Chapter one: the Voices are Enlightening
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In a hole near an area called the "lost woods"
"remember that guy olimar." the Burrowing Snagret said
"why yes we do" the voices said" he used us for his own needs."
"He killed all my Snagret friends and he must pay."
the Hairy bulborb joined the snagret and the pikmin(you should've gotten a clue about what the voices were)
"HI GUYS" the Hairy bulborb said
"shh dont be so loud-"
"I FINALLY FOUND YOU" the doodlebug said
"Oh...my...God it's *scary music plays the ugly ass doodlebug"* all them said
"waaaah why do you have to be so mean to me" the doodlebug cried
"CUZ YOU'RE UGLY AS HELL AND YOU SMELL LIKE ASS" they said in unison
"hmph then face the wrath of my fart*loud fart stinks up the hole* *sniff sniff * i do smell like ass"the doodle bug then
ran out of the room crying.
"hah noob"the snagret said
"wow why are there pikmin in here anyway"the hairy bulborb said confused
"because we have something to do" the pikmin said" a plan of sorts"
"oh ok but what" the hairy bulborb said
"I found a missing piece to something that looks important" a blue pikmin said
*blue pikmin gets smacked by the snagrets beak*
"shut up ugly blue carrot"
"whats a carrot?" the blue pikmin asked as a red pikmin pecked him with the spike thing
"oww what was that for"
"for being an idiot"
"whats an ido- *smacked*oww you did that again"
"tell them the plan idiot"
"oh yeah...if we take this piece an look for the other we might get to teleport to the planet Olimar called Hocotate"
"maybe your right...dumbass" the hairy bulborb said
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at Olimar's House
"ahh home sweet home!" Olimar said
"its been 5 months dad." Olimar's son said
"one question though?" Olimar asked
"yes dad?" Olimar's son answered
"what is your name?"
"you guys forgot to name me???"
"i guess so...Ill call you Jerry for now until we find your birth certificate thats been lost your whole life."
O.O "wow i am sooooo special"Jerry(atleast thats what i called him in pikmin) said sarcastically
"yep right you are Jerry" olimar said with a smirk
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"So that's the plan" the hairy bulborb said
"yep" the blue pikmin said
"that's uhhh...pretty stupid" the hairy bulborb said
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well thats the first chapter...oh yeah uhhh
will jerry find out his real name?
will the pikmin get a piece to the teleporter(or so they think it is)?
will I learn to capitalize names?
Find out in the next chapter!!