Title: The Flame
Author: PadawanObiWan
Summary: This is from Obi-Wan's POV, it's a poem, it takes place around Episode II or Episode III or even around Episode I if you want. I got the idea from that short little 20 second Obi-Wan commercial for Episode I. I wrote it in a few minutes, but I had it in my head all day, I don't think I left anything out.
Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars or the little Star Wars commercial I got the idea from. This doesn't even have to be Star Wars, change some words and it could be about anything.
Notes: I'm right now in the middle of an actual pre-Episode I Star Wars fic, that has Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon and five other Jedi (think Jedi Power Battles game cross with Jedi Council comic books and Jedi Apprentice books) I have the basic story (script is my main problem) and have started writing, but there's a lot of patch work to do yet...
And review, so I know if I do good with poems, so I know whether or not to attempt a poem again.
-----------------The Flame---------------------------------------
For over a thousand generations the flame has been well kept
Now there are those who wish to extinguish the flame
Only a few left keep the flame
What will happen when they're gone?
What will happen when I'm all alone?
What will happen when I stand alone?
I hold the flame
The flame of a dying age
What will happen when the flame is put out
How can I trust myself to stand alone?
Only one keeps the flame
What will happen when I'm gone?
Who will hold the flame?
Who then will stand alone?
Author: PadawanObiWan
Summary: This is from Obi-Wan's POV, it's a poem, it takes place around Episode II or Episode III or even around Episode I if you want. I got the idea from that short little 20 second Obi-Wan commercial for Episode I. I wrote it in a few minutes, but I had it in my head all day, I don't think I left anything out.
Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars or the little Star Wars commercial I got the idea from. This doesn't even have to be Star Wars, change some words and it could be about anything.
Notes: I'm right now in the middle of an actual pre-Episode I Star Wars fic, that has Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon and five other Jedi (think Jedi Power Battles game cross with Jedi Council comic books and Jedi Apprentice books) I have the basic story (script is my main problem) and have started writing, but there's a lot of patch work to do yet...
And review, so I know if I do good with poems, so I know whether or not to attempt a poem again.
-----------------The Flame---------------------------------------
For over a thousand generations the flame has been well kept
Now there are those who wish to extinguish the flame
Only a few left keep the flame
What will happen when they're gone?
What will happen when I'm all alone?
What will happen when I stand alone?
I hold the flame
The flame of a dying age
What will happen when the flame is put out
How can I trust myself to stand alone?
Only one keeps the flame
What will happen when I'm gone?
Who will hold the flame?
Who then will stand alone?