Disclaimer : Yeah right ! I own OSR and Aikka has a cheerleading squad that chants "A-I-K-K-A. AIKKA.AIKKA YAY YAY!"
(A/N) To 'Flame Rising' I believe in constructive criticism but your review was just plain rude. It was well worded and for that I thank you but where I'm raised we believe that if you have nothing nice to say then don't say anything at all. If you should read one of my future stories and don't like it then simply don't review. You won't break my heart. Have a lovely day.
P.S I absolutely love 'Aftermath of Oban : Eva's Fairy Tale' by –Catgirl-of-Bavaria-
She was encased in darkness, there was no light at all. The stone at her feet felt cold and wet. A cold wind blew around her. She listened, her name floated on the wind. Well one of her names. "Molly" the wind said in the softtess of whispers. "Molly" o.k now this was really starting to creep her out. She fought down the panic that bubbled inside her. She took a step backwards, trying to peer though the darkness to no avail. All of a sudden a strong hand clamped onto her shoulder. She let out a blood-curdling scream then she heard laughter. She whipped around and saw…
"Jordan!"
She ran up to him and wrapped him in a big bear hug, she then got a good look at him. He was in human form and he looked the same as on Oban but his eyes were a bright gold instead of their deep brown and an unearthly glow surrounded him. "Man Molly, you should have seen the look on your face" was all he was able to say before he burst into laughter again. "Sorry Molly, but after all the times you scared me I had to get you back at least once." Molly blushed and punched him in the arm. They then started talking about anything that came to mind. After what felt like hours of talking they felt their time drawing to an end.
"Before you go Jordan, how's Aikka?" Molly asked. "As far as I know fine, thinking about you every time I drop in." Jordan said then he sighed. "Listen Molly I have a feeling that something bad is about to happen, something that I will have no control over. I'm not sure it will happen to you but just be careful" he was about to say something else when all of a sudden-BEEP!BEEP!BEEP!
Eva groaned and rolled over. "Uhg, I've got to get rid of that alarm clock." Eva grabbed the alarm clock and threw it against the wall. "Well, that's the second one this month" she rolled over and tried to go back to sleep. "Eva, I hope you're up and ready for school" Don Wei called upstairs. He was downstairs enjoying his morning coffee and reading the paper. He looked up from his paper to look at the other people at the table. Stan and Koji were talking about parts on a star racer and Rick was reading 'Star Racers of The World'.
All five of them lived in the same house and each of them had their own room even though Stan and Koji spent all their time in the garage. Ten minutes had past since Don Wei had called upstairs for Eva to get up. "Eva, it's 6:45 I hope your ready." Everybody stopped what they were doing looked at each other. Rick held up three fingers and started counting down 3…2…1… "AAAHHH!" Eva let out a scream to wake the dead. They heard many thumps that sounded like Eva was fighting off a crog. Three minutes later Eva came down the stairs, taking the steps three at a time. She grabbed a strawberry pop-tart and her backpack and headed for the door. "bye guys, see you later" she said as she went out the door.
Eva ran for the garage to get her rocket seat that Stan and Koji made for her. They hade built her the rocket seat after the Great Race saying that she needed a new ride. It had the same basic design but Stan and Koji had made the gas tank larger and added a boost drive.
Rick and her given it a paint job. On the hood was the oh so familiar rabid pink rabbit. The rest of it was black with red flames and the license plate read 'BITE-ME.' As she got on her rocket seat and raced towards school three thoughts ran through her head . 'Oh man I am so late.' 'Hope I don't have crumbs on me.' 'I wonder what Jordan ment by something bad is going to happen.'