hello guys! I'm new and I am only 10 years old so please don't be nasty I am a beginner.

some of u May know AxB love artists she is my sister and she is the . one who set me off on this so thank her this story's about Alvin and Brittany honeymoon and the other four go with them and they meet some other chipmunks

Any who, on with the story

chapter 1 - beginning of the honeymoon

In the middle of summer down in California, sailing on ice blue water...a cruise ship slowly travelled along the sea.

This ship wasn't just any old cruise ship for holidays, no! this week was special for a certain couple since they was on their honeymoon.

"Brittany babe u awake"Alvin mumbled

"yes now"Brittany said Brittany walked out in that sweet Morning walked Brittany to the front of the boat Alvin

" u are the most romantic person I ever met" she said

"I love u Brittany sevelle" Alvin whispered in her ear

"ALVIN WATCH OUT!"

the boat was heading right ahead for some spiky rocks, everybody shouted watch out! Brittany screamed "THE WHEEL"

within a second Alvin rushed to the wheel and tried to steer as good as he could but before he could turn the boat around BOOM! the full boat crashed into leaves. they all fell on an island

" oh no that's my honeymoon ruined a Bush branch was moving about and they all could sense something

"guys I smell something Alvin said.

a strange voice said um "HI"

they went on the other side off a tree they went round and a group of strange chipmunks was staring at them

"WHAT!" the leader said

"NOTHIN" " angrily said

"hiya I'm Charlene" ChArlene said

"we are the popular ettes" Alex said"I'm the leader of this group !

Alvin said "oh I'm the leader of these cool guys we a're Alvin and the chipmunk s"

"oh right the most FAMOUS chipmunks of them all, NOT!"

"HEY! Alvin shouted

"u can't even take a joke ha ha ha" Alex laughed

" SHUT UP! WANT A BET EH!"Alvin shot

Alex said "FIGHTIME!'..."

ok am sorry that it's cheap but don't forget I'm 10 ok so don't be meanmean, my sister helped so least it's better than I expected. :)

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