Ok, first off, this is not a mary sue, got it, not a mary sue!!!!
The last thing I would want to do is put myself in the place of trying to be with a cartoon.( To all the people who do it: Please don't get mad at me).Next, I like to use Random charactors, it's just what I like to use. In my eyes, whinry just wasn't fit for this fan fiction. Please review!!!
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Edward flexed his hand. After all this time he still Didn't manage to get his arm back, even if he did get Al's body back, so what, it still wasn't helping him. For years he had this metal arm, and it's been so long he forgot why a real arm should be any better.As he laid in the bed, He pondered about the event of the next day, come to think of it, everyday was a struggle, so there was nothing to look forward to. He took in a smooth soothing breath to make himself relax, and his eyes slowly closed as he felt his body try to slip away to a peaceful slumber.
(Knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock)
Edwards eyes snapped open, and at 1:00 AM he was a bit suspicious when approaching the door. Disappointed, he sat up and brushed his golden hair out of his face.With a yawn, even though he wasn't asleep, he made an attempt to to crawl out of bed only to stumble and hit the floor. Finally, he managed to crawl to the window, slowly creeping on his hands and knees to make sure there would be no more accidents. When he reached the window he stood up slowly and peered outside. There stood a girl with black hair, a form fitting white hoodie, some blue jeans, and a small bag. He wanted to go downstairs and see her better, but his mind refrained from that. She looked innocent, but she was still a stranger. Acting on his brain, he unlocked the latch and pulled the window open." Up here!" He shouted. The girl broke her concentration from the door and was now looking up and focused on Edward. She was very nervous and shaky looking, as if she was running out of time." Please hear me out, I've gotten myself into some real trouble and just need somewhere to sit for a while." she shouted." Look, it'll only be for a few hours, it's one something now so I'll be out at like...seven." She continued.
Edward thought for a minute, then shook his head." No." he said.
She lowered her head in disappointment and wrapped her arms around herself. Looking at her he couldn't help but ask" Why are you outside knocking on people's doors so late, don't you know people are trying to sleep?" He scratched his head and leaned over, waiting for a reply.
" I have no where to go." she pleaded.
By this time Edward was deep with feeings of tiredness and a heavy head. It was probably because he was so tired the thought of inviting a complete stranger in his house didn't seem so bad. She did look helpless, and she she did say she would only be there for about 6 hours." Maybe everything will be fine" he thought to himself.
After about 3 minutes of thinking to himself he finally made his choice. " Hold on, let me put on some clothes." he shouted.
He walked to the closet looking for something to wear." A robe should be fine, I'll just put some pants on under them." he said to himself.
After putting on his clothes he headed down the stairs and promptly to the door. As he reached for the door he felt a rush go through his body. His heart sped up and his face felt hot. He knew exactly what it was. He was nervous. Never the less he still opened the door to let her in.
" Finally" She smiled. She stepped in and closed the door for him." Don't think I'm some freaky person...ok?"
Edward stared at her, not sure what to think or say." Everything is way over my head right know" he started. Then something caught his eye. He notice she was wearing a diamond necklace. It was Pure gold molded into the shape of a heart with Diamonds Embedded in the sides and a ruby heart in the middle. It was defiantly catchy, either she was rich, or she was a thief." That necklace looks nice." he said.
" Oh, this old thing" she blush." my boyfriend got it for me a year ago.". She tucked the necklace into her hoodie, and looked around." So, what was your name?"
" You can call me Ed."
" Ok Ed"
" Whats your name?'
She glanced at her necklace. Then looked at him." You can call me Diamond."
" Diamond." Ed said Disappointedly.
" Yea whats wrong"
" Well, If you happen to steal something from me and I call the police, What do you expect me to say: I don't know officer, she didn't tell me her real name, but she did say that her nickname was Diamond."
She looked disappointed." You'll just have to trust me like I'll have to trust you."
He didn't know what it was, but for a minute, she made him feel like everything was ok. He decided that arguing over a name would just be a waste of time, and for now he'll just have to take her advice and trust her.
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Ok, The next chapter should be better, I'll try to make an update by Thursday, but in the mean time a review would be nice, I want to know you think
Thanks!!
