this is my frist story i hope you like it!
i wake up on a sunny day and i am really excited because today i am going tostart my first day at a new school yes toay i am going to hogwarts school of witchcraft and witchcraft! i get out of bed and get my bag and put my things in it and get my suitcase and put my things in it and i am really excited because i am going to learn how to do magic and i go downstairs to my family and my mum said 'you look very handsome today toby' and i said 'thanks' because i am have got white hair with blue in it which is cool and a black t shirt and skiny jeans. my dad takes my suitcase and put it in the car and we all go and sit in the car which is a magic car and then i sit in the front because my dad lets me sit in the front and then we drive the car down the road and then it starts flying! and the magic car starts flying over the houses and i said 'weeeeeeeeeeeee' and my mum is happy and then it goes over a town and people are screaming because they are scared if seeing a flying car and my dad said 'dont worry toby i will make them forget' and then he gets out his magic wand and starts shooting people! and they are all forgetting what they see a flying a car and the car goes up into clouds and its really fast because its magic and then it lands in london in dragon alley and there are wizards everywhere and they are all looking at the car and saying 'wow thats a cool car' and i said 'thanks' and tnhen my dad said 'lets go get money' so we go into the big bank. in the bank there are lots of strange things and my mum said 'be careful of the dwarfes they are dangerus' and so i am careful and we go down stares to the room with all our money and its got LOTS OF MONEY!
then we go shopping and my mum said 'lets get you some cool cloths' and we go down secret tunnell to a shop that has cloths but no one goes there because it is a secret and we go in and the shop man said 'welcome' and i said 'thanks' and i put on some really cool cloths and the shop man said 'that will be £10000000' and my dad said 'okay' and hands him lots of gold and said 'keep the change'. then malfoy walks in and he said 'wow cool cloths' and i said 'thanks' and he said he wanted to buy them too but i said 'no you are not as rich as me' and i laughed and his dad started crying because he was angry. then we go to a shop to get my wand and the old man in the shop said 'the wand chooses you' so i tried some wands but they were all s**t and then he said 'what about this one' and it was white and had cool blue lightning on it and then i waved it and blue lightning shot out and the old man said 'wow that was so cool this is your wand!' and so i bouht it and then we went to the pet shop to get my pet and i saw a dragon and the shop man said 'you are not aloud a dragon at hogwarts only a rat or owl' and my dad said 'no he can have whatever he wants' and then he paid for it and then harry potter walked in to get his wand and said 'wow thats a cool wand' and i said 'thanks' and then he said 'your parents are so cool for buying you that' and i said 'i know what are your parents going to get you' and then he cried and said 'my parents are dead voldmart killed them' and then cried and i said 'oh no' and he said 'its okay i am here with hagred and he is like a dad to me' and i said 'ok'.
then we went to the traina nd i got on the train and me and harry potter sit down in one of the rooms and then the train started going so we waved at everyone and i said 'bye mum and dad' and harry potter said 'bye hagred'. then ron wessley came in and said 'can i sit with you' and i said 'yes' and then he said he was really hungry and then a old lady said 'do you want any sweets' and ron wessley said 'no i am to poor' and then i said 'yes i want everythink' and then gave her lots of gold and she was really happy and gave us all the sweets and ron wessley said 'thanks'. then hermy walked in and said 'hi can i sit with you' and i said 'yes' and then she said 'you are handsome' and i said 'thanks'. then i said 'i am really going to miss my family' and then harry potter said 'my family were killed by voldmart but atleast he is dead now' but i dont think hes really dead!