Hi everyone reading my story on a whim here. I'm a beginner in this story making fanfiction bussiness stuff. So some contructive critism would be nice.
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Summary: Kagome higurashi 10 year old girl falls through her family well 1000 years in the past and meets a very strange boy with a sword three times his size.
A unlikely team
"I'm going to play outside for a while mama!" A newly 10 year old kagome said skipping outside the house to play with her new bouncy ball.
"Alright sweety but don't wonder to fall are go in the well house its dangerous." the girls mother yelled.
"Alright!" Kagome was having so much fun with her gift. You could bounce on it, roll with it, throw it, she was having a blast! Then her cat Buyo came running outside with poptart in his mouth and kagomes mom yelling aftet him. Buyo bump unto Kagome making the ball bounce out of her hands and roll into the well house. Now Kagome was always told to follow three simple rules.
1: Don't leave poptarts anywhere where Boyo cam easily grab them.(she should have never shown him nyan cat)
2:Never and i mean Never go in the well house without mama or granpa
3: Never talk to strangers.
"I already broke one rule. Whats one more gonna hurt." kagome said to herself walking to the well. She slowly stepped inside. She wasn't scared or anything like that of the well but she was scared her mother was going to catch her. And that would be realy bad. She took slow and steady steps on the stairs but they creaked everytime she step on one. She made down the stairs and grabbed the ball from next to the well. kagome jumped for joy in accomplishing getting the ball. Suddenly arms shot out from the well and grabbed kagome inside making her drop the ball that made her come in here in the first place.