Hi, I'm redoing this to make it better than the last time around.
There once was a young girl named Bulma. She had everything she could ask. Her father, brother, and sisters. Her father was Bardock, a retired solider from the Great King Vegeta who was the ruler of all Crystal Japan. Bardock was a good friend to the royals and while he was still a soilder he had met the young toddler prince, Vegeta. The prince had met all the young children but they all were grown now and hadn't seen each other in a long time. But not all things were right in this properous kingdom.
Bulma, being one of the fairest maidens in the land, was face with a choice of a suitable man. The only man that was avaliable was Yamcha, a pompus, greedy land holder. He had control of her father's land and had seen Bulma many a time. She was the most beatiful of all maidens, and had seen plenty of girls in his time. Bardock had strongly went against it and so had the rest of her family. But Yamcha was too much infatuated to even see straight.
"How am I ever to live without going completely insane?" she said to no one in particular whilst sitting a field.
Suddenly, a little bunny hopped into her lap. It seemed to be listening her.
"Hello little one," she said to it, "I'll bet you don't even what I'm going through."
The bunny looked at her as if it wants her to tell him whats wrong.
"I'm being bethorthed to a man I truly hate and I there's nothing I can do about it, if you were wondering" she said to him.
The bunny looked sorry for her.
"At least one person outside of my family feels sorry for me,"she said.
The bunny looked at her in an amused way. Then he took off towards the woods. Bulma decided to leave for home but the bunny came back, as if telling her to follow it.
"Do you want me to follow you?" she asked.
The bunny gave her a sharp nod to the head and took off into the woods. Bulma decided to follow.
'Wonder what he wants me to see,' she thought to herself.
She followed the bunny pretty far into woods before it stopped. Then, the bunny did something totally unexpected. It transformed into this hideous beast. The creature laughed maliciously. Bulma turned and ran as fast as her legs could carry her.
"What's wrong, my pretty? Are you frightened?" the creature said, chasing after her.
Bulma hid behind a tree to try and to get away from this monster. Then, the creature found her. She was helpless. She couldn't get away. She screamed for help, but she knew no one would hear her out here. She closed her eyes tightly and wished for a miracle.
"Leave her alone, Dodoria, she is of no use to you," a voice called.
Then, just as if her prayers had been answered, a young man, about her age, jumped from out of nowhere to her rescue. He had spikey black hair that stood up like a candle-flame and bangs and dark black eyes that seemed to burn from rage. Bulma had long since took cover.
"Why should I Vegeta? Frieza always gets the good ones and I found this one all on my own," Dodoria said.
Bulma slid more into the tree for protection. The young man growled.
"Your not going to hurt anyone, so long as I'm alive," he said valiantly.
Dodoria was secretly drawing a sword, so that Vegeta didn't see the sneak attack. Bulma saw it though.
"That can be arranged," he said, smiling maliciously.
"Watch out!" Bulma cried to the hero.
He heard her and quickly drew his sword to block. He got there just in time and blocked the on coming blow. Bulma sighed in relief. They had soon got into a vicious battle. Bulma had never been so scared, yet, secretly, she cheered on the young man.
"You seem slow, Vegeta, why not give up?" he asked tauntingly. But Vegeta would never give up.
"I'll never give into the likes of you, you monster," He growled.
He still fought on until he got the upper hand. Dodoria was getting tired of fighting and turned for Bulma. He got Vegeta distracted so he could get over there by faking right and getting his sword out of his hand and into a tree. Vegeta went to retieve it but left Bulma unprotected. dodoria laughed malicously as he neared the terrified Bulma. Vegeta got his sword back and just in time. He saw Dodoria going for the girl he was trying to save. She screamed to him for help. He came running.
"Get away from her, now!" he called angrily.
Those words had fallen upon deaf ears. Vegeta had no choice but to kill him. He threw his sword at Dodoria and it struck him right threw the head. Bulma got away from the dying corpse. She had never been so close to a thing dying ever. She started crying. Vegeta heard her cries while pulling out his sword from the tree. Lucky for him, it didn't get too dirty. He went over to see if Bulma was okay.
"Are you alright, miss?" he said calmingly.
Bulma was startled by his voice and tried to run away from him.
"No, wait please! I mean you no harm!" he called out to her.
She looked at him questionly.
"I'm not going to hurt you, I promise," he said softly.
She looked from him to the sword. He also looked to his sword and realized she was scared of it.
"Are you afraid of my sword?" he asked questionly.
He put his sword away.
"There, see, no more sword. I can't hurt you anymore," he said jokingly.
She didn't think he was just playing around and tried to get away from him.
"Whoa, whoa, slow down. I didn't me to scare you. I was just joking; I wouldn't think of hurting you in my wildest nightmares," he said apologeticly.
"You are not very funny, you know," she said, sitting in a crouched position with her knees to her chest.
"I know, but on my most solumn promise, I will not harm you, even if my own life was at stake," he said, bending down to my level.
Bulma sniffled.
"Really?"
"Really really," he replied.
"Come now; your family might be worried sick about you right now," he said, holding out his hand for Bulma to take.
She took it, trusting in her savior.
"Thank you, for saving my life," she replied.
"Your welcome," he replied back.
Vegeta then walked her home. It was dark, so Bulma let him in and let him stay the night.
This really different from my other stories but, I had this idea in my head for a long time and I had to write it. I have nothing against bunnies, but I had to use a cute animal for Bulma to follow and it was the only thing I could think of at the time. Besides, I hate Dodoria. Anyway, later in the next chapter, Bulma meets Vegeta, her savior. Next time on the next chapter.
There once was a young girl named Bulma. She had everything she could ask. Her father, brother, and sisters. Her father was Bardock, a retired solider from the Great King Vegeta who was the ruler of all Crystal Japan. Bardock was a good friend to the royals and while he was still a soilder he had met the young toddler prince, Vegeta. The prince had met all the young children but they all were grown now and hadn't seen each other in a long time. But not all things were right in this properous kingdom.
Bulma, being one of the fairest maidens in the land, was face with a choice of a suitable man. The only man that was avaliable was Yamcha, a pompus, greedy land holder. He had control of her father's land and had seen Bulma many a time. She was the most beatiful of all maidens, and had seen plenty of girls in his time. Bardock had strongly went against it and so had the rest of her family. But Yamcha was too much infatuated to even see straight.
"How am I ever to live without going completely insane?" she said to no one in particular whilst sitting a field.
Suddenly, a little bunny hopped into her lap. It seemed to be listening her.
"Hello little one," she said to it, "I'll bet you don't even what I'm going through."
The bunny looked at her as if it wants her to tell him whats wrong.
"I'm being bethorthed to a man I truly hate and I there's nothing I can do about it, if you were wondering" she said to him.
The bunny looked sorry for her.
"At least one person outside of my family feels sorry for me,"she said.
The bunny looked at her in an amused way. Then he took off towards the woods. Bulma decided to leave for home but the bunny came back, as if telling her to follow it.
"Do you want me to follow you?" she asked.
The bunny gave her a sharp nod to the head and took off into the woods. Bulma decided to follow.
'Wonder what he wants me to see,' she thought to herself.
She followed the bunny pretty far into woods before it stopped. Then, the bunny did something totally unexpected. It transformed into this hideous beast. The creature laughed maliciously. Bulma turned and ran as fast as her legs could carry her.
"What's wrong, my pretty? Are you frightened?" the creature said, chasing after her.
Bulma hid behind a tree to try and to get away from this monster. Then, the creature found her. She was helpless. She couldn't get away. She screamed for help, but she knew no one would hear her out here. She closed her eyes tightly and wished for a miracle.
"Leave her alone, Dodoria, she is of no use to you," a voice called.
Then, just as if her prayers had been answered, a young man, about her age, jumped from out of nowhere to her rescue. He had spikey black hair that stood up like a candle-flame and bangs and dark black eyes that seemed to burn from rage. Bulma had long since took cover.
"Why should I Vegeta? Frieza always gets the good ones and I found this one all on my own," Dodoria said.
Bulma slid more into the tree for protection. The young man growled.
"Your not going to hurt anyone, so long as I'm alive," he said valiantly.
Dodoria was secretly drawing a sword, so that Vegeta didn't see the sneak attack. Bulma saw it though.
"That can be arranged," he said, smiling maliciously.
"Watch out!" Bulma cried to the hero.
He heard her and quickly drew his sword to block. He got there just in time and blocked the on coming blow. Bulma sighed in relief. They had soon got into a vicious battle. Bulma had never been so scared, yet, secretly, she cheered on the young man.
"You seem slow, Vegeta, why not give up?" he asked tauntingly. But Vegeta would never give up.
"I'll never give into the likes of you, you monster," He growled.
He still fought on until he got the upper hand. Dodoria was getting tired of fighting and turned for Bulma. He got Vegeta distracted so he could get over there by faking right and getting his sword out of his hand and into a tree. Vegeta went to retieve it but left Bulma unprotected. dodoria laughed malicously as he neared the terrified Bulma. Vegeta got his sword back and just in time. He saw Dodoria going for the girl he was trying to save. She screamed to him for help. He came running.
"Get away from her, now!" he called angrily.
Those words had fallen upon deaf ears. Vegeta had no choice but to kill him. He threw his sword at Dodoria and it struck him right threw the head. Bulma got away from the dying corpse. She had never been so close to a thing dying ever. She started crying. Vegeta heard her cries while pulling out his sword from the tree. Lucky for him, it didn't get too dirty. He went over to see if Bulma was okay.
"Are you alright, miss?" he said calmingly.
Bulma was startled by his voice and tried to run away from him.
"No, wait please! I mean you no harm!" he called out to her.
She looked at him questionly.
"I'm not going to hurt you, I promise," he said softly.
She looked from him to the sword. He also looked to his sword and realized she was scared of it.
"Are you afraid of my sword?" he asked questionly.
He put his sword away.
"There, see, no more sword. I can't hurt you anymore," he said jokingly.
She didn't think he was just playing around and tried to get away from him.
"Whoa, whoa, slow down. I didn't me to scare you. I was just joking; I wouldn't think of hurting you in my wildest nightmares," he said apologeticly.
"You are not very funny, you know," she said, sitting in a crouched position with her knees to her chest.
"I know, but on my most solumn promise, I will not harm you, even if my own life was at stake," he said, bending down to my level.
Bulma sniffled.
"Really?"
"Really really," he replied.
"Come now; your family might be worried sick about you right now," he said, holding out his hand for Bulma to take.
She took it, trusting in her savior.
"Thank you, for saving my life," she replied.
"Your welcome," he replied back.
Vegeta then walked her home. It was dark, so Bulma let him in and let him stay the night.
This really different from my other stories but, I had this idea in my head for a long time and I had to write it. I have nothing against bunnies, but I had to use a cute animal for Bulma to follow and it was the only thing I could think of at the time. Besides, I hate Dodoria. Anyway, later in the next chapter, Bulma meets Vegeta, her savior. Next time on the next chapter.