpsuit. The boy was also looking at the girl he had found lying in the middle of the forest; she had long light brown hair that was braided to the right with hazel eyes.
"Umm, do you need help?" the boy asked
He looks like he's only 13, why would he want to help me? A complete stranger lying in the woods.
"Well I was trying to find an apartment but well you can see how well that turned out for me." Kiata finished as she gestured around to the pairs surroundings.
"I know a great hotel! I could even get you in there easily!" the boy finished off with a huge grin that almost split his face in two.
"Really that would be great!" Kiata exclaimed as she jumped to her feet
"Haha, yer! I am Naruto Uzumaki!" Naruto stated as he started to lead them out of the forest.
"Hana Hoshichia, hmm Uzumaki, why does that sound familiar?" Kiata started to think hard; she had heard it before, but where!
"Oh I am the son of the fourth Hokage, you know the guy that runs this village." Naruto stated kind of confused, everyone knew who his dad was.
"Hey you're the son of the fourth Hokage!" Kiata yelled out as if she had just solved the greatest mystery of all time.
"I just..." Naruto went to speak but was interrupted
"No you didn't" Kiata said as she folded her arms across her chest
"But..." Naruto went to argue but Kiata put a finger in either ear and stated to sing.
Naruto sighed, out of all the people lying in a forest he had to find the crazed one.
~~~~At the hotel~~~~
Naruto thanked the receptionist and walked over to wear Kiata was tapping a fish tank glass.
"Bwahahahaha, take that fish!" Kiata exclaimed as she once again tapped the glass.
"Umm here you are, I got you the pent house, I told them you were happy to pay but they insisted on it being free." Naruto said as he extended his hands and placed the keys into Kiata's hands.
Naruto turned to leave but as he opened the front door a huge flash of lightening, which was quickly followed by a clap of thunder forced him to close the door. Kiata saw this and sighed, she couldn't leave him, so trudged over and put a hand on the boy's shaky shoulders, he clearly didn't like the rain.
"It's a pent house suite, plenty of room for two." She smiled and for Naruto that was all the encouragement he needed.
The two cozied into an oversized, puffy lounge with a month's supply of ramen, curtsy of the hotel. At first it was awkward, neither knew what to say or how to start a conversation, so they sat in awkward silence. Then slowly as the ramen supply slowly dewdelled away the awkward silence became more comfortable, eventually conversation started.
"I've never seen a girl eat so much ramen!" Naruto instantly wanted to retract his words.
"I've never seen a boy eat so much ramen." Kiata poked her tongue out, she was just happy someone broke the silence.
"So why are you in the leaf?"
Oh you know I'm just scouting out for your village's weak spots and landscape cause in two weeks' time your village is going to be attacked and your Hokage assassinated. "Just travelling around!" Kiata giggled as her darker thoughts hid behind her smile.
"That would be so cool, just moving around, staying where you want moving on when you want to…" Naruto seemed to drawl into a deep state of thought, in a sadden way.
"It's not that great, it gets lonely sometimes; I've never really had anything consistent in my life." It was always that way, always a new hideout or new trainer; never the same.
The pair fell back into silence, not awkward or comfortable, just silence as each of their own thoughts roamed through the room. Eventually the storm eased off, the ramen was finished and Naruto was gone. Kiata made a point to stay away from him, he was dangerous and she couldn't risk this mission.
The next couple of weeks went by easily, Kiata only got lost a further three times, each time being able to get out on her own. She reported some weak spots where Orochimaru was likely to attack and some fighting spots that could let the Akatsuki have the upper hand. Other than that the weeks she had in Konoha were good but they were finally about to come to an end, tomorrow was the day of the attack and the day of the final Chunin exams.
Kiata comfortably walked the streets, flipping papers lazily at people's doorways, a job worthy of a trained killer. A family passed her by, they were so happy, they weren't laughing or smiling, instead the mother was scolding her husband for buying the children ice-cream while she herself happily ate her own. Even as she got up him Kiata could see the love radiating of her, she could see how the father held his little daughter protectively in his arms. I never got that and I never will.
Smash! Well to the little boy it felt like he had smashed into a wall, for Kiata she felt nothing more than a little bump just below her knee. She looked down at the red headed boy who had plopped on the ground with tears welling up, he was about to create a scene. The last thing Kiata needed was a scene.
"Shhh, shhh don't cry! It's alright I'm here does anything hurt?" She scanned the boy for any signs of trauma while he scanned her, for what exactly is unknown.
"Me head." The boy whined and rubbed the point of contact between his leg and Kiata's knee.
"Ok let me look." The boy removed his hand and Kiata couldn't help but smile, the boy was obviously just being a child. "Alrighty up you get, now where are your parents?" She picked the boy up onto her hip where he quite happily sat and scanned around.
"Mummy!" The toddle yelled into Kiata's ear as he frantically pointed to an even more frantic red headed lady.
"Toshio" The lady growled and stormed over to the pair, even Kiata was terrified. "What do you think you are doing running away from me like that!" Yep the woman was pissed.
"Umm he ran into me and hit his head." Kiata pushed the child towards its demon mother in order to save herself.
"Oh I am so sorry dear, he is a bit of a rat bag." The demon-lady was all of a sudden calm and friendly, no doubt she was seething on the inside.
"That's fine, as long as he is alright. I best be off." Kiata wanted nothing more to do with these people.
"Please let me help you with those." The woman suggested to the large bag of newspapers which to a civilian would weigh a tonne, a ninja it was nothing more than a feather.
"I'm fine. I have to get it done before the sun goes down though, it was lovely to meet you." Kiata nodded in respect and once again attempted to leave.
"I'm Kushina Uzumaki." The woman pulled at Kiata's hand.
"Kiata." Kiata slowly shook the woman's hand and smiled as she freaked out on the inside I just used my real name. I'm FUCKED.
"Nice to meet you Kiata, perhaps we will meet again." And just like that to woman who could tear Kiata's whole mission apart walked away.