Author note: This is an AU where Anakin is the one that gets tortured by the yuuzhan vong instead of Jacen and they try really hard to break his mind and spirit. Just a torture story because the potentum is annoying. There is a dark side but it doesnt matter because Anakin is cut off from the force. The rating will go up to m later I promise-promise! The yuuzhan vong will do things to him that they did not even do to Jacen because of Vergere. This is how it could have been. I put Anakin in because he shouldnt have died.
Anakin knew that he was going to die. So he fought very bravely and thought he could kill a lot of the yuuzhan vong fighters and save his sister and the other jedi before he bled to death. He had been hit with an ampistaff and he was bleeding all over his clothes. Which had been torn anyway and a lot of his skin showed. He threw himself at a bunch of the yuuzhan vong fighters. He swung his lightsaber around and around. It hit something and then something hit him. A second wound went into his chest! Anakin's knees touched the ground and he started throwing up blood. He thought he died.
He opened his eyes later and he was almost alone. There was nobody with him except for a large bird that looked like Vergere. Maybe it was her. He didn't know. And there was a yuuzhan vong man there with him as well. He was in a coridor that looked like the insides of a stomach. It smelled at least that bad and Anakin retched.
The man grabbed him by his hair and pulled him up. Some hairs ripped out and blood ran down his neck. "No Vergere you cannot have this Jeedai," he said. "We will break him ourselves because we do not trust you."
So the man who only had one eye dragged Anakin down the coridor. He threw him into a little room that was pinched off from it. Anakin felt very weak. He had trouble drawing the Force into his body. Then something grabbed his wrists and pulled them apart real hard. His shoulders dis-located and he screamed in pain. At the same time his ankles went in the opposite direction. And he felt something snap in his hip.
"You will listen to us," the man said "and you will do what we tell you or you will have slave seeds put into your body. Do you want seeds to grow inside you?"
Anakin tried to speak but he could not so he shook his head. The man smiled. "you will be in the embrace of pain for one week. And then you will begin the next breaking." He left then. Anakin felt everything go white. He cried out until his throat was too raw to make a sound. Then he started halucinating. The force drained away more and more. Then it was gone.
plz r&r! the next chapter will be longer :D