"What?" I wondered sleepily. I opened my eyes for a second to look around at what was happening. I couldn't see anything, and my eye lids quickly began to feel heavy. My eyes drooped and shut again. Everything sounded far away from me. When I opened my eyes again nothing existed except darkness.

"You!" An overly loud voice bellowed. The voice sounded familier, but I couldn't figure out who it was. My eyes started to shut again when I realised who the voice belonged to. The very loud voice was loudred. My eyes shot open and I gasped quickly.

"Loudred! But you..." I said, scared at how this could be happening.

"Why didn't you help us? You could have saved us." Another voice asked, sadness and disappointment filled its voice. I was certain of who the voice came from. The voice had to belong to chatot.

"Friendly friends don't let friends die." Another voice said. The voice sounded childish, but very deep and disappointed. It was wigglytuff.

"I'm sorry I couldn't help you!" I yelled, scared at the spirits haunting me.

"I agree with the guildmaster. You let us die in the fire." Chatot yelled. I winced when he said the word fire.

"Yeah!" A lot of new voices screamed, appearing completely out of nowhere.

"The pain was agonizing, EEK!" Sunflora yelled.

"I'm sorry... I'm not strong enough to prevent death." I said. A single tear started falling from my face.

"That's still no excuse. You're a kid, but letting us die was a horrible and horrendously despicable thing to do." Chatot scolded.

"Yeah!" Everyone agreed loudly.

"I said I'm sorry, is there anything that can make it up to you!" I pleaded. Multiple tears began to fall from my eyes, and they would fall forever into the black oblivion below me.

"You could die yourself." Crogunk suggested.

"I'm sorry, please, forgive me!" I yelled.

"No, we won't, however, crogunk's suggestion isn't to bad of an idea." Chatot said. I was crying, tears were streaming down my face.

"I couldn't help. I'm just a kid, a useless kid!" I yelled.

"Yes, kid!" Chatot yelled. Everyone joined in, shouting "Kid! Kid! Kid! Kid!"

Their voices suddenly got deeper and became one single voice. It frightened me more than anything else. It wasn't until the peak of my fear that what their yelling changed to something else.

It changed to "Kid! Kid! Wake up!"

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Well, I need OC's. I need Outlaws and heroes. The first OC will be posted after chapter 5, because those five

are for character development and introduction to new characters that I came up with.

Here is the info that I need:

Name ( Unless an outlaw)

Pokémon species.

Move set.

Notable characteristics. (Shiny, scars, ect.)

How they behave.

What other Pokémon are in the group?

For outlaws only:

Why they were arrested? (Optional)

Will they join a group? If so, why? (i.e: They wanted to make up for their past crimes.)

What rank were they? (Only if you answered the optional question above)

For hero Pokémon only:

Where are they from? (Be creative, I'll accept any OC town that's not vulgar.)

Do they have somebody they love?

What's the reason they keep fighting in this seemingly hopeless world?

I'll accept OC's, but any names that swear, or are puns that are vulgar I will not accept.

I fixed a typo and corrected the spacing a little.

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1/15/14: I decided to fix up the chapters a little. Expect more updated chapters!