So here it is: My completely rewritten version of All the Pieces! I'll upload the chapters as I finish editing them.
Every world has laws that aren't meant to be broken. Even a tiny crack in the surface can set off a chain of events marring the whole picture. The events don't have to be big, though they often are. The worlds are so closely tied that even just damaging the tiniest pieces can eventually break the entire puzzle. Of course, no one ever heeds that warning. People get ambitious. They break things without realizing exactly what they've disturbed until it's too late. The good news is for people who break the laws there's always other people who reinforce them. For in the end everything is balanced so the universe doesn't fall apart. In other words, don't play with fire. You'll only get burned. - Tallah