Alright guys this is my first fanfic so go easy on me.......wait maybe not. Anyway enjoy . (Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN POKEMON!!!!)

(This is set while they are having a campfire.)

Ash's POV:

Ash: "sigh.....she's even beautifull when she's angry.........wait why is she shouting?"

Dawn: "Ash!!!! HEELLOO!? Marshmallow on fire here!!!"

Ash screams (like a girl) as he accidently gets startled by this, flicks his burnt marshmallow on his hair which sent him running ALL over the place.

Brock: "sigh" "Dawn go help him out"

Dawn: "Piplup bubblebeam!!!"

The bubblebeam hits Ash's head dead on but knocks him down.

Dawn: "Seriously? This is like the third time in two weeks what is going in through that messy hair brained head of yours?"

Ash: "sigh....sorry I'm just tired that's all" he said as he blushed a little.

Dawn: "oh...ok lets get you to sleep then" she said in a nicer tone.

Brock was looking at Ash for some reason (you guys know why)

(in the tent)

Dawn comes in to see Ash playing with Aipom and Pikachu.

Dawn: "HEY!! I thought you said you were tired!!!"

Ash: "well....uh..hehehe....guess not"

Dawn POV

Dawn: "wow he is so hot and his cute lil face just makes me wanna.........wait......no way.....do I........like him?"

Ash: "Alright I guess it's lights o......"

Dawn: "WAIT....um....um....where's brock? I can't just let this chance slip by!!"

Ash: "oh, he's heading back to veilstone he'll be back tommorrow"

Dawn: "oh....uh......gonna take some time before he gets back huh? Eheheheh......"sigh""

Ash:"i'm bored"

Dawn: "Yea me too"

Ash: "wait why don't we play with our poke........oh wait yea they're at the pokemon center"

Dawn: "I'm gonna die of boredom......"sigh" ....wait....hmmm......I wonder" "hey ash do u wanna do it?"

Ash: "......WHAT!?!?"

Dawn: "well I've never done it before so why not?"

Ash: "......I guess it's alright then"

Dawn: "just make sure you pull out ok?"

Ash: "I'll try"

And so their clothes littered the floor as they started. And then in the morning.

Brock: "RISE AND SHINE!!

Ash and Dawn tiredly woke up as they got ready.

Ash: "alright then to Mt Coronet!!!"

A week later

Brock: "we're gonna have to stop at this hotel"

Dawn: "Alright it's finally nice to rest in Veilsto......."

(dawn pukes)

Ash and Brock: "OMG Dawn are you ok?"

Dawn: "yea I just need to go to the bathroom"

(2hrs later)

Ash: "sheesh what could be taking her so long?"

Brock: "you know girls"

Ash: "no only you know"

As they both laugh Dawn breaks out of the bathroom

Dawn: "I hate u Ash I never wanna see you again!!"

Ash: "what!?"

Brock: "quick go after her I'll take care of the pokemon"

As Ash chases her into the lonely streets Dawn collapses and starts to cry

Ash: "whats wrong?"

Dawn: "SCREW YOU!! I never wanna see you again"

As this scene happens Kenny with an angry face appears UH OH and you guys know how much Kenny is overprotective of Dawn.

Well that's it guys I hope to make the next chapter soon!!