Inu Yasha wake up

(chap. 1)

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setting

Kagome has just packed her backpack with her home work, lots of food and gifts for Inu-Yasha, shippo, Sango and miroku. After she packs she looks at the time and noticed that it was 4:36 pm and she promised that she would be back by 3. Kagome grabs her backpack and runs to the well and jumps down. When she arrived in the other well Inu-Yasha fell right on top of her.

"Inu-Yasha what are you doing on top of me" said Kagome ready to make Inu-Yasha sit once he was off of her " I came to get you, you take so long besides you where supposed to be back more then an hour ago and we are in the middle of a battle with some dark preastest named, I don't have time for this come on Kagome we need to go" said Inu-Yasha angrily at Kagome grabbing her and putting her on his back.

When they got there Sango threw her hiedicoes at the preastest then suddenly she turned it back at her and Sango went flying and she hit a boulder knocking her out cold. "Sango" screamed Kagome " we must help her" then Inu-Yasha saw miroku heading toward Sango "I bet miroku will wake her up fast" said Inu-Yasha

Then the preastest said "Inu-Yasha you will join me in taking over the world" Inu-Yasha then went brain dead and threw Kagome off his back "Inu-Yasha" Kagome said. Inu-Yasha then threw down his tetsusagia and turned into a full fledged demon by the power of the preastest and she took his human soul and turned it into a soul ball and kept it in a special jar and said "soon I will get rid of his useless human soul then he will stay a full demon forever" she said with confidence.

Meanwhile miroku was trying to kiss Sango then she woke up fast and slapped him in the face as hard as she could. Sango said "Miroku what do you think you are doing" catching her breath. Miroku said "trying to" then he go stopped by Sango "I don't think I want to know" then they went over to Kagome and tried to get Inu-Yasha's soul back

Then Kagome went over to Inu-Yasha as he was transforming into a demon and said "Inu-Yasha I love you as a half demon remember" she tried kissing him to stop the transformation but it didn't work and he threw her down on the ground. Then he went off with the preastest and they went off and the preastest said " if you want his human soul to stay you will not follow" then Kagome sat up and screamed "INU-YASHA" then she started to cry saying "he is never coming back to me never never" crying her eyes out

Sango said " Kagoma will get him back some how don't doubt" then Kagoma had a flash bake of all the times she had with Inu-Yasha. Then Kagoma said "were going to get him back somehow" then Miroku snuck over to Sango and started to look at her funny then Sango said "miroku I would not kiss you if you were the last man on earth."

Then Kagome heard something in the distance that sounded like strong winds blowing then Kagome noticed it was Koga coming to see her then Koga said "hi there Kagome where is that mut that your always with, oh ya Inu-Yasha I think" then Kagome said "well he" then Koga said "never mind" where is Sango "I need to give her something" Miroku said "wait a minuet my dear man Sango is mine and I won't let you near her" Sango embarrassed said " miroku since when am I yours" Koga said "I don't have time for this and im not trying to steel her miroku, Sango I believe Kirara is yours" Sango where on earth did you find her" as happy as she could ever be then Miroku came up behind her and started to stroke her bottom then realizing that it was Shippo's bottom then Shippo said "miroku you're an idiot" then Koga went on telling Sango about how he found Kirara then he said " well I found this little rascal steeling my lunch." Sango replied "oh im so sorry Koga it won't happen again" then Koga said " its no biggie because then I can see Kagome more often"then Koga said "well I need to go now" then he went up to Kagome and held her hands and said "Kagome remember I always love you well by now see you around"

Then Kagome said " maybe if I shoot a sacred arrow it will hit the preastest even though she is far away because my arrows never miss" then Kagome took an arrow and shot it the miroku suddenly used wind tunnel to stop the arrow from flying then Kagome said "miroku why did you stop my arrow then miroku said " Kagome Inu-Yasha is now a full demon it could hi just as well as it could hit any other demon or dark preastest around" then Kagome said your right" feeling lousy then she picked up Inu-Yasha's tetsusagia and fell on her knees crying with the tetsusagia and said "Inu-Yasha ill get you back if it's the last thing I do because I love you, I love you Inu-Yasha"

people remember this is a love story so if you think this is going from happy, sad to happy quick its not so I'd recommend if you love to here love stories with drama and love to good to be broken this is the story for you!

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