"My Immortal" was a piece of crap that was famous for it's long length, atrocious spelling and illogical problem solving.
This piece of crap has none of those things.
I do not own Harry Potter or My Immortal.
Hello. My name is Yumi Karasu. I have white hair, pale skin and cold, blue eyes. My clothes are nothing special. I'm currently at a school called Hogwarts, hunting down a monster who calls herself Ebony Way. Have you seen her?
I look up from my weird inner monologue and see a pale teenager wearing a My Chemical Romance T-Shirt walk by. I walk up to him.
"Have you seen a girl called Ebony go by, kid?"
"No," He responded sadly, sniffing. "I wanted to ask her out to a GC concert as well. They're playing in Hogsmede, you know."
Good Charlotte? In my Hogsmeade?
"It's more likely than I think," I muttered to myself. Then looked back at the boy. He said he was going to ask the monster out on a date, so maybe f I could track him, I'd get a hold on her.
"Hey, what's your name?"
"....Draco Malfoy!" he called back.
Draco..? No way. He's too sensitive and soppy to be Malfoy. He even answered me politely when I asked him about his love life.
This was wrong.
I started to chase after him, but slipped on something and fell onto the stone floor.
Pinching my nose, I whipped my head around to see what had slipped me up. A piece of paper caught my attention. As I touched it, I was almost overwhelmed by the sudden urge to wear clothes from Hot Topic. It read:
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!
So this was how she was controlling Malfoy. I put the paper in my jeans pocket and hurried off.