Hello everyone! So I'm a beginning writer so I'm sorry if my writing style sucks or if everything just sucks in general. I'm very open to criticism so feel free to review or private message me and give me tips and/or tell me what I'm doing wrong or right. I actually encourage it. So with that said they're somethings you guys should know:
When someone is talking out loud it won't be in italics or bold lettering
Thoughts will be in bold lettering
and Sakura's and Deidara's inner's are in bold and italic lettering ( and yes I did give Deidara an inner, If you don't like it then tell me.)
So with all that said I hope you all enjoy the story and please review :)
Disclaimer: I do not Own Naruto believe me I wish I did
Ch. 1 You Prick!
Sakura's Pov
"The sky is so pretty" I thought as I took a drag from my cigarette as I blew out the smoke I watched as it floated up to meet the stars. I wish I could fly. Fly among the clouds and the stars. Feel the wind on my skin, feel it rush through my hair.
"Oww! Dammnit" I yelled. I let my cigarette burn to the filter causing it to burn my knuckles. I sucked on my knuckles for a few seconds as I stood up and stomped on it.
I heard a distant boom as I looked up the forest seemed to be on fire.
I jumped onto a nearby roof and looked. A giant bird seemed to be circling above the flames.
"I wonder what the hell that could be"
" I dunno why don't we go check it out"
"When the hell did you come back"
"I never left; I just took a break from bugging the shit out of you"
"You Stupid bitch"
"Hey now there's no reason to be calling yourself names"
"Fuck you go away"
"Psssh fine"
I rushed over the rooftops careful not wake anyone or to be seen since I'm not allowed to be in this village. Because I'm marked as a traitor. The lack of a head band is proof. I couldn't bring myself to scratch out the leaf symbol on my head band so I just carry it around in my backpack. I was charged with treason 6 months ago for fraternizing with the enemy and aiding a criminal.
"Stop thinking about this Sakura what done is done."
I came to a stop a few yards before the flames and what I saw captivated me. There in the sky was a man; at least what I thought was a man, standing on a bird.
"I wonder how that's possible"
"Um saks hate to ruin your moment but BOMB!"
"Oh shit!"
I was thrown into the air and landed in a tree.
"Owwww that fucking hurt" My right calf was burned and my right ankle was broken.
My hands started to glow green as I healed my injures.
"What the hell! He just almost killed me!"
"I know what the fuck! Crush him!"
I jumped out of the trees and into the middle of the clearing.
"HEY WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU! YOU JUST ALMOST FUCKING KILLED ME YOU PRICK" I yelled up at the man on the bird.
He looked down at me and yelled "Well then maybe you should get the fuck out of the way of my art you stupid bitch, un!"
"Why don't you come say that to my face you kike!" (A/N I have nothing against jews. I just really like the word kike. I would never actually call a jew a kike. So don't bite my head off.)
The bird landed and he got off and started to walk up to me with a smirk on his face.
"Damn he is hot!"
"No he isn't."
"Yes he is!"
"No he isn't!"
I was snapped out of my thoughts when he bent down in front of me and said "Stay the fuck out of the way of my art you stupid bitch if you don't want to get blown up, un."
"That's it."
"Yep! Punch that sexy smirk off his face"
"You're an idiot"
I raised my fist and slammed it into his face causing him to fly back and threw 2 trees.
Deidara's Pov
I heard yelling but where was it coming from. I looked down and there was a women standing in the middle of the clearing I made with my explosions.
"HEY WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU! YOU JUST ALMOST KILLED ME YOU PRICK!" she yelled at me.
"Who the hell does this bitch think she is, un?"
"Well then maybe you should stay the fuck out of the way of my art you stupid bitch, un!"
"Why don't you come say that to my face you kike!"
"Fine I fucking will, un! Wait did she just call me a kike, un?" I thought.
I steered the bird down towards the ground and landed it. I slide off and started to walk up to her. When I noticed something, she is actually pretty hot. She has long wavy pink hair that flows down to the small of her back and emerald green eyes that sparkle in the light of the flames around us and have a spark of their own, with slightly tanned skin that looks soft and smooth. Her lips were slightly plump and looked sweet and silky. She seemed to be having an argument with herself by the way her eyebrows slightly scrunched together.
"She's kind of adorable with that look on her face, un"
"Don't let that cloud your mind Deidara this bitch called you a kike and is getting in the way of your free time to practice your art"
"Who dah fuck are you, un?"
"I'm you. No time to explain your getting close to her, Put your game face on"
I put my game face on. When I reached her I paused for a moment to look at her then I bent down in her face and said" Stay the fuck out of the way of my art you stupid bitch if you don't want to get blown up, un"
She glared daggers at me and the only thing that ran through my mind before her fist connected with my jaw and I went flying backwards and through 2 trees was "Oh shit, she looks pissed"
"Holy shit! What the hell was that! She just punched me! Un."
"That was hot"
"Yeah I agree, un."
When I got up she was standing there with a triumphant smirk on her face.
"I wonder who the hell this girl is, un?" I thought.
So what did you guys think? Review pleas and let me know :)