(please review)
A Friend
Once upon a time there lived a Kirby by the name of Kate. Kate was on her usual walk to the forest when she met a hamster by the name of Hamtaro. Kate and Hamtaro became friends and this is how the story started.
One sunny afternoon Kate and Hamtaro were having a picnic beside the Lost Woods. The Lost Woods is a never-ending forest with lots of evil creatures. Kate had invited Hamtaro to come explore the lost woods and Hamtaro was pleased.
It was now 1:00 in the afternoon and it was getting hotter and hotter by the minute. Kate and Hamtaro had just finished their lunch when all of a sudden a Pikachu came running out of the forest and slammed into Hamtaro and Kate. OUCH! Screamed Kate looking back at Hamtaro who was squished under Pikachu. The Pikachu jumped in horror as he never seen a Kirby in his life. Who are you? Shouted the Pikachu. My name is Kate said the Kirby and the Hamster is Hamtaro. The Pikachu opened his mouth and let out a gasp. My name is Pika said the Pikachu. Why are you running? Asked Kirby. Pikachu went silent and pointed towards the forest (to be continued)
When I get 3 reviews I will write Ch 2 and I will make it longer and more exiting. In your review you can give me an idea of what Pika is pointing at. Thanx for reading!
A Friend
Once upon a time there lived a Kirby by the name of Kate. Kate was on her usual walk to the forest when she met a hamster by the name of Hamtaro. Kate and Hamtaro became friends and this is how the story started.
One sunny afternoon Kate and Hamtaro were having a picnic beside the Lost Woods. The Lost Woods is a never-ending forest with lots of evil creatures. Kate had invited Hamtaro to come explore the lost woods and Hamtaro was pleased.
It was now 1:00 in the afternoon and it was getting hotter and hotter by the minute. Kate and Hamtaro had just finished their lunch when all of a sudden a Pikachu came running out of the forest and slammed into Hamtaro and Kate. OUCH! Screamed Kate looking back at Hamtaro who was squished under Pikachu. The Pikachu jumped in horror as he never seen a Kirby in his life. Who are you? Shouted the Pikachu. My name is Kate said the Kirby and the Hamster is Hamtaro. The Pikachu opened his mouth and let out a gasp. My name is Pika said the Pikachu. Why are you running? Asked Kirby. Pikachu went silent and pointed towards the forest (to be continued)
When I get 3 reviews I will write Ch 2 and I will make it longer and more exiting. In your review you can give me an idea of what Pika is pointing at. Thanx for reading!