"I need a boy like yooooouuuuu," sang Alanna. She was listening to the radio and the Dixie Chicks were on. She continued singing, but started looking at herself in the mirror.
She was alone in the house, because her recently adopted parents had gone off to work, and she was still on summer break. Not caring that her braids were a knot of messy hair, or that her clothes were obviously pajamas, she went into the bathroom to brush her teeth.
After that she bounced out of there and flipped on the computer monitor.
"Mercy, say that you love me. No! That's not it; he can't propose this early in the story! It all wrong, isn't it Lion!" she said talking to the cat that had jumped up beside her.
Alanna looked at the monitor in disgust, she was on the Internet reading a story one of her friends had written. She started typing quickly down in the comment box. It was a good thing she always looked over her comments before she sent it, because she realized how mean it sounded, she couldn't post it were everyone would see; she'd be black balled for sounding so superior, people would give her unhappy smiley faces, mean ones!
No it would be best to just write Jon himself. She instant messes aged him rite away.
Lioness says:
Jon, how do you like the new name, my new kitten inspired it! Well we have to talk about your new story.
KingJon_456 says:
Hi Allana, ya the names cool. I just got this new name, for some strange reason my computer won't let me long onto my old name, so I had to get a new on. You wouldn't believe how many King Jon's there are! Enough of my prattle, what's wrong with the story this time?
Lioness says:
What's always wrong with your stories Jon? Your women are so weak! I mean how many women do you know that would say yes rite off the bat for some guy who just wants to get into their pants!
KingJon_456 says:
I'm sure many would
Lioness says:
How dare you! And it is not nice of you to put our relationship in that stupid story of yours!!!!!!!!!
KingJon_456 says:
Just cuz the main girl is easy doesn't mean I'm talking about you.
Lioness says:
you SOB!! I should have let a long time before I did, George respects me so there, and he's a better writer!!!!! Besides when I said our relationship I meant that you were using our whole story except for different names!!! And it did not go to you immediately!!! I am not that big of a slut!!
KingJon_456:
Well allana darling I must go soon, as much as I love your criticism...
Lioness:
Spell my name rite for goddess's sakes!! It's A L A N N A!!!! Not ALLANA!
"Hey Alanna, who you talking to?" George walked in, saw the look on Alanna's face and said simply, "Jon."
"George! Do you know what he's doing? He's turning my feeling into some charade in that stupid book of his!".... I might finish might not depends on the reviews.
She was alone in the house, because her recently adopted parents had gone off to work, and she was still on summer break. Not caring that her braids were a knot of messy hair, or that her clothes were obviously pajamas, she went into the bathroom to brush her teeth.
After that she bounced out of there and flipped on the computer monitor.
"Mercy, say that you love me. No! That's not it; he can't propose this early in the story! It all wrong, isn't it Lion!" she said talking to the cat that had jumped up beside her.
Alanna looked at the monitor in disgust, she was on the Internet reading a story one of her friends had written. She started typing quickly down in the comment box. It was a good thing she always looked over her comments before she sent it, because she realized how mean it sounded, she couldn't post it were everyone would see; she'd be black balled for sounding so superior, people would give her unhappy smiley faces, mean ones!
No it would be best to just write Jon himself. She instant messes aged him rite away.
Lioness says:
Jon, how do you like the new name, my new kitten inspired it! Well we have to talk about your new story.
KingJon_456 says:
Hi Allana, ya the names cool. I just got this new name, for some strange reason my computer won't let me long onto my old name, so I had to get a new on. You wouldn't believe how many King Jon's there are! Enough of my prattle, what's wrong with the story this time?
Lioness says:
What's always wrong with your stories Jon? Your women are so weak! I mean how many women do you know that would say yes rite off the bat for some guy who just wants to get into their pants!
KingJon_456 says:
I'm sure many would
Lioness says:
How dare you! And it is not nice of you to put our relationship in that stupid story of yours!!!!!!!!!
KingJon_456 says:
Just cuz the main girl is easy doesn't mean I'm talking about you.
Lioness says:
you SOB!! I should have let a long time before I did, George respects me so there, and he's a better writer!!!!! Besides when I said our relationship I meant that you were using our whole story except for different names!!! And it did not go to you immediately!!! I am not that big of a slut!!
KingJon_456:
Well allana darling I must go soon, as much as I love your criticism...
Lioness:
Spell my name rite for goddess's sakes!! It's A L A N N A!!!! Not ALLANA!
"Hey Alanna, who you talking to?" George walked in, saw the look on Alanna's face and said simply, "Jon."
"George! Do you know what he's doing? He's turning my feeling into some charade in that stupid book of his!".... I might finish might not depends on the reviews.