hello,
first of all, I just want you to know that I am French, and aslo that it is new for me to write in english. So, if you find mistakes, which I am sure you will, please tell me, so I can correct them
second of all, this story is quite weird (so is the show by the way). I have absolutely no idea of how many chapters there will be. This story is about Bea tring to have his father back from the Dark One. I just hope you are gonna like it.
It as a long time ago, in a magic land. You see, in this magic land, you could find all your favourites fairytales characters . From Snow White, to Frankenstein, and through Lancelot. Every one. But there were two magician in that world, really powerful, eager to get more and more power. One of them was named The Evil Queen. She was reigning over the whole land, terrifying everyone. She what not the most powerful, because there was another magician. That wizard was Rumplestiltskin. He became a magician after kill the Dark One. But anyone who does it, becomes it. And that is what happened.
Rumplestiltskin had a son, before he turned into the Dark One. Bealfire he was named. He was left to his father after her mother left them. He really loved his father since, but when he turned into the monster he is now, all his friends stared to be afraid of his father, because that last one could not stand his son to be bullied. He started to hate him. He tried to make him understand he wanted him back, he wanted his father back, even if he was a coward, no one could be scared of him anymore. So he left him, looking for someone who could help him. Despite his powerful powers, Rumple never could find his son.
Here is where our journey begins.
that is all, for the moment. but we can say it is just a way to make you know what might happen.
so, how was it ? should I end it quickly or make it longer than it is supposed to be ? and do not forget the mistakes please.