Hi there. I have currently hit a wall with chapter 11 so it may be a while till that's out. So in the meantime, I will be editing this and working on my other stories. So now here is the new and improved 1st chapter.
It was a bright and sunny day in Equestria and Twilight, as usual, was inside her new castle absorbed in a book.
The book she was reading was a very interesting story about a creature who took over Equestria and a shy, yet brave mare who chooses to be his prisoner in order to save Equestria. And while she is his prisoner she begins to see the good in him and they become friends, and are happy together until one day, it was the mares birth day and all she wants is to see the friends she had left behind. It took a little convincing but eventually he brought her friends to his land and lots of crazy things happened and he forced the mare to leave. But then during their separation they realized they loved each other. And after a few days the mare, with the help of her friends, travels to his land. But on the way they run into timber wolves and were eventually separated from each other. And right before a timber wolf pounced on the young mare, her true love saved her and her friends. He then took them to his land and helped them recover.
And that was as far as she had read. She continued to read as she was desperate to see if the mare would confess her feelings to the creature she loved.
Twilight squealed in delight when both of them confessed, and kissed!
"Wow this book is one of the best books ever!" She squealed as she finished the chapter. "Who wrote this?" She wondered aloud as she looked at the cover of the book and in fancy writing it said 'By Disney Fanatic' "I have never heard of her before but man this is good." She sighed as she began the 18th and final chapter 'The Wedding'
Twilight read for a while till she was done. And when she finished she put it back on the shelf it had come from. "You know that reminded me of 'pony and the beast' Fluttershy's favorite story. Maybe I should recommend this to her sometime." Twilight said as she scanned the shelves for a new book to read. In an instant she found a sequel to the book she had just been reading.
"Wow a sequel? How could I have not known about these sooner?" She said as she looked at the book. As much as she wanted to read it she needed to take a break. So, she went to her throne room and looked around it a little. She saw the map she and her friends had discovered not to long ago then she looked up at the tree root chandelier her friends had made for her. She flew up and looked at some of the memories that were in the gems. The first one she looked at was an image of the day that cadence had visited and Discord had messed with them and pretended to be sick. She laughed lightly in fondness of the memory. Will he ever stop causing trouble? She thought to herself. Probably not
The next one she looked at was an image of the party Pinkie had thrown for her when she had first come to Ponyville. And the next one she looked at was an image of the day Pinkie had gone to the Mirror pool and made a hundred copies of herself.
"I really hope that she never ever does that again" Twilight mumbled to herself. After looking at a few more of the memories, she flew down and walked back to the library.
As she walked in she spotted a brown journal with her cutie mark on the cover. Once upon a time it has Princess Celestia's cutie mark but, since she had given it to Twilight, the cover had been changed.
"You know it's been a while since I've visited my friends at CHS. Maybe i can fit in a visit after the gala in a couple days" Twilight said to herself.
She levitated the book and a quill and began to write a note to Sunset Shimmer.
Well, I made this chapter longer than it used to be! Hope you enjoy!