Hello, this is TheRavensCarnage here. I would like to point out that this is the VERY, very first upload and it is obviously missing quite a bit. Is it enough to make you want to read the next chapter? Is it no where near enough?
But anyway, feel free to bash me or to point out each and every flaw. The purpose of this is to express my writing and to become better at it anyway.
Retrace Null: How did this happen?
My past? I barely remember any of it. I have vague memories of what might be it, however I only brush them off as a sick nightmare. My memory is of someone that I never want to meet again.
Blood. That's the first thing that I remember. Blood was everywhere; along the walls, the floor, the ceiling… The entire house seemed to have it splattered over the pure white space that I had called home. At least, I think that is what I called it. My family was strewn across everything; they were in pieces.
I had ventured out of my room that night. This is the worst mistake that I had ever made, or will ever make. The smell that was being emitted by the corpses made me puke. I didn't think that I would ever come across such a smell, but I did. I thought that this was the worst thing I could ever see with my own eyes; but I was wrong.
My adopted brother, Claude Alldwen, was standing at the end of the Hallway. Blood was dripping down his hair and arms, though no wound could be seen. He had twirled in a circle with a smile on his face. I wasn't even sure that he was human anymore, and my suspicions will be intensified after his next bizarre act.
With inhuman speed, he had lunged for me. I saw a final flash of metal before my eyes went dark. I remember the feeling of blood falling down my front. My blood. And even though my eyes had gone dark and I felt as if I was going to die, I could still hear is voice. That cruel, singsong voice. "See you in another lifetime, and hopefully you can survive with that pathetic mindset of yours! ~" His voice dripped with Malice.
I remember getting up. I remember seeing something that I shouldn't have seen. I just… Can't remember. It physically hurts my head when I think of this. My memories shouldn't even be called reality…. But can I find the truth?
This is the end of the First chapter or the "before story" chapter. This is just a test and I may or may not get rid of it later.