Hey guys! I'm not dead! And I'm back with the prologue of the RubyClan rewrite! Yayy! *claps*
So, I'm happy with the rewrite. It's a bit longer and has been changed a bit from the original. There will be quite a few changes. I couldn't wrote AT ALL when I made the original. Yeeahhh...So! I'll have good ol' Shadowsoul give ya the disclaimer.
Shadowsoul: Soulfire doesn't own warriors. If she did, she'd have made a lot of changes. And Turtle Tail would not have died.
Me: I give you, the story!
The wind blew cold and fierce, and leaves were whipped up everywhere as the breeze stirred up the animals, chasing them into their burrows. No cat would be hunting tonight, for they would be asleep in their snug nests where the wind could not reach them. But it was different for Redbreeze, the deputy of RubyClan, who was wide awake, sitting on his haunches outside of the camp. The wind ruffled his fur, but he didn't bother to smooth it down with his tongue. Staring into the vast, wide, forest he called his home, he sighed.
"StarClan, please, light our path in the cold season ahead." He murmured quietly, staring up into the sky. Many cats in different clans died last Leaf-bare, including Redbreeze's mother, father, and mate. His kits were spared, although fairly weak, and they had grown to be strong. Now they were to become apprentices, and Rubystar would follow the apprenticeship ceremony, appointing each kit a mentor and giving them the suffix 'paw' at the end of their name. Their names were Dewkit and Violetkit, both she-cats. Redbreeze hoped they would get good mentors, perhaps Thunderclaw or even Flamesoul. And there was Shadowsoul...He'd mentioned to Rubystar that she was worthy of deputy position, but she ignored it. She had always been... gifted, along with the newest warriors, Angelfur, Brightflower, and Firelight.
Brightflower, as a kit, told them a tree would fall near the DiamondClan border, and we never believed it, until it happened. Angelfur always had a sense of what was going on in a cat's mind, and although it could only be a coincidence, it was strange how she always knew what a cat needed. Firelight, well...once, in a fire as a kit, she got stranded accidentally and the forest caught on fire. She only came out with very minor scrapes, while the others were burned badly.
How on earth...is that even possible? Cats having powers.. Redbreeze was startled out of his thoughts when a rustle in the bushes surprised him. He whipped around, his fur bristling. "Who's there?! " He demanded, baring his teeth. But no cat answered. He turned around to head back, but didn't get far. He was attacked by a dark brown figure, and all he saw beforehand was the gleam of bright red eyes and thorn-sharp bloodstained claws. They tore through his belly fur and into his flesh, and he could feel his own blood spatter onto his pelt as he collapsed on the ground. The blood pooled below him, warm and sticky. His assailant jumped atop him and went for the killing blow. Redbreeze, too weak to fight back, fell limp to his attacker, accepting the inevitable death he had coming.
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-Soulfire