Jealousy
Me: Hello, readers! It's me, Eeveesloveyugioh! I'm redoing Jealousy. So, please forgive me for my previous edition! I was new to fanfiction and published it before it was finished because I got really stupid. And this was intended to be a one-shot until I figured out how to update. So, where is MANA!
Mana: Here... Why me?! And, in case you are wondering, I am NOT envying Vivian!
Me: Mana! YOU ARE GIVING AWAY THE STORY! So, do the disclaimer, NOW!
Mana: Fine, I guess I owe you it...Eeveesloveyugioh does not and never will own Yugioh.
Me: Can't believe that you didn't do any funny stuff.
Mana: On with the story!
Me: HEY!
Chapter 1: Flashback
*Author's Note: This chapter is merely a flashback but still part of the fanfic, so I am not violating any rules. Thank you for your attention.*
Flashback:
Mana ran up and down the alleys of Ancient Egypt. Suddenly, she ran into a young boy dressed in rich clothing. He looked about her age. Quickly, Mana realized that he was none other than Prince Atem.
"Please forgive me, your highness."
Prince Atem's expression looked as if he forgot who he was. He seemed to think that he was a different person, maybe a peasant.
"Who? Me?" Prince Atem asked, pointing to himself. Mana giggled at what he said. Suddenly realizing who she was talking to, Mana covered her mouth and bowed her head. Remembering that he was the prince of Egypt, Atem replied, "Do not worry, I am not going to harm you." "Really?" Mana asked. "Why would I harm anyone if not needed?" Atem asked. Mana blinked, not able to thin reason why.
1 year later
Mana and Atem were already great friends, with Mahad as a guard and a friend too.
The sun was in the middle of the sky, signaling that it was noon. The trio was running along the bank of the Nile River, chasing each other.
Suddenly, Mana felt her foot slip. Before she knew it, she was submerged in the deep waters of the Nile. It wasn't long before both Mahad and Atem realized that their friend had disappeared. "Mahad, do you think that Mana..." the young prince started, only to burst into tears at the thought of his good friend falling into the dark waters of the Nile River. "Do not worry, young prince. We shall retrieve Mana," Mahad stated. Atem looked at him, tears staining his face.
Meanwhile, Mana struggled to swim to the surface. Finally, she managed to push her right arm out of the surface of the Nile. Even so, Mana could not keep it there for long. Just as she thought that she was doomed to sink towards her doom, Mana felt two strong pairs of arms grab a hold of her's. She felt herself being lifted out of the dreary waters of the Nile.
Her lungs burned, longing for air. As her head finally surfaced, Mana took deep breaths of fresh, clean, air. Soon, Mana had managed, with the help of her two friends, to reach the bank. "Thank you," Mana said between pants.
Mahad sighed. "Mana, be more careful. I think that we should call it a day." Atem nodded. And so, we all had to go home, and I had to get dry.
At the day of Atem's carnation
Mana stood in the front of the huge crowd with her master and all of the other Sacred Guardians other than Atem. The crowd was huge. Shimon stood on a balcony.
Then, trumpets and grand music started to play. White lilies and blossoms off every color fell from the sky. The crowd cheered so loudly that one would probably be tempted to cover their ears. But no one did. The day was just to joyful and fun-filled that no one wanted to ruin the day just by a small movement.
The day was also perfect. Puffy cumulus clouds floated in the sky. They were so thin that they were barely visible against the bright blue sky. Even so, they could still be seen. The temperature was warm, with a cool breeze that occasionally came just as everyone thought that it was starting to get hot.
Mana smiled as her dear friend walked to Shimon's side. "Behold, our new pharaoh!" Shimon exclaimed. Just a few days ago, their honorable previous pharaoh had left for the afterlife, leaving his son, Atem as king. The cheers grew louder, so loud that Mana heard ringing in her ears. Clapping soon filled the air, only to make the noise louder. But no one actually cared that the sound was so loud, the day was just too cheerful compared to that gloomy day when Atem's father had left them.
Mana joined the crowd. Following her lead, the High Priests clapped and cheered too. Everyone clapped and cheered until their hands either turned red and hurt, their throats were dry, or, they simply stopped when Shimon started speaking. "We gather here today to witness the carnation of our new pharaoh, Pharaoh Atem! This day shan't be gloomy and miserable such as the days before this. Today shall be joy filled!" This only brought another round of cheering and applause. However, it was a bit shorter.
After Atem left the Palace to go get some quiet time before the activities started, he went to the garden. Mana followed him there after reasoning with Mahad that Atem would probably like to see his friend.
3 years later
After another lesson and lecture with Mahad, Mana heard Mahad say something to the other Sacred Guardians and Atem. "It is time, my king, for you to choose a bride."
Mana's eyes widened as she heard this news.
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- Eeveesloveyugioh