DIVERGENT

Tris POV

I became Dauntless!I'm Dauntless now!I look at Peter and I see what I never thought I would was smiling,even though I ranked ...I need to think more about it...Just after 3 minutes or so,Peter looked at me and smiled really wide.It looked like his face hurt really MY FUCKING GOD!WHAT WAS THAT?!Peter can't actually like me,can he?There is a lot of reasons why he DOESN'T like me:we are enemies,he threw me over the chasm,he beat the shit out of me,calls me Stiff and almost murdered what I see in his eyes surprises and shocks me at once.I see care,warmth and love.Love?Thank God he feels the the hell?Did I just admitted I liked Peter?Of all people,Peter?My worst enemy?Oh just gets weirder by each second I argue with myself in my everyone happily babbles and leaves the training room (AN-training room,right?ps-I'm not AN person,so there won't be or gonna be only a bit of AN's).I stand there for about 2 minutes before I notice what Peter stands beside me and stares at me."Why are you still here,plus staring at me?"-I ask Peter,but I didn't expect him to answer me."And you,why are you here?"-he asks,avoiding my other question."I'm here because I was deeply in thought before I was rudely interrupted and don't avoid my question,why are you keep staring at me?"-I ask."I was staring at you because I like you Tris!You are beautiful,gorgeous,sweet,nice,very hot,selfless girl"-he answers.I am shocked,not so much though,I suspected it,but never imagined it was I catch him staring at me.I feel warm when he looks at me."Congrats,by the way"-Peter congratulated Peter just congratulated me?Even though he is 3rd (3rd,right?I don't remember...Sorry if it's wrong).I just hugged Peter.What did you do Tris?He hugged me then I did unexpected.I kissed Peter.I licked his lower lip and Peter opened his mouth for me to explore.I gladly explore his mouth,lick every inch where I could about 2 minutes of exploring Peter's mouth we both break for air at the same 30 seconds of sucking air,Peter leans in and licks my bottom lip.I decide to tease him a bit,so I don't open my mouth for 1 minute of trying,and ending with nothing,Peter started made a puppy dog face,which I couldn't resist to,so I lean into him,but let Peter kiss came from Erudite,so he is started kissing forcefully,he licked my bottom lip,I gladly open my mouth,and we kiss for a little about a minute,we brake off for suck air in like crazy,desperate to ,I decide to lean and kiss Peter.I lick his bottom lip,asking for entrance,which he gives me gladly.I shove my tongue into Peter's mouth and explore it one more little kiss,turns into make out ,too soon for my taste licked my bottom lip I let him in anyway,I don't think my brain even functioned,then his hands,soon land on my butt,but I really don't care,'cuz I'm enjoying this,how I'm enjoying this!The best moment of my life,at least for heated make out session,I said "Petey,we don't have a place right now,so let's continue this tommorow?Ok?"."Yea,that"-Peter said as he scratched the back of his head."Yea,let's continue tomorrow,but get the apartment next to mine"-Petey said with a grin spread across his face."Yes,I'll get the one next to yours"-I replied with a huge smirk on my face."We probably should get going,our friends would get suspicious"-I broke the silence."So,we are a thing?"-Peter asked,shyly."Do you want us to be?"-I ask."Yeahhh"-Petey says after a second,he realizes what he said that out loud and blushed crimson red,a second later we went to the transfer dorm.

The next day.

"Hey,Petey"-I say to Peter once he wakes up."Petey?"-he asks me."Yeah,like it or not?I won't be mad,promise"-I babble as he smiles at me."Everyone is already out,so we can make out for a little?"-Petey-bear asks me carefully trying to read my expression,but I only smiled and nodded.I leaned in and kissed .First I licked his lower lip for entrance,and he opened his mouth quickly.I sweetly shove my tongue in.I explore to me already known ,how I loved his mouth...Then Petey-bear licked my lower lip.I opened my mouth as quickly as I can,and give him access to my 'not-so-bad-mouth'.He licked every centimeter of my mouth.I really loved feeling his tongue inside my Peter moved his hands to my butt.I said nothing,but kissed him smiled widely into the kiss."Tris,please say when you are uncomfortable,I won't be mad,I like you too much"-Peter says in the most caring voice I ever heard coming out of his mouth."I am comfortable,but I have a fear of intimacy"-I say as quiet as I can,but he still hears immediately pulls his hands off my butt."No,Peter"-I say sternly."I liked your hands that way"-I say,without any fear to my just smiled as wide as galaxy is and kissed me.I really enjoyed his hands on my butt .What the hell?I ask myself,but don't find any answer for just kiss for awhile."Come on,Petey-bear,we are going to choose our apartments ,right now"-I say as calm as I can,but honestly I can't wait to overcome my fear of intimacy with him!I so excited!Peter's smile widened,if that's even possible.I love his smile.I also love the real Peter I just admitted I loved Peter?I guess I did,but I won't admit it to Petey for a little while.

SO,HOW WAS THAT?MY FIRST FANFIC!PLEASE DON'T JUDGE REALLY HARSH IF YOU THINK IT'S BAD.I ALSO WANNA SAY NOT TO WRITE MEAN,HARSH REVIEWS FOR MY FANFIC.I KNOW,I KNOW,I SAID REVIEW,BUT PLEASE DON'T BE MEAN!MY FIRST,FANFIC,REMEMBER?SO,BASICALLY JUST POINT OUT MISTAKES AND STUFF YOU DIDN'T LIKE,MAYBE TO MAKE IT LONGER,OR WRITE IT A LITTLE REVIEW IF YOU LIKED IT (PLEASE!),WRITE WHAT YOU REALLY LIKED AND I'LL TRY TO PUT IT ON MY OTHER IF YOU DIDN'T LIKED SOMETHING,WROTE ABOUT IT APPROPRIATELY,I WILL TRY TO WRITE IT BY YOUR ,FINALLY I WILL WRITE SOME OF YOUR IDEAS WHEN I RUN OUT OF MY OWN.I WILL WRITE AN'S LIKE THIS AT THE END OF EACH CHAPTER,SO YOU BETTER READ IT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO MISS SOME OF MY CHAPTER CONTESTS,I WILL EDIT THE BEST I LIKED AND POST YOUR NAME (USERNAME) IN MY CHAPTER (WROTE BY YOU) TO CONGRATULATE YOU,AND SAY MY THANKS FOR IDEA,ALSO I WILL POST ALL USERNAMES OF PEOPLE WHO GAVE ME THEIR ,IF YOU DIDN'T WIN IN COMPETITION LIKE THIS,I PROBABLY SAVED YOU CHAPTER FOR LATER.I WILL DO THIS CONTESTS ONCE IN AWHILE,MAYBE ONCE A I WILL ALSO DO CHARACTER YOU WRITE YOUR IDEAS OF NEW CHARACTER IN PM (PRIVATE MESSAGING).I WON'T DO CHARACTER CONTEST AS OFTEN AS I WILL DO CHAPTER THE CHAPTER CONTEST AND CHARACTER CONTEST AND WHATEVER CONTESTS I WILL HAVE IN MIND:PLEASE PM ME,DO NOT WRITE IN REVIEW,BECAUSE PEOPLE CAN BE MEAN SOMETIMES AND STEAL YOUR IDEAS.I DID NOT STEAL MY IDEA.M RATED YOU HATE PETER AND TRIS SHIPPERS,GIVE IT A TRY OR DON'T READ IT AT TIME IS INDIANA MY PANCAKES AND LOVE YA ALL FOR READING THIS!BTW I'M RUSSIAN,SO DON'T JUDGE MY SPELLING.I LIVE IN US FOR 2 YEARS NOW,HERE COMES THE 3RD ONE!ALSO WRITE YOUR REQUESTS!(PM,REMEMBER!)I WILL WRITE NEXT CHAPTER WHEN I'LL HAVE 2 REVIEWS (DON'T CARE IF FROM THE SAME PERSON)

YOURS TRULY,

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