Hey! I know I'm a freaking tard. Don't hate, cuz I still love yoooooos(: then again, I don't have a reason to be mad at you like you do for me. ...Aaaaanyway, I have a reason why I haven't been on FF and updating. My relationship with my boyfriend, Diego, has gotten sorta serious. Well, serious for people at our age I mean. And we just celebrated our eight month anniversary(: yaaaaaay! Hehe too bad he doesn't know write stuffz like this or he'd be able to read it...ohh well haha *cough cough I love you Diego!(:* hey who said that?(; Back to this, the reason I'm putting this up here is because I want some opinions on this poem I wrote for Diego. I wrote it one night when he said "Goodnight sweetheart, I adore you" (: And here it is:
Adoration in Your Eyes
Only when I'm with you,
can I really do,
all the things I want to.
I can speak the truth,
tell absolutely no lies,
and you gaze at me,
with adoration in your eyes.
I feel no pain,
no anxiety,
because you're here,
you're always with me.
You cast away the dark,
let in only light,
so we can just have fun,
never ever fight.
Being with you,
is the easiest thing to do,
so natural,
so light.
Some would try to buy love,
but never you,
because you know
nothing you could buy,
would make me love you,
more than I do.
Because only when I'm with you,
can I really do,
all the things I want to.
I can free myself,
be the me I am inside,
and still you look at me,
with adoration in your eyes.
Haha yuup that's it. I wanted to get some feedback on it; I was wondering if it was good. If people like it, Ill post the other poems I wrote for him. But only a few because there are a lot.
Review please!
Mahal kita,
Locketful o' Heartache