Ok enjoy and R&R even if it's a poem! :)
ME NO OWN BLEACH!
Remorse Unsaid
Looking at your sleeping face
With just a chance at waking
I can't help but wonder
What am I supposed to say?
That I'm sorry
Just doesn't seem to work
I should have been more careful
Thought things through more
Acted less reckless
No matter what
I could've done better
Not landed you in this coma
While I escape with a scratch or two
How's it fair?
What's strength worth?
If using it to protect one
Does the opposite
What does it matter?
If you're a quick thinker
If it turns to recklessness
And stupidity
What am I supposed to do?
I can't go back in time
I can't change my actions
Apologies aren't enough
They're just words
That can't grip the situation
To the full gratitude
Words are said
To help fix a problem
But without action mean nothing
And with closed eyes
You can't see an action
And I have no words
I am currently lost
In mind and remorse
Therefore nothing I say
Is worth more than regret
This current me
Has nothing to say
Not until I know
Exactly what I want
What I need
How to put it in words
The actions to show it
But nothing can happen
Until you wake up
Nothing can be fixed
Or solved
Not even broken
Unless you open your eyes
Nice little poem there! What do you think? If you look closely you can see the little bit of romance… I'm not really good with anything over the top mushy when it comes to poems. The poetry I write tends to be more angsty and depressing. This is one of the happiest poems I've written in a while and it's not that happy. R&R IT MAKES ME SMILE AND DANCE AROUND WITH JOY!