Kari's Obsession
By Angie
Tai put down his pencil and sighed to himself. "How am I supposed to write a story about Kari when she won't let me know anything about her anymore?" he asked to the silence of the house. Then he remembered a couple of days ago when he was babysitting her for his parents. He smiled evilly and began writing.
The other day I realized my sister was obsessed with a video game. She wouldn't put it down. The game was Pokemon Silver (not very obsessable if you ask me). She screams at it and calls it an old man. She sees the game map like a map of the world. She thinks she can go to these places. She named the person in the game after her favorite person in the world, TK. She named her rival after her least favorite person, Davis. She pretends she's like his traveling companion (TK not Davis). So if you do these things then you are obsessed with the Pokemon game and you should seek help immediately before it can get you too.
Tai put his pencil down and smiled to himself thinking, 'Kari's going to kill me when she sees this. I'm wondering what the class'll think of it'. Meanwhile, Kari was busy writing her own school report entitled "Tai's Obsession: Sora" but that's a different story.
So what do you think? Good, bad, really crappy? I thought so. Review please. I know it sucks.
By Angie
Tai put down his pencil and sighed to himself. "How am I supposed to write a story about Kari when she won't let me know anything about her anymore?" he asked to the silence of the house. Then he remembered a couple of days ago when he was babysitting her for his parents. He smiled evilly and began writing.
The other day I realized my sister was obsessed with a video game. She wouldn't put it down. The game was Pokemon Silver (not very obsessable if you ask me). She screams at it and calls it an old man. She sees the game map like a map of the world. She thinks she can go to these places. She named the person in the game after her favorite person in the world, TK. She named her rival after her least favorite person, Davis. She pretends she's like his traveling companion (TK not Davis). So if you do these things then you are obsessed with the Pokemon game and you should seek help immediately before it can get you too.
Tai put his pencil down and smiled to himself thinking, 'Kari's going to kill me when she sees this. I'm wondering what the class'll think of it'. Meanwhile, Kari was busy writing her own school report entitled "Tai's Obsession: Sora" but that's a different story.
So what do you think? Good, bad, really crappy? I thought so. Review please. I know it sucks.