H.A.: Hello. Due to a couple comments in the past, I'm reworking the first couple of chapters. I also have read more fanfictions and such so I'm getting better at contents and what not. Hope this will be better.
Disclaimer: I do not own Mortal Kombat or the real world; just my ocs.
"READY. FIGHT!"
Luna Mooneyes sat in her living room playing Mortal Kombat Armageddon. Her silver white hair was pulled back into a ponytail. She wore a green tank top with silver embroideries and a pair of green pants. Her silvery gray eyes were framed by her long bangs.
"REPTILE WINS!"
She smiled as her black cat, Komodo, came to the door. Komodo had been out for an hour hunting. When Luna opened the door, instead of coming in, Komodo ran the other way. She stopped by the forest edge and meowed. Luna blinked and quickly grabbed her coat and a flashlight. She then grabbed an umbrella, hearing thunder in the distance. As she walked into the rain, she shone the flashlight to where she last saw Komodo.
Komodo mewed before running into the forest. Luna grumbled a bit before running after her. The storm got worse the farther she walked. She eventually came to a small clearing in the forest. She shown her flashlight around to find Komodo's eye shine. She found the black cat sitting on a mound. She went to take a step forward, she tripped over another mound.
"What the he-" she started saying as she shown the light on the mound. She immediately became quiet when the light was reflected off of not wet dirt and grass but wet clothes and green scales. Luna blinked before she quietly walked over to the mound. She knelt down beside it and gently nudged it. She jumped back when it moved a little and gave a feint growl. She went to inspect it further but was interrupted by the meow of Komodo.
Luna shown the light over to komodo and was immediately stilled by the fact that the mound the cat was on was black and yellow with some metal accessories. She quietly walked over to the mound and gently poked it. She yelped when a gloved hand grabbed her wrist. She tried to yank her hand away but the grip proved too strong. She set the flashlight down and started to pry the fingers off. It took her a while before she managed to get free. She picked the flashlight back up and caught the glint of a double pointed knife. She paled seeing the said knife was attached to a rope.
'Impossible! There's no way it could be him!'
She slowly brought the light to the person's face but only saw a black hood. Luna brought the light over to the other mound and saw a clawed green hand. She notices another glint and shined the light over to it. Her eyes widened at the sight of a mean looking sword. She started to tremble before she heard a twig snap. She shone the light to the where she heard it. The first thing she saw was blue and a dragon medallion.
Luna slowly brought the light up and gulped. Staring her down with arms crossed was Sub-Zero. She noticed that he was wearing the clothes from the Mortal Kombat: Deception game. She slowly got up just before he took a step toward her. Out of pure instinct, she threw the umbrella at him and started running.
He grunted when it smacked him on the face and ran after her, yelling, "Wait! Come back!"
Luna kept running, not know that she was running deeper into the woods. She became momentarily blinded by a big flash of lightning. She lost her footing and fell over, hitting her head on a rock. As she started to lose conscious, she heard a twig snap and saw gentle glowing white eyes.
H.A.: and here is the new and improved chapter one. I hope you had enjoyed this one better than the first.