hello names naoeNamikaze or naoe for short and this is me trying to make a decent fic comment on what I should add a change but please to be too harsh I really don't write at all now enjoy
we see an pool of blood growing in the middle of an alleyway said blood belongs to a boy of the age of 15 with hair looking like the shiniest of silver or it did but it has gotten darker because of all the dirt and blood he wears a white t-shirt and a pair of ripped jeans and he got a hole in his chest as he dies out from blood loss he starts to think to himself 'so this is how I die in an alleyway alone and no
energy to call for help well it's not like I have anyone to call anyway's the boy is an orphan and his real parents left him because they wanted a daughter as he thinks about the past he died from blood loss
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all of a sudden he wakes up in a dark room ¨what the f##k¨ reason for him to curse besides him somehow being alive is because of what's in front of him
GAME OVER
huh he thinks to himself ¨what's going on¨ he mumbles to himself or he thought he did as but he hears a voice from above ¨hmmm isn't this interesting a mortal in my domain?¨ the boy looks to see a figure but can't tell its gender….. wait! did it call me mortal the boy to himself ¨yes i called you mortal but because you died too early for a reason i did ill shall gift you with a really special power and send you to a new world maybe there you can get a better life Leo¨ the now said boy called Leo askt ¨can I pick which world I get transported to?¨ Leo asked and he saw the figure nod and a list came up
konosuba
hyperdimension neptunia
highschool dxd
yu gi oh
pokemon
digimon
beyblade
harry potter
naruto
bleach
one piece
fruit of grisaia
highschool of the dead
also looked at the list and picked hyperdimension neptunia
as soon as he chose it a portal got him
[Location gamindustri lowee forest]
as Leo landed on his feet the snow made a crunch sound as he looked at the wonderful sight something popped up
*hello master I am Neo your guide for the power you got say or think menu to start* as Leo saw the text he thought this looked familiar and thought 'menu' as soon as he did that a set on options came before his eyes
Status
Options
personal ID
Relationships
Achievements
*Now master I really don't have to explain what any of those options do so experiment with them*
PING
.Tutorial quest.
Neo tasks you with experimenting with the menu
visited:status (0/1)
visited: Options (0/1)
visited: Personal ID (0/1)
visited: Relationships (0/1)
visited: Achievements (0/1)
Rewards starter gear of choice lvl 1 gear 1000 Credits 2 hp pot/mp pot
exp:100
As he read the stuff in front of him he grew more and giddier just to try this and said ¨Status¨…..
done please review and tell me what i can do to make it more enjoyable.