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Ash: 20
Misty: 20
I. Festival
Mrs. Ketchum: "Ash, tonight's the festival. What would you wear?"
Ash: "Well….I haven't decided yet."
(Misty comes in the room wearing a pink kimono with blue-print roses as designs)
Misty: "Mrs. Ketchum, what do you think of this?"
Ash: "Misty, you're so pretty…I mean you look really pretty in that dress."
Misty: "Thanks…" (blushing)
Pikachu: "Pika-pika-chu-pika-pika." (I bet Ash would love seeing you wearing that everyday Misty)
(heading towards Misty)
Misty: "Thanks Pikachu." (blushing)
(Misty picks up Pikachu)
Misty: "So Ash…what would you wear later?"
Ash: "I have no idea.
Ash: 'I just hope I'll look good because tonight, I'll be telling her the bottled feelings in my heart for a long time.'
After a while…
Ash: "Hi Misty."
Misty: "Hi Ash."
Ash: "So…are you enjoying yourself at the festival?"
Misty: "Yes…"
Ash: "Hey Mist! I just wanna show you to my favorite spot here in Pallet."
Misty: "Sure."
(Ash brought Misty to a cliff)
Misty: "Wow the view of the festival is really amazing here."
Ash: "I know. I used to play here when I was a kid."
Misty: "But you still are a kid."
Ash: "Hey!"
Misty: "Sorry. It's just like you still act as a kid."
Ash: "Really?"
(Ash grabs Misty's waist and pull her into a kiss. After what seems like an hour, the two pulled off, gasping for air)
Misty: "What did you do that for?"
Ash: "I love you Misty Waterflower."
Misty: "I love you too Ash Ketchum."
(They kissed again)