Well this is my first try here in ff.net in the digimon item. Be good with
me please cause I´m just a poor girl that by the way is trying to practice
her english before she forgot how to spell it. So sorry about my grammar,
and my spelling and everything that is involve with that.
If you like my story I´m your friend, if you don't well .. I want to tell me why you doesn´t you like it, or maybe if you want to suggest anything, just leave a review or send me a mail, or do smoke signs or whatever you want.
I try to do this chapter light and i think I did it, but let me tell you that I love violence and I want to make the characters suffer but I reserve the violence and the blood for the next chapter, why? Well because this chapter is from Kouichi´s point of view, and the next one I´m going to do it from Kouji´s point of view.
I don't know if you notice but I love the twins, and twins storys and everything related to them.
Well now to the story, and remember...... be nice with me!!!!!!!!
Shatered Mirror
Chapter one: Strange things
Did you ever have the strange feeling that you are in some strange way incomplete? That a part of you is missing? Sometimes this just look weird and an truthfull but you just don't know. it could happen to you. But maybe it is not just a feeling.. Maybe it is a fact. or it could come real..
The truth is the this feeling or strange sensation was very common in a boy, that never felt the necesity of something or love, because he recives the love of his mother all the day, since he wakes up until he is sleep again. In fact Kouichi was the perfect kind of son, the kind of kid every mother wants to have, not because he was a good boy that always help his mother in everything she need, he also had good marks, was a good friend, and was good in everything he began to do, but someone told once "nobody is perfect" and that was Kouichi´s case. His heart doesn´t have only love, he also have an incredible hate for the man that was his father because he know that he left his mother apart just to marry with other woman, of course that mean that he doesn´t love his mother enough and he doesn´t care for him neither .
"Kouichi, wake up honey. It´s time to go to school"
" Ok don't worry I´m up already" said Kouichi starting to get dress.
"I will wait you to eat breakfast together"
"No have to wait, I´m ready"
After they finished the breakfast Kouichi grab his schoolpack, and began to run for clases, he didn´t need to take the bus because school was two blocks away from his house, but he has to hurry up if he wants to buy some candy in the shop next to school. So he run so fast that he feels that he couldn´t breath anymore, he was exaust, he enter into the store that was property of Mr. Yoshima, a good friend of him.
"You are on time. Let me guess..uhmm maybe a candy bag?"
"You always know" that was the only thing he said cause something or someone caught his attention. A girl of his size with a triangle shawl in his head run out of the store in full speed, but in the runaway she collide with him. Something in his mind tell him to try to grab the girl and he did it but the little girl were faster tha him and she runaway.
Mr. Yoshima help Kouichi to get up and give him the candy - "this is the third time in the week that this girl came here and stole food, The truth is that I don't want to stop her, she must be very hungry to do that the poor girl."
"Yeah, but the way I have never seen him, she must be new in this part of the city".
"Don't you have go to your clases?"
"Yes! I´ll see you later. And If you see she again ask her name, maybe we could help him" said Kouichi meanwhile his head was thinking other things, for a moment he seems to watch in the girl a perfect mirror. Could it be a coincidence?
Kouichi enter in his classroom just in time the teacher came in. Clases were as normal as everyday, but something was upseting him, he doesn´t know what or why but he suddenly have the neccesity of doing something. he needs to yell but why? And then like and answer of his own question he feel it, and intense pain, a pain in his arm but why if he didn´t hit with anything. He didn´t notice it yet but the hole class was looking at him. Did he yell of the cause of his arm pain?
"What´s the matter Kouichi? Is something wrong?" his math teacher ask him. He didn´t know what to answer and the he did it, he instincively grab his arm and take a quick look, and what he saw nearly made him faint. His arm has a very big bruise, a green, black and blue bruise.
"Oh. no it´s nothing, it´s just. that I. bit myself" all the class start laughing - " Don't worry It wont happen again" .
"I hope that Mr. Kimura, what can I only do is to suggest you and your classmates to stop laughing and pay attention to the class of today cause maybe you will need it for tomorrow´s test". Said the teacher in a very angry tone. - "That´s all for today" and he go away.
Classes finished and he walk away, he doesn´t know why did he feel so empty. He knows that something wasn´t ok and he must know why. He began to walk but this time his feet were moving alone and when he look up he found himself in a street very far from his house, in fact this part of the city doesn´t look very nice. Then his eyes look at one house in particular, the windows were broken, and the door seems very old. It was the first time that he sees this house but it was strangely familiar, but how?
Suddenly the door open and a drunken man get out of the house, his instinct told him "hid now" and he run to hide behind a trash can was next door, the man pass near him and he could smell him, it was disgusting. He look at the man that walk down the street with a funny walking just like if he was going to hit the floor in any moment.
He didn´t know why did he feel safe too. Is this man a trouble? For the man´s face he could said that he wasn´t a good person and he suddenly find out that his judge was right. Just a few minutes later a girl that Kouichi recognize as the girl of the store, she came out of the house. Her arm was broken cause it describe and imposible angle, her body was very thin and her face was all cover by bruises, and she was trying to make her hair cover her battered face. She looks so really bad he thought but when he look again the girl wasn´t there anymore, Where did she could go? He try to look for her but it was in vain, she wasn´t there anymore. Who hit the girl? His father? Was the drunken man his father? He couldn´t do anything more there so he decide to return to his home, with his mother.
When he return to his house he found his mother worry about him. He always told everything to his mother but this time he prefer not to tell her what he had seen. But suddenly and he doesn´t know why he ask for his father.
" Mom , who was my father? Where did he live?"
Of course his mother wasn´t expecting this kind of question in that moment - "Why do you want to know?"
"uhm Don't know. It´s just that I have never seen him or a photo at least"
" Well Kouichi your father was a very complicate man, I don't know anything of him since.." Was she crying - "since. oh I´ve never tell you this before, maybe is better for you to seat down. Well you see, your father and I where arguing for something about money so I tell him that if he doesn´t want to coperate with the house economy he could get out of the house that I does´t need him and I could do it by my own, and so he did. But that is not the bad part. before he go he grab your brother and hi told me that I would never see them again." By this point she was crying openly - "of course I call the police, but they never found them. A friend of I told me once that he saw him in a town but he never so your brother. So I went there, to that town and began the search there But I never found them."
"So they just dissapear?" he couldn´t belive what his mother said, he has a brother in some part of the world -"how old was my brother?"
"So you just don't remember anything of him?. Well he was your twin brother, you are the big brother you know? All this complicate story happen when you to were less than a year old".
"Just one thing more." - his mother look at him with tears in her eyes waiting for the next question - ".did you have any photo of him?"- something on his mind tell him that the mistry will be solve in a minute, he could sense it.
"Yes I have a photo of him, it is in that box under the magazines, I put there all his junk. When you finish with it we will eat, ok honey?"
"yes mom, and don't worry about the mess, I´ll put everything in order" said kouichi while he opens the box and found what he was looking for. Ther was a man, a very tall man, with muscles, black hair like him and his brother too. He had black eyes, the way he look at the camera was like he was desafiant, proud, very tipical of a nasty person like he. By now he hate his father more than yesterday. But there was something that was upseting him more and it was the kind of future that had his brother. What was he doing now? Was he alright? He just doesn´t now. What he just only hope is that he is fine. Could it be possible?
A week has past but now he walk looking everyway, trying to catch the face of his brother somewhere, he of course now that it was in a way impossible but in other way that was a desesparate wish to find his brother, a wish that seems more like a hope. He was beggining to loose that hope when somethin at first strange happen.
He was walking to the supermarket just to buy some groserys when someone, a boy about his age wave him. He get closer to the boy because maybe they know each other, but it wasn´t that. He had never seen that boy. The kid have a yellow cap, brown hair, chocolate eyes, and a big smile. He look at him as if he know him of a live.
"So here you are! Wow I hope I will never see you again. Wow you cut your hair! I really think you´ll never do that!! So. What were you doing mate??"
"Sorry..but I don't know. You are?"- of course the other boy look s little confuse cause he look at him with a What? Face.
"Well. aren´t you Minamoto? If you are not then belive me that you have a twin! My name is Takuya and I thought you were my friend Kouji. Let me tell you that you look just exactly like him, but who knows coincidece really exist!!"
"You said that you know a boy, a boy that looks exactly like me, an the boys name is Kouji Minamoto? Where did you know him? Did he lives around here? Is he fine? What did you know about him?"
"Wow wow slow down. Well first of all he looks exactly like you, and his name is Kouji Minamoto. I Know him in school since we were 6 years old, but he move with his father to who knows where and I don't know anything more." Said the boy looking at him like he where testing him. - "And you are?".
"My name is Kimura, Kouichi Kimura"
"You have similar names, this is fantastic!"
"I wouldn´t say that. Sure you doesn´t know anything more about him?-he was sure this boy know something more. - "Cause you know. he could be my lost brother."
"Oh God! So that´s the reason.. You are so similar. oh God. Then you. well you are very lucky for not know your father then"
"Why did you said that? Is something wrong?"
"Wrong?!! Oh God, first of all I think you have to sit down. I´m one of the fewest person if I´m not the only one that know Kouji enought to know what happen with him. Your father hit him everyday nobody knows why, sometimes kouji goes to school with bruises, or broken arms, or with bandages in his head, sometimes the beatings were so hard that he couldn´t go to school in days, he couldn´t even walk, I know this because I went to visit him after school. Sometimes we share my lunch because Kouji could pass days without eating."
"And did you do anything for help him? I mean you were his friend"
"Yes, I told it to my mom, to the police officer, to everyone in the town. At first no one belive me, but when they went to check him. there was no one in the house. They have move. I didn´t believe that so I enter but it was true. The police found blood in the floor and a lot of things of Kouji too. It seems for everyone that they runaway. I have the opportunity to grab somethings of him, some of his strange drawings, maybe you want to see them. My new house is a few blocks of here, if you have time now."
"I´ll go" - that was good at least he had a clue about his brother, is he is lucky he is not dead.
When they arrive to Takuya`s house they went upstairs running. He saw takuya´s mother that look at him without beliving.
"See Takuya, your friend is allright"
"Mom He is Not Kouji, he is his twin brother Kouichi"
" Nice to meet you madam"
" Come here Kouchi, is this way." Kouichi follow Takuya. The bedroom was big, he was looking everything in the room when suddenly takuya show the drawings to him.- "here they are, they are a little strange, cause he told me that he never have been here, he told me that he dream it one night"
But the drawings where not strange for Kouichi. What Kouji dream was his live, Kouichi´s live with his mother. One othe drawings where the living room of his house, there in the couch was sitting a woman that obviously was their mother, and Kouichi; other picture was a picnic day one of the many picnics he has with his mother. But this picture was especial. In the picnic his mother was carring a boy that had fell, the boy was crying. But there was a picture the last one that was the more strange. It was the face of the boy. But if you look closer there were two boys. One half have short hair like him and the other half has long hair, long black and silk hair. That hair look very familiar to him but by now he couldn´t remember from where.
Well this is all for now. What do you guys think. Should I continue with it? Or I try to do with other kind of story? And this is the part when you press that bottom under this lines that said "submite review" so go there and tell me sothething PLEASE!!!!!
If you like my story I´m your friend, if you don't well .. I want to tell me why you doesn´t you like it, or maybe if you want to suggest anything, just leave a review or send me a mail, or do smoke signs or whatever you want.
I try to do this chapter light and i think I did it, but let me tell you that I love violence and I want to make the characters suffer but I reserve the violence and the blood for the next chapter, why? Well because this chapter is from Kouichi´s point of view, and the next one I´m going to do it from Kouji´s point of view.
I don't know if you notice but I love the twins, and twins storys and everything related to them.
Well now to the story, and remember...... be nice with me!!!!!!!!
Shatered Mirror
Chapter one: Strange things
Did you ever have the strange feeling that you are in some strange way incomplete? That a part of you is missing? Sometimes this just look weird and an truthfull but you just don't know. it could happen to you. But maybe it is not just a feeling.. Maybe it is a fact. or it could come real..
The truth is the this feeling or strange sensation was very common in a boy, that never felt the necesity of something or love, because he recives the love of his mother all the day, since he wakes up until he is sleep again. In fact Kouichi was the perfect kind of son, the kind of kid every mother wants to have, not because he was a good boy that always help his mother in everything she need, he also had good marks, was a good friend, and was good in everything he began to do, but someone told once "nobody is perfect" and that was Kouichi´s case. His heart doesn´t have only love, he also have an incredible hate for the man that was his father because he know that he left his mother apart just to marry with other woman, of course that mean that he doesn´t love his mother enough and he doesn´t care for him neither .
"Kouichi, wake up honey. It´s time to go to school"
" Ok don't worry I´m up already" said Kouichi starting to get dress.
"I will wait you to eat breakfast together"
"No have to wait, I´m ready"
After they finished the breakfast Kouichi grab his schoolpack, and began to run for clases, he didn´t need to take the bus because school was two blocks away from his house, but he has to hurry up if he wants to buy some candy in the shop next to school. So he run so fast that he feels that he couldn´t breath anymore, he was exaust, he enter into the store that was property of Mr. Yoshima, a good friend of him.
"You are on time. Let me guess..uhmm maybe a candy bag?"
"You always know" that was the only thing he said cause something or someone caught his attention. A girl of his size with a triangle shawl in his head run out of the store in full speed, but in the runaway she collide with him. Something in his mind tell him to try to grab the girl and he did it but the little girl were faster tha him and she runaway.
Mr. Yoshima help Kouichi to get up and give him the candy - "this is the third time in the week that this girl came here and stole food, The truth is that I don't want to stop her, she must be very hungry to do that the poor girl."
"Yeah, but the way I have never seen him, she must be new in this part of the city".
"Don't you have go to your clases?"
"Yes! I´ll see you later. And If you see she again ask her name, maybe we could help him" said Kouichi meanwhile his head was thinking other things, for a moment he seems to watch in the girl a perfect mirror. Could it be a coincidence?
Kouichi enter in his classroom just in time the teacher came in. Clases were as normal as everyday, but something was upseting him, he doesn´t know what or why but he suddenly have the neccesity of doing something. he needs to yell but why? And then like and answer of his own question he feel it, and intense pain, a pain in his arm but why if he didn´t hit with anything. He didn´t notice it yet but the hole class was looking at him. Did he yell of the cause of his arm pain?
"What´s the matter Kouichi? Is something wrong?" his math teacher ask him. He didn´t know what to answer and the he did it, he instincively grab his arm and take a quick look, and what he saw nearly made him faint. His arm has a very big bruise, a green, black and blue bruise.
"Oh. no it´s nothing, it´s just. that I. bit myself" all the class start laughing - " Don't worry It wont happen again" .
"I hope that Mr. Kimura, what can I only do is to suggest you and your classmates to stop laughing and pay attention to the class of today cause maybe you will need it for tomorrow´s test". Said the teacher in a very angry tone. - "That´s all for today" and he go away.
Classes finished and he walk away, he doesn´t know why did he feel so empty. He knows that something wasn´t ok and he must know why. He began to walk but this time his feet were moving alone and when he look up he found himself in a street very far from his house, in fact this part of the city doesn´t look very nice. Then his eyes look at one house in particular, the windows were broken, and the door seems very old. It was the first time that he sees this house but it was strangely familiar, but how?
Suddenly the door open and a drunken man get out of the house, his instinct told him "hid now" and he run to hide behind a trash can was next door, the man pass near him and he could smell him, it was disgusting. He look at the man that walk down the street with a funny walking just like if he was going to hit the floor in any moment.
He didn´t know why did he feel safe too. Is this man a trouble? For the man´s face he could said that he wasn´t a good person and he suddenly find out that his judge was right. Just a few minutes later a girl that Kouichi recognize as the girl of the store, she came out of the house. Her arm was broken cause it describe and imposible angle, her body was very thin and her face was all cover by bruises, and she was trying to make her hair cover her battered face. She looks so really bad he thought but when he look again the girl wasn´t there anymore, Where did she could go? He try to look for her but it was in vain, she wasn´t there anymore. Who hit the girl? His father? Was the drunken man his father? He couldn´t do anything more there so he decide to return to his home, with his mother.
When he return to his house he found his mother worry about him. He always told everything to his mother but this time he prefer not to tell her what he had seen. But suddenly and he doesn´t know why he ask for his father.
" Mom , who was my father? Where did he live?"
Of course his mother wasn´t expecting this kind of question in that moment - "Why do you want to know?"
"uhm Don't know. It´s just that I have never seen him or a photo at least"
" Well Kouichi your father was a very complicate man, I don't know anything of him since.." Was she crying - "since. oh I´ve never tell you this before, maybe is better for you to seat down. Well you see, your father and I where arguing for something about money so I tell him that if he doesn´t want to coperate with the house economy he could get out of the house that I does´t need him and I could do it by my own, and so he did. But that is not the bad part. before he go he grab your brother and hi told me that I would never see them again." By this point she was crying openly - "of course I call the police, but they never found them. A friend of I told me once that he saw him in a town but he never so your brother. So I went there, to that town and began the search there But I never found them."
"So they just dissapear?" he couldn´t belive what his mother said, he has a brother in some part of the world -"how old was my brother?"
"So you just don't remember anything of him?. Well he was your twin brother, you are the big brother you know? All this complicate story happen when you to were less than a year old".
"Just one thing more." - his mother look at him with tears in her eyes waiting for the next question - ".did you have any photo of him?"- something on his mind tell him that the mistry will be solve in a minute, he could sense it.
"Yes I have a photo of him, it is in that box under the magazines, I put there all his junk. When you finish with it we will eat, ok honey?"
"yes mom, and don't worry about the mess, I´ll put everything in order" said kouichi while he opens the box and found what he was looking for. Ther was a man, a very tall man, with muscles, black hair like him and his brother too. He had black eyes, the way he look at the camera was like he was desafiant, proud, very tipical of a nasty person like he. By now he hate his father more than yesterday. But there was something that was upseting him more and it was the kind of future that had his brother. What was he doing now? Was he alright? He just doesn´t now. What he just only hope is that he is fine. Could it be possible?
A week has past but now he walk looking everyway, trying to catch the face of his brother somewhere, he of course now that it was in a way impossible but in other way that was a desesparate wish to find his brother, a wish that seems more like a hope. He was beggining to loose that hope when somethin at first strange happen.
He was walking to the supermarket just to buy some groserys when someone, a boy about his age wave him. He get closer to the boy because maybe they know each other, but it wasn´t that. He had never seen that boy. The kid have a yellow cap, brown hair, chocolate eyes, and a big smile. He look at him as if he know him of a live.
"So here you are! Wow I hope I will never see you again. Wow you cut your hair! I really think you´ll never do that!! So. What were you doing mate??"
"Sorry..but I don't know. You are?"- of course the other boy look s little confuse cause he look at him with a What? Face.
"Well. aren´t you Minamoto? If you are not then belive me that you have a twin! My name is Takuya and I thought you were my friend Kouji. Let me tell you that you look just exactly like him, but who knows coincidece really exist!!"
"You said that you know a boy, a boy that looks exactly like me, an the boys name is Kouji Minamoto? Where did you know him? Did he lives around here? Is he fine? What did you know about him?"
"Wow wow slow down. Well first of all he looks exactly like you, and his name is Kouji Minamoto. I Know him in school since we were 6 years old, but he move with his father to who knows where and I don't know anything more." Said the boy looking at him like he where testing him. - "And you are?".
"My name is Kimura, Kouichi Kimura"
"You have similar names, this is fantastic!"
"I wouldn´t say that. Sure you doesn´t know anything more about him?-he was sure this boy know something more. - "Cause you know. he could be my lost brother."
"Oh God! So that´s the reason.. You are so similar. oh God. Then you. well you are very lucky for not know your father then"
"Why did you said that? Is something wrong?"
"Wrong?!! Oh God, first of all I think you have to sit down. I´m one of the fewest person if I´m not the only one that know Kouji enought to know what happen with him. Your father hit him everyday nobody knows why, sometimes kouji goes to school with bruises, or broken arms, or with bandages in his head, sometimes the beatings were so hard that he couldn´t go to school in days, he couldn´t even walk, I know this because I went to visit him after school. Sometimes we share my lunch because Kouji could pass days without eating."
"And did you do anything for help him? I mean you were his friend"
"Yes, I told it to my mom, to the police officer, to everyone in the town. At first no one belive me, but when they went to check him. there was no one in the house. They have move. I didn´t believe that so I enter but it was true. The police found blood in the floor and a lot of things of Kouji too. It seems for everyone that they runaway. I have the opportunity to grab somethings of him, some of his strange drawings, maybe you want to see them. My new house is a few blocks of here, if you have time now."
"I´ll go" - that was good at least he had a clue about his brother, is he is lucky he is not dead.
When they arrive to Takuya`s house they went upstairs running. He saw takuya´s mother that look at him without beliving.
"See Takuya, your friend is allright"
"Mom He is Not Kouji, he is his twin brother Kouichi"
" Nice to meet you madam"
" Come here Kouchi, is this way." Kouichi follow Takuya. The bedroom was big, he was looking everything in the room when suddenly takuya show the drawings to him.- "here they are, they are a little strange, cause he told me that he never have been here, he told me that he dream it one night"
But the drawings where not strange for Kouichi. What Kouji dream was his live, Kouichi´s live with his mother. One othe drawings where the living room of his house, there in the couch was sitting a woman that obviously was their mother, and Kouichi; other picture was a picnic day one of the many picnics he has with his mother. But this picture was especial. In the picnic his mother was carring a boy that had fell, the boy was crying. But there was a picture the last one that was the more strange. It was the face of the boy. But if you look closer there were two boys. One half have short hair like him and the other half has long hair, long black and silk hair. That hair look very familiar to him but by now he couldn´t remember from where.
Well this is all for now. What do you guys think. Should I continue with it? Or I try to do with other kind of story? And this is the part when you press that bottom under this lines that said "submite review" so go there and tell me sothething PLEASE!!!!!