Hello people! I'm already doin' 2 other stories but this one is just tell me what yeah think about the plot and I may continue.
Ps. Sorry about the character death I never wanted this to happen but it crept into my head and started forming. Pss. I have NEVER played Apollo Justice Ace Attorney. Mainly because I am on case 4 of Trials and Tribulations. Psss. I am crap at spelling any mistakes could they please be pointed out by the reader. Okay lets go...
It was a great night. Larry, Edgeworth and I played poker 'til the new year. Of course Trucy didn't get any sleep between fetching me grape juice every now and again or just telling us to be quiet. It was my first night being properly drunk. Like you try to walk but you fall over. It was Edgeworth's first time drinking alchol. But it felt empty and I told this to my friends.
"You may need to drink more." said Larry with that stupid smile of his plastered on his face.
"May-May-Maybe you miss M-M-Ma-whats-her-name." Edgeworth had had to much chatanuf de pape.
I realised it was Maya I missed... about ten minutes later because Larry and I were laughing so hard at Edgeworth. In my drunken state I got depressed and I asked my friends what they thought would happen if Maya stayed in L.A. They both said. "You'd have a wife and two kids."
That gave me a shock and made me more depressed. To cheer myself up I drank wine... with grape juice in it.
It was 2a.m in the morning and Larry was laughing at some story he was attemping to tell but half way through a sentance he would burst out laughing. Just then Apollo walked in. He played some poker and got totally wasted. I sent for a taxi for Larry and Edgeworth. I went back into the room we were playing in and started to tidy up, which is extremely hard when your drunk. After a while I gave up and talked to Apollo for a bit. Then it happened.
The door broke down and a cloud of dust was formed. In the doorway was a man in a long coat and a top hat. He reminded me of Gumshoe. He took out a pistol and took aim. I tackeled him to the ground and started punching him. Unfourtantly he was stronger than me and threw me back into the room and procced to through his own punches. Apollo hit the man on the head with a chair and that just enraged him. He started to assalt Apollo and I took action. I took a steel pole from an un-made baminton set and hit the man. He recoiled. He then took the pole off me and hit me over the head. I felt something gushing. My skull had cracked open. My vision was blured. It was the beginning of my death but I wasn't going to let it end there. I grabbed the mans arms while he was hitting Apollo and I screamed at him to leave and save himself. The man punched my once and I was knocked againist a cabinate. My vision was faiding everything was going black. I just saw the man tie a rope around Apollo's neck until my vision ended along with my life. Suddenly I saw her. In front of me was Mia. She smiled and helped me up and held my hand as I entered the light.
Okay now that thats done tell me what you think. Thank you in advance!