This is my first story ,tell me what you think , i dont have a big imagination but i like to make up stories
i made this as a play oh yeah i almost forgot in my story Naru and Seta are going out
hope you like it -
SUNDAY: NIGHT
Seta: im going to come and pick you up tommorow
Naru: ok
Seta: Naru i want to ask you something really important
Naru: yes, what is it
Seta: Do you love me?
Naru: (embarrass) yes
They were about to kiss , but kaolla came running with some explosives
Keitaro saw Seta & Naru and got depress
Keitaro: (thinking: who was a kidding, Naru would never love me and besides
Seta is no match for me).
MONDAY: MORNING
Keitaro woke up and saw the time
Keitaro: 7:45 Im going to be late!
Keitaro looking for Naru.
Kaitaro: Naru where are you ,Naru,Naru we are going to be late!
Shinobu: (shy)umm... Keitaro
Keitaro: yes, Shinobu
Shinobu: Naru left allready, Seta came to pick her up
Keitaro: okay maybe i should get going
Keitaro (thinking: so Seta came to pick her up, but why didnt she tell me
what im i thinnking im going to be late!)
Seta: hey keitaro want me to take you?
Keitaro: mm..sure..thanks
Seta: so got up late
keitaro: yes
Keitaro finally got to Tokyo U
Keitaro: thank you Seta
Seta: no problem
Keitaro went in the class.
Teacher: Mr. Urishima your late
Keitaro: im sorry i think i over sleept
Naru was looking at Keitaro.
Teacher: go sit down but next time your going to stand outside.
MONDAY: AFTER SCHOOL
Naru: Keitaro im sorry for not telling you i wasnt going to Tokyo u with you today
Keitaro: you dont have to apologyze, Setas your boyfriend so you dont have to tell me anything you do.
Naru felt bad but she dindt know why.
Naru and Keitaro kept walking and when they got home they saw Mitsune.
Keitaro: Mitsune
Naru: Mitsune when did you get back from Japan?i thought you were going to stay one more week
Mitsune: yeah, i know but i felt kind of lonely and i guess i missed you guys but i missed Keitaro the most
Naru: ( jealous) if i was you i would be relief to be away from him
Mitsune: are you jealous Naru
Naru: (got red)what me jealous of Keitaro
Keitaro felt bad and Naru just looked at him
Mitsune: so what happened wile i was gone
Kaolla: Naru is finally going out with Seta 0
Naru got embarrasse and looked at Keitaro.
Mitsune: its that true Naru?
Naru: y..ee..ss
Keitaro: im going to make some tea
Keitaro left the living room and went to the kitchen.
Naru: so how was your trip?
Mitsune: it was fun i gave up drinking
Keitaro: i should be happy for Naru ...shes finally loved by Seta
Mutsumi: and you Keitaro, are you happy ?
Keitaro: yes,.. if Naru is happy im happy
Mutsumi: but still you need someone to love you..dont you
Keitaro: (thinking:...)
Mutusmi: its only fair. Naru has someone to love her and shes happy shouldnt you have someone to love you and also be happy?
Keitaro: but who would love me
Mutsumi: me, the girl of your promise
Keitaro: the girl of my promise...
Keitaro: Who is she i forgot how she looked
Mutsumi: do you want to meet her
Keitaro: i must be dreaming
Mutsumi: so do you?
Keitaro: y..es
Keitaro: Mutsumi, y..ou..r the little girl of my promise
BACK TO THE LIVIN ROOM.
Naru: whats taking him so long
Motoko: let me go check
Kaolla: i want to go too
Naru: maybe we should all go check
Kaolla: great idea -
BACK TO THE KITCHEN.
Mutsumi: heres the prof do you remember this photo
Keitaro: i dont need to see the prof i know you wouldnt lie on something like that
Mutsumi got closer to Keitaro . Keitaro got nervous. Mutsumi was getting closer and closer.
Keitaro(thinking: if Mutsumi is the promise girl from many years ago it means i have to forget about Naru ...maybe i should kiss Mutsumi) . They were both getting closer and closer there lips where about to touch when...
Mitsune: Keitaro you finally became a man
Kaolla: uuuhh...they were about to kisssss
Motoko: Keitaro, what were you about to do to Mutsumi?
Keitaro:...
Naru was about to cry and left running to her room.
5 MINUTES LATER
LIVIN ROOM
Keitaro: i know you need and explination of what just happened right know...
NARUS ROOM.
Naru was sad in her room and was listening to what Keitaro was saying from her room.
BACK TO THE LIVING ROOM.
Keitaro: do you all remeber the promise i made to the little girl many years ago
Mitsune: yes, i think i remember
Keitaro: well the little girl from many year ago it Mutsumi.
Shinobu fainted..
LATER THAT NIGHT
Mitsune went to Narus room.
Naru: what are you doing here Mitsune?
Mitsune: do you really still love Seta
Naru: of course i love him!
Mitsune: are you sure?
Naru: ( not sure) if i didnt love him i would have not become his girldfriend in the first place
Mitsune: compare your feelings for Seta and Keitaro
Naru: why, i already know who i love
Mitsune: do you feel the same way you used to for Seta
Naru: of course i do
Mitsune: so you dont have any problem if Keitaro and Mutsumi are dating?
Naru: No! besides if i did i couldnt do anything , because Mutsumi is the promise girl
Mitsune: so you do have a problem?
Naru: why are you asking so many question?
Mitsune: what if Mutsumi is not the promise girl?
Naru: what are you saying of course she is
Mitsune: do you know that for sure?
Naru: maybe you should get some sleep ...see you tomorrow
Mitsune: but ,Naru!
Naru took Mitsune out of the room.
Naru: (thinking: what if Mutsumi is not Keitaros promise girl after all...even if she wasnt Keitaro loves her, he was about to kiss her, if we didnt go check on him , what might have happened...i dont want to even think about it...why,why im i thinking of Keitaro i dont care if his going out with Mutsumi because i dont love him ...i..i love Seta) . I LOVE SETA!
KEITAROS ROOM
Keitaro: (thinking: mmmmmm... Naru sure sounds happy ...a..nd she even yelled I LOVE SETA mmmmmm..no metter what , i know im still going to love Naru...it hurts.. it hurts so much not to be loved back...i know Mutsumi is not the girl from my promise many years ago, but all i wanted was to forget about Naru...Naru I WILL LOVE YOU TILL I DIE.
TUESDAY:MORNING
(Naru goes outside)
Kaitaro: Wait for me Naru!(running)
Naru started running to get away from Keitaro
Keitaro catch up to her...
Keitaro: your hard to catch up with -
Naru: why are you following me leave me alone.. dont you get it nothing is going to be the same anymore.
Naru gave Keitaro the Naru punch . He went flying like a shottting star
Naru started running again.(nothing is going to be the same we both went to different ways)
Keitaro: (thinking : what did she mean by nothing is going to be the same anymore)
TUESDAY:AFTER SCHOOL
ring,ring,ring
Keitaro: hi everyone im home
Shinobu: Wheres Naru wasnt she with you?
Keitaro: um ,no i thought she would be home by now
Keitaro:( thinking: Naru where are you) (worried)
Motoko: did something happen between you and Naru (was about to hit Keitaro with the sword)
Keitaro: (almost crying) no,no, everything is ok
Haruka: dont worry about Naru, shes safe she just call to say shes ok
Motoko: so did she tell you where she was?
Haruka: yes shes with Seta
Keitaro sad and Mitsumi just looking at him.
Keitaro: i have to go to Mutsumis house
Haruka: make sure you come early or im not going to let you in
Keitaro: ok
Mitsune: can i come with you im going to get a drink from the store
Kietaro: but i thought you didnt drink anymore
Mitsune: i think you missunderstud me
Mitsune: we will be right back
EXCAVATING A CAVE
Seta: Naru so why did you come here is dangerous for you
Naru: i just wanted to see you
Seta: you seem sad
Naru: im happy
Seta: Naru , is it bothering you that Keitaro and Mutsumi are going out
Naru: no
Seta : you love Keitaro dont you ?
Naru: i..dont know anymore
Seta: im going to give you all the time you want to think about it so dont worry ok
Naru: im sorry, but as soon as i know how i feel you would be the first one to know
Mitsune and Keitaro walking together
Mitsune: Keitaro are you sure Mutsumi is the promise girl
Keitaro: ( thinking: i dont like lying so im going to tell her the truth)
Keitaro: no
Mitsune: then why are you going out with her?
Keitaro: the truth is i know its not her but i want to forget about Naru
Mitsune: so your using Mutsumi( mad)
Keitaro: ...
Mistune: what if you cant forget Naru , Mutsumi is going to suffer
Keitaro: ...i have to tell Mutsumi the truth ...sorry i have to go
MUTSUMIS HOUSE
Mutsumi: Keitaro you made it
Keitaro: im sorry i know your not the promise girl im sorry i was just..
Mutsumi: using me to forget about Naru ...i know
Keitaro: im sorry i just cant do this to you
Mutsumi: thats okay... you really love her dont you
Keitaro: yes.. but she loves Seta, but im okay
WEDNSDAY:MORNING
Keitaro: i should get going or im going to be late
Shinobu: arent you wating for Naru?
Keitaro: no i have to go
Keitaro: bye shinobu
Shinobu: bye
Shinobu: (thinking: wonder if there mad at eachother?)
Keitaro:(thinking: i was thinking all night about it and i finally got it she wants me to get away from her and Seta. thats why she say... nothings going to be the same anymore.
BACK AT HINATA APARMENTS
Naru: i hope Keitaro is not mad at me ...i have to apologyze...what i said was really mean..
FLASHBACK: dont folloew me...dont you see nothings going to be the same anymore...
knok.knock
Naru: that Keitaro is still not awake
Shinobu: Naru who are you waiting for
Naru:mmm.. Keitaro i think his still sleeping
Shinobu: Naru
Naru: yes,Shinobu
Shinobu: Keitaro already left to Tokyo U
Naru: What!
Naru: then i should get going
Naru: (thinking: why did he go without me could he be mad at me or is he going with Mutsumi)
AFTER SCHOOL
Naru: hi im home
Naru : it seems like nobody is home
Naru: well maybe i should go to my room and study
NARUS ROOMS
Naru: how i feel about Keitaro...hes clumsy, hes a pervert, hes really dum a..
(interrupted)
Keitaro: im a really that dum
Naru:yes i mean n..
Keitaro: dont worry i know ...if it wasnt for you i would have failed the Tokyo U exam again...hahahah
Haruka: were home
Keitaro: there here
NARUS ROOM
Naru: When i get mad at Keitaro...well i dont really get that mad, even if i try to get really mad...i cant be as mad as i want to be ..i just feel hurt..i love being with him ...i knew it , i just didnt want to get hurt ...i knew i loved him but i didnt want to be in love with him...i was scared that the promised girl would take him away ..and without notising it , i was the one pushing him away...i just cant give up on him...I LOVE YOU KEITARO..HOW COULD I BE SO STUPID...
i have to go to Seta adn tell him...
LIVING ROOM
Naru: where did you guys go
Haruka: to get some food
Keitaro: (thinking: it isnt as bad as i tought Naru doesnt really hate me)
Naru:i have to go ill be back fast
RING,RING,RING(Phone) KEITARO TALKING TO SETA
Keitaro: hinata aparments
Seta: hi Keitaro
Keitaro: hi Seta
Seta: i need help
Keitaro: you need help on what?
Seta: i kind of got stuck
Keitaro: ok ill be there
EXCAVATING THE CAVE
Seta: so you finally made your decision
Naru: yes im sorry
Seta: thank you for telling me
Seta: now tell Keitaro
Naru: what!
Keitaro: mmmmmm
Naru: why did you tie him like that Seta..Seta where are you
Keitaro: mmmmmm
Naru: im sorry i forgot let me untie you
Keitaro: thank you for untieing me ...Seta went that way
Naru: mmm. Keitaro can we talk?
Keitaro:...
Naru: i want you to know how i really feel about you
Naru:i .l..o..
Floor starts shaking
Naru: whats wrong why is the floor shaking
Keitaro: come with me
Keitaro:i see a way out
Kaitaro: hurry get out!
Naru:but what about you
Keitaro:theres another way out im going to get out the other way ok
Keitaro:Naru i love you!
Naru got out of the cave. Kietaro is still inside the cave .
Keitaro:thank you god shes safe
Keitaro: IM GOING TO LOVE YOU INTILL I DIE NARU
OUTSIDE CAVE
Seta:Wheres Keitaro
Naru:(crying) he said he was going to get out the other way
Seta: there is no other way
Naru: KEITARO!
little girl: come on you can get out!
Keitaro:who,who are you?
little girl:im someone that loves you a lot
Keitaro:you seem familiar, like i know you
little girl:come here, this is a way out
Keitaro: thank you
Keitaro: can you tell me who you are
little girl: im and angel that wants you to be happy, promise me you are going to be happy
Keitaro: i promise
KEITARO GOT OUT
Naru:Keitaro your safe
Keitaro: the little girl ,she save me
Keitaro fainted
1 day pass
Naru:Keitaro i love you ,i love you,
Kaitaro and Naru kiss (frech kiss)
1 week pass
Keitaro: i found out who the little girl was, she was the little girl of my promise , her father was and archeologyst and they had and accident and she died . I will never forget her. I promised her i would be happy and i am kepping my promise.
ME AND NARU GOT MERRIED AND LIVE HAPPELY EVER AFTER
hope you like it please live commets !