Hey, well this is my first fic soo please don't be soo harsh in your comments... well i'll be greatful if u guys lefts some helping tips so i can improve my work :)
i'm a big fan of SASU/SAKU. But I will make sure their will other pairings such as Naru&Hina, Neji&Tenten, etc.
please enjoy my hard work :P
P.S. I'm rating this M for Language and lets see what happens
AND SORRY FOR ANY SPELLING MISTAKES!!!! I'm kind of rusty with my english. ;
Disclaimer : i don't own Naruto (but i wish i do)
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A FRESH NEW START
To start off i'm writing about the characters like their personality, age, etc., etc.. (They look alike in Shippuden)
SAKURA HARUNO.
Gender Female
Age 17
Hair color Bubblegum Pink (Normal) / Dark Magenta (Choatic Phase)
Eyes Emerald Green (Normal) / Crismon Red (Choatic Phase)
Likes Sweets, Music, Hanging Out With Friends, Helping Others
Dislikes Selfish People, Death, Annoying Fanboys and Selfcentered Jerks.
Personality Loves To Help Others, shy is kind and sweet but is very aggresive when she is mad and speaks her mind.
About Her Her Father is an ANBU and looks up to him as a role model, always focusing on new jutus and obsesed with books. Had a struggling moment 2 years ago while learning new jutus with her wierd tutor who had one missing after the incident...(tune in to find out more XP)
HINATA HYUUGA.
Gender Female
Age 18
Hair color Indigo Purple
Eyes Lavander
Likes Kind People, Talking With Friends, A Certin Somebody...
Dislikes Mean and Pushly People
Personality SHY, always backs up and support her friends.
About Her Heiress of the Hyuuga Clan, from the main branch family, overprotective by her cousin and her father. Struggles to prove her father that she can lead her own life.
INO YAMANAKA.
Gender Female
Age 18
Hair Color Blonde
Eyes Light Blue
Likes Shopping, Parties, BOYS (Whatmore to say)
Dislikes Fanboys, Nasty and obsesed Fangirls and those who bugs her friends
Personality Loud and Flirty.
About Her Her Family owns a flower company which is nationalize throughout Japan. Always comes up with wierd plans, cheer up her friends.
TENTEN.
Gender Female
Age 18
Hair Color Chocolate Brown
Eyes Chestnut Brown
Likes Sparring, Sports, Outdoors, Weapons, Competing
Dislikes Lies, Being Alone, Girly Girls, Stuck-up guys
Personality Focuses on her goal, navïe when it comes to love, tomboy
About Her She was an Orphane ever since she was little but now her guardian is Anko however she actually looks at her as an older sister. She also has a nasty temper and shows looks of respect to others. She usually gets along with boys really fast.
SASUKE UCHIHA
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair Color Raven Black / (cured mark form just like Shippuden)
Eyes Onyx Black / (cured mark form just like Shippuden)
Likes Heavy Music, Training, Tomatos
Dislikes Sweets, Fangirls, Every Every annoying people, Oorchimaru
Personality Cold and distant, only longers for revange and too find his long lost brother. Sometimes cocky and ignorant.
About Him Came from the wealthy Uchiha Clan however it was wiped out by a S ranked Crimenal named Oorchimaru. The only surviors were him and his older brother Itachi, who is now missing. Both he and Naruto were taken in by Kakashi Hadate as their guardian. He only cares about his revenge, which is to kill the madman who left him with the cured mark. Hates to see the people he truely cares in suffering and refuses any help from anybody. Often called the Human Ice Cube by his friends and isn't talkative.
NARUTO UZUMAKI.
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair color Glodden Yellow
Eyes Cersurlian Blue / Blood Red (Kyuubi form)
Likes RAMEN, RAMEN, RAMEN
Dislikes Seeing his friends hurt
Personality LOUD, talks alot about Ramen and veryy energectic
About Him He holds the Kyuubi Demon within him ever since he was born. Was taken in by Kakashi Hadate along with Sasuke, who is his bestfriend and thinks of him as a brother. He is a man of his world and dreams of being the next Hokage.
NEJI HYUUGA.
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair color Dark Brown
Eyes Lavander (Much more lighter than Hinita's)
Likes Training
Dislikes Fangirls, annoying people, failure
Personality Cold and Distant almost as Sasuke, isn't talkative. Also veryy serious.
About Him Known as the Hyuuga Proligy but between this friends "The Walking Iceberg". A man of few words. Part of the Branch family of the Hyuyga Clan but is determined to lead the Clan and change its rules.
SHIKAMARU NARA.
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair color Dark Brown
Eyes Black
Likes Looking at clouds, sleeping, a very fluffy pillow and chess
Dislikes Getting up early, troublesome people
Personality very laidback, lazy, thinks everything is troublesome, genius
About HIm He speacializes in strategies, in general.. an O.K. all around guy.
ROCK LEE.
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair Color Black
Eyes Black
Likes Everything that is Youthful
Dislikes Everything that is not Youthful
Personality Very happy and energetic.
About Him His Idol is Gai Maito and does everything in the name of Youth. He can't perform any jutus and always wear green spandex.
CHOUJI AKIMICHI.
Gender Male
Age 18
Hair color Chestnut Brown
Eyes Brown
Likes FOOD
Dislikes Somebody eating the last BBQ potato chip, people calling him fat, which is Taboo.
Personality Happy and cheerful and is constantly hungry and eating.
About Him His famly owns a widerange of buffets around Japan and their own medicine products. Gets VERY ANGRY when people call him fat.
Friends and Doubts
How time flies when you're having fun in the sun with your friends. That what 4 BBF realized on the last day of their summer holidays sitting on the beach enjoying watching the last summer sunset. Ready to start a new school, in a new crowd, "new boys" this year together. All of are about eighteen years old (i know TenTen is older but i kind of cut down a few years from her real age:p) but their no ordinary teenage girls. These Fab 4 are ninjas, special in their own different way with different backrounds.
Enjoying a tradition, celebrating their friendship, sitting next to a bonfire and talking about the latest gossip. As tradition, they always count down from 5 to 1 as the last summer sun sets and later cheer for thier friendship bonds.
" 5 !"
" 4 !"
" 3 !"
" 2 !"
" 1 !" the four screamed
The girls cheered and shouted not caring what the other people thought of them.
" I can't believe the summer has finished so quickly" said the pink color hair girl with sparkling emerald eyes sitting down on her pink cherry blossom beach towel.
" Yea Sakura, it seems like yesterday we've just begun our vacation" added the blonde girl looking at the coast with her piercing light blue eyes.
" It happened all so quickly. I'm soo nervous for tomarrow...ii--iii mean school and everything.." said the shy indigo hair girl with lavander eyes.
" Don't worry Hinata, we'll all be in this together and if anybody causes us problems we'll just kick their ass !" remarked the brunette with chocolate colored eyes with her fist in the air.
" Hey, you know what we should do now!" jumped up energetic blonde.
" What Ino ?" asked Sakura.
" We'll make a vow. From here on we'll stick together, help each other out and won't let any fight or guy... even though he is a complete hottie, ruin our friendship. All in favor say HAI " said Ino.
" HAI !" said the girls at the same time.
" HOLY SHIT! I got 5 minutes to get back home. So Hinata your going to pick us up tomorrow, right? " asked TenTen.
"Of course I will " answered Hinata with a bright smile. "AH! I have to go too or my dad is gonna ground me. Bye."!
As TenTen And Hinata left, Ino was putting out the bonfire as Sakura was putting away all of her beach gear in her beach buggie. It was black with pink cherry blossoms on the side. In the interior there were light pink leather seats with black lines over it. Both of the girls got in and hooked up Ino's light blue I pod nano singing to " Date With The Night" by the Yeah Yeah Yeahs. As they were heading to Ino's place to drop her off they spotted a group of guys crossing the street.
" HOTTIE Alert " shouted Ino, " I hope our new 'classmates' are as hot as those ones right there." while checking out the laid back guy.
" I hope so too. " giggled Sakura checking out the mysterious raven head guy with a hair cut that could be compared to a bird which was kind of funny. During the way to Ino's house, the two girls talked about their relationship in the past and the adventures they had when they were younger. Sakura realize how she improved her self-esteem and confidence in herself ever since she had met Ino, Hinata and Ten Ten and also learn how to defend herself from others.
" Thanks for the ride FOREHEAD !" Ino waved to Sakura.
" No problem, see ya INO-PIG !" She shouted at the Yamanaka. After leaving the blond, she started to worry a bit about her secret. Wondering if she could tell anybody about it and afraid if they'll reject or outcast her by it. Nobody knows of her dark secret. As she reaches for her left shoulder. There appears a mark which appeared as a symbol. It was like a outline of a small sun with a black crescent moon inside it. Sometimes she felt a some pain from it and other strange phenomenons occur to her during a mission a couple of months ago. That mark appeared while she was training with her weird ex-tutor, studying and experimenting new tecnics using the help some scrolls, which were lended by him. She told everybody it was only a tattoo so nobody wouldn't suspect something else, however, her parents were furious when they saw it. Sakura was also thinking about sharing a dorm with somebody. That really worries her a lot especially if they find out her secret! She was sweating just thinking about it.
----SAKURA'S HOUSE---
As the Kunoichi gets ready for the big day tomorrow, she starts to pack her stuff to move to her new dorm. She was so excited of moving out from her parents house and to live with her friends in the school's dorms. While packing, she found her old photo album. Flicking through the pages and going by memory lane "Man how the years go by. And to think all of these years I had sticked with these guys". She stopped packing and started to read her old school year book's student profile chapter.
" Sakura Haruno : Medic-nin, pocesses inhuman strength using chakra, very good chakra control. In overall a good student. Hinata Hyuuga :processes Byakugan, letting her to see what no ordinary human eye can, Hard worker and talented in genjutsu. TenTen (sorry guys I don't know Tenten's last name): a.k.a. weapon mistress; her tecnics are mostly based on weapons and can summon a large sum of weapons simultaneity. Shows determination training. Ino Yamanaka: uses mind control jujitsu, can transport her mind into other bodies..." she closed the book as she her mother calling her.
"SAKURA!!" Her mom yelled.
" WHAT"?
" HURRY UP AND FINISH PACKING UP, IT'S GETTING LATE AND GO TO SLEEP"!
"OK"!
"I can't believe I'm going to the Hidden Leaf Academy" Sakura shrieked in her mind
"yeah baby, we're going big!!"
"who are you and why are you in my head??"
"I'm your inner"
"I didn't know had a inner"
" Well get use to it. We are going to rock in this new school!"
" Hey don't get so cocky about that"
"Why, know you're thinking about it 'cause I'm you"
"No I'm not"
"Yes you are"
"NO I'm NOT"
"YES YOU ARE!"
"NO"
"YES!"
" I can't believe I'm arguing with myself, I'm i going insane?!"
"Yes"
"Shut up, I don't wanna talk to you anymore!"
"I'll be back"
After a confusing argument with herself, Sakura finished packing her belongings and changed into her spaghetti strap pink cherry pattern nightgown. She realize this was going to be her last night in her room until maybe Christmas break. The night seemed never ending. Her head was filled with doubts and worrys. She toss and turned but still she couldn't sleep, all she was doing was thinking about tomarrow, her first day in a new different school. She was scared, what if she doesn't seem to fit in but she knew she wasn't alone. She has Ino, Hinata and Ten Ten, her best friends who will back her up in anything and be there for her. With only that piece of fact, most of her worries faded away. And finally she drifted of in her pleasant slumber...not.
"Where am I? asked Sakura looking for her friends. All she saw was a school hall room with lockers and doors leading to different rooms. She started walking down the hall staring around her surroundings wondering where she is. She saw a big poster saying ' Welcome students to the Hidden Leaf Academy. Have a pleasant year'. "I must be at my new school but where's everybody?" 'RINGGGGGGG'. As the schools bell rung all of the doors opened and let out a sea of students rampaging down the hall where Sakura was. The kunoichi started to run down the hall but it seems that it would never end. She quickly got into a room. The room was silent and dark. She could hardly see where she was going.
Sakura found the lightswicth and turned it on. To her misfortune, she was on the school's theater stage facing all of the students. "Hey everybody look, that pink haired girl is wearing a pink I Love Barney pj's!" yell a guy from the crowd. (i don't have nothing against Barney. I wrote it cause it's kind of embarrassing to be in that situation.) The audience was roaring with laughter and pointing at the humiliated girl. Sakura couldn't believe what had happened. She just wanna escape from here and hide under a rock. All of a sudden, the lights went out but she still could hear her humiliation. Suddenly she felt some pain from her mark and let out a loud cry of pain as something was bursting out from her back...
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...!"
"..."
Sakura woke up panting and sweating from her horrible nightmare. She look around to see she was in her bedroom wearing her pink cherry pattern nightgown. Realizing it was all a twisted dream, she grabbed her alarm clock saying ' 6:13 a.m.. In about an hour, Hinata was going to pick up Sakura in her Chevrolet HHR SS Turbo.
"Thank kami it was only a dream." muttered Sakura holding her pillow tightly. She got up to take a shower. Always when she takes a shower, she turns on her stereo and plays one of her favorite bands. In the shower she was listening and singing to Sum 41 'Over My Head'.
"What happened to you But if I try to make sense of this mess I'm in
You've played the victim for so long now in this game
What I thought was true
Is made of fiction and I'm following the same
I'm not sure where I should begin
I'm fallin'
I'm fallin'"
"SAKURA HARUNO, TURN DOWN THAT VOLUME THIS INSTANT, IT 6:30 A.M. FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI!" shouted angerly her mom.
Sakura finished with her shower and turned down a bit the volume but she kept singing while she went to get dressed. She went over to her closet to see what was she going to wear. While searching for what she was going to wear Sakura looked at the mirror and saw something different on her tattoo or should I say mark. It looked like it was glowing a crimson red color. It had a burning sensation once she touched it. After that it stopped. "What was that? This never happened before?" Looking at the clock she forgot about what had happened and started to throw clothes on her bed finding what to wear. She had to pick the perfect outfit cause first impressions are important. Then she remember that more than half of the cloths she owned were in her suitcase. She grabbed her dark demin jeans that has like a worn out design on it and her red collar 3/4 dress-shirt, leaving three buttons undone, with a black pin-stripped vest. And the finishing touch was her black converse and she kept listening to the song.
"Now I'm in over my head
with something I said
Completely misread
I'm better off dead
And now I can see
How fake you can be
This hypocrisy is beginning to get to me"
Sakura turned of the music and went to check if she got everything. She grabbed her fully recharged lime green ipod and her wallet. She was ready to go. It took her some time to go down the stairs with her luggage and her black backpack with a AC/DC and Silverstein patches sew on it but she manged to go down stairs. As she went down stairs, she saw her mom preparing breakfast and her dad getting ready for a mission. Sakura's dad was part of a elite league of ninjas called ANBU. She admires her dad and proud to be his daughter. Her mom ,retired of being a Jounin ever since Sakura was born but worked in St. Konoha Hospital as a doctor, prepared a feast as this was going to Sakura's last breakfast at home for a quite a long time$ and that the trip to the academy was a long way too.
" So my little konichi, are you ready for your first day?" asked her dad.
"Hai, but I'm kinda nervous"
"You know, i went there when i was your age."
"Really? i didn't know"
"Yes, I've your mom there." looking at Sakura's mom making her blush " You could say it was love at first sight."
" How romantic."Sakura giggled watching how her mom become beet red.
"Well, hurry up you two and eat up before your pancakes gets cold." her mom quickly changed to the subject. "Ah and Sakura, whats with all that screaming early this morning?"
"Ahhhh...nothing," she quickly answered, " Just a bad dream."
20 minutes later
"BEEP BEEP"
"Oh that must be Hinata" said Sakura
"Be careful, good luck, study, have fun and have a safe trip" her mother told Sakura
"AND BE CAREFUL WITH BOYS!" her father said with deadly glare
"Don't worry guys, I'm going to be fine. I can handle anything"
"If only i could believe that." He muttered silently causing his wife to giggle of his statement.
Sakura kissed her parents good-bye, grabbed her stuff and left the house. helping her load her suitcases in the car was Tenten. She was wearing a light brown cargo pants, a sporty long sleeved chocolate and white shirt and black Vans. The car was packed with dozen of junk. Luckily her luggage fit perfectly, thank Kami Hinata's car is big. Ino called shotgun, she was wearing a denim low cut capri, a long navy blue sweater that exposed a bit her shoulders and blue matching flip flops. Hinata was driving; she was wearing a casual light blue jeans, a lavender v neck 3/4 shirt that complimented her eyes and a pair of indigo All-Stars; and Both Sakura and Tenten were sitting in the back seats. It was already 7:30 a.m..
"Sorry were late Sakura-chan, we were umm... off schedule." said Hinata
"What do you mean by WE, Ino took forever to leave her house." pointed out Ten Ten
" Hey, I wasn't ready!" exclaimed Ino glaring at Ten Ten
" It's ok, What counts is that your here. Now lets get this show on the road!" said happily Sakura.
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Well here's the first chapter. I hope you viewers like it. Please don't be really harsh, this is my first fanfic. I'm open to any suggestions or advice to help me improve my work. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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