Ok so this one's different. It's Hannah Montana. I kinda experimented with bold to empahsis on different things. Hopefully this will go over well.....
Mixed Up
Life is confusing to almost everyone. Including her.
Everyone thinks her life is perfect.
She has the newest clothes, cars, jewelry that money can buy.
She hates it all. She wishes she could just be plain Miley again.
No Hannah Montana. She now wishes it had never came to be.
Hannah's life has taken over. She never sees her friends anymore.
Her true friends.
She lost the boy that she loved so dearly because Hannah's people wanted her to pretend to be with the stud Andrew Jayson for good PR.
She didn't feel anything anymore. She just tried to push it all away. She just wanted to be by herself.
She wishes she could lock herself in her room for an eternity and never come out...
Then she remembers...
The fans are the reason she goes through all of this because she doesn't want to disappoint them.
Instead she disappoints herself. Her father. Her friends.
All these feelings inside of her are keeping her mixed up.
Ok People what did you think? Please review. I like critsim on what I can do better.