For those of you how have been watching this story, yes, I'm rewriting it. If you like it, please, say so.
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The darkness of the universe was all the gods knew but as the universe's heart calmed and cooled, the gods came together and began to create their light and their followers. Every specie destined for higher intelligence was birthed from their god, but rarest of all was the Irken gods, twins, Caz of the light and Zac of the dark, both with views on how the Irks should begin their start on life.
Caz told the Irks that would listen that to become better than the rest, their morals and standards had to work in everyone's favor. Caz's white eyes saw promise in his listeners and he could see the good in all of them but their loyalty was tested when Caz's brother, Zac, his black eyes full of deceit, began his speech on Irk's true calling. He told them that controlling the universe was just as good and having everything in everyone's favor. The Irks would control all species that the other gods birthed and live the life of luxury as their slaves worked for them.
The idea shocked the young Irks but they saw the genius in the thought. Caz's anger at his twin boiled over to the point of a show down, both Irken gods using the elements of the universe against the other. The heart of the universe ached with pain and sadness as the two gods fought and as the other gods tried to stop the fighting they were either killed or sealed away, never to see the universe's face again. The heart of the universe cried out in pain, both Caz and Zac finally ceasing their quarrel to hear the call. Both saw the destruction and found that they could no longer support the Irks with the power they displayed.
The heart pleaded with the both of them to never fight again and to put their differences aside for the good of the rest of the universe. Caz and Zac agreed and as a binding seal, their palms were cut and from the wounds spilled good and evil, light and dark. The blood drips mixed together until their younger brother Shadow, his warm gray eyes full of innocence, was birthed. The universe's heart told the new god that he was to be taught by both of his siblings, to learn the ways of both light and dark.
As the universe began to grow from this point on, the universe's heart began to take upon the act of posing as the lesser species. After a while, the heart found itself enjoying the Meekrobs, Vortians and Irks the most as it had free range and access to many weapons and technology that other races did not.
So that by this time, the Irks and the rest of the aliens in the universe had begun to utilize the elements that their planets provided and buildings and weapons sprung up from the dust, their civilizations growing quickly. Caz showed Shadow the good in the Irks and how to make good by giving without receiving and helping those who needed help. Zac showed the evil in the Irks and showed Shadow how to implant thoughts of wickedness into their minds.
In the end, Shadow found himself immersed in evil, becoming more and more like Zac. Caz found that the Irks, who were now reaching their peak in economic stature, were also becoming wicked demons. The white-eyed Irken god was ready to give up on the lives he and his brother created, until he found that a Vortian scientist was trying to replicate he and his brother's miraculous abilities.
The Vortians had been successful in their attempts, their program D.O.M.I.A., or Declarative Operation for Mining Irken Abilities, had already produced ten healthy Irken clones that held miraculous abilities. As Caz observed the program and the Vortains that ran it, he and his brothers were met with a sad realization: the Vortains were creating these Irks to narrow the search for the heart of the universe.
Caz, Zac and Shadow found themselves breaking into the facility and splicing their blood with the blood of the earlier clones, creating a new smeet and the universe's next planned body. Caz gave the smeet compassion and innocence while Zac gave him strength and quick comprehension. Shadow endowed the smeet with fast reflexes and bubbling cuteness. The gods then gave the smeet the ability to wield the elements of the universe for his own protection and the smeet's eyes turned a soft Pacific blue as he came to life, the innocence inside his bubbling over as he took his first breath.
The Irken gods left the smeet to stay with his half siblings but a few months later was transferred secretly to an Irken Hatchery after his ten other half siblings were brutally murdered by the Tallest Chi. Chi was forced to resign to make room for Tallests Red and Purple a few months after that.
The smeet managed to take on Irken society, as brutal as it was, but was forced to wear a fake PAK seeing as his body had no need for a real one. All he knew was pain and neglect but seeing as he was destined for greater things, the road he would soon journey would be the most difficult.
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I hope this explains a bit more into the Eclipse story and I'd like to hear what you think.