Dain is summoned by a dying shadow lord, to capture the queen of deltora, who is pregnant with the heir to the belt, the queen as you all know is Jasmine, this is my first story ever so PLEASE be nice with reviews.
"Rise Dain, my greatest Ol ever created" said the shadow lord waving his hands in front of a pool of sliver water, "Rise, RISE" his voice trembling, his hands shaking; the shadow lord was very weak.
In front of him a figure started to emerge from the slimly sliver water, soon taking the shape of a young man with black hair, black eyes, the figure was, whom Lief, Jasmine, Barda and so many others had trusted with their lives, had betrayed them, Dain stood before the Shadow lord, a smile reached Dains lips, he kneeled on one leg, and bowed before his master.
"What is it that my master has called me for?" asked Dain, still kneeling,
""Stand up Ol, I have a task for you, this is different to any of the others I have given, all which you have failed," The smile fell from Dains lips "But" the shadow lord continued" But I will give you a second chance, my powers are weakening, I am dying, but if you do not fail, I will be at full power once again"
"I will not fail this time my master" said Dain "Soon you will be once again the ruler of all Deltora, just ask and it will be done"
"Good, now this is the task, King Lief of Del has married, the queen is with child, you will go into deltora and kidnap the queen, and bring her here, then I will destroy the royal blood line forever, for as you know the King will try to rescue his stolen queen, I will kill him, destroy the Belt Of Deltora, and then Deltora will be mine"
"As you wish my master" and with that the shadow lord clicked his trembling fingers and Dain was gone, "Soon, it is only a matter of time Lief of Del, then you will truly face me, The Shadow Lord will forever rule Deltora" the shadow lord looked into the darkness, for he knew it was in his own words a matter of time, and he knew himself, a matter of time.
Dain woke in a grove of trees , standing up he could see Del in the distance, it look peaceful, the people who lived there were also peaceful, they now knew that they had nothing to fear, Their King had destroyed the evil shadow lord and was now happily married, as he started to walk towards Del a drunken man came from the bushes, staggering towards Dain, grabbing Dain by the shoulders he said" W-why a-are y-you n-n-not hap-py you-ng m-an," the man struggled to find his words, " The G-good King's wifey i-s with chi-ld"
"I am quite aware that her majesty is with child, but I am not stupid enough to get myself god dam drunk" Dain shouted, the man shank back in fear, then staggered away. Dain smiled and continued to walk towards Del.
How was that, good I hope, I don't know how many chapters I'm having but this is my first story so Please be nice, I would love some advice in reviews but just say it in a nice way , from Lunlovegood