Hi everyone this is my very first gravitation fanfic so let me know what you think of it bad, good or crap or what i should do to improve the story. So on with the info.
this is the edit story thanks to clnv for helping mewith this story.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gravitation or any characters in this story. They belong to Maki Murakami and the publisher Gentosha and Tokyopop
Summery: Shu-chan came back from work and found Ruichi in Yuki's bed while Yuki was on top of Ryu. And Shu. Confronts them.
Ages for this story are
Shuichi Shondo-----21
Ruichi Skama-------34
Eiri Yuki-------------26
Masaki----------------23
Betray
Shuichi arrives back from talking with Touma. He places his key in the door
to unlock it and toes off his shoes.
"Yuuuuki, I'm home!"
When no one answers, he checks the kitchen, the study, the bathroom, and even
the washer and dryer. A noise draws his attention to the bedroom. He stops
by the door and hears the sounds of moaning from within.
Opening the door slowly, he gets the shock of his life to see Yuki pumping in
and out of Ruichi. Yuki turns his head to see Suichi's sad face before he
disappears.
Shuichi runs towards the front door, but Yuki grabs him by the arm before he
gets there. Shuichi slaps him on the cheek.
"Yuki, if you ever loved me, then how the ** can you do this to me?" he
cries.
"I never said I loved you," Yuki answers. "You were just a fling."
With those words, Shuichi runs from the apartment.
Instead of going to Hiro's apartment, he goes to his other friend's place to
get away. When he reaches Masaki, he is welcomed and offered a drink.
"Tea would be fine," he answers, and then begins to tell Masaki everything
that has happened. "I'm just so tired of him treating me like a toy and not
loving me like I love him."
Masaki takes in everything that Shuichi says. He hates to see him get hurt
and finally comes up with a way to help.
"Shuichi, I think you should leave Japan and start fresh."
Shuichi thinks that is a good idea, but asks, "What about Touma? He will
find me."
"Then why don't you come to LA with me and my band?" Masaki asks. "We'll
make sure that Touma or anyone else will never find you."
Shuichi thinks about it and decides to go to LA to start over. So that rainy
night, the Shuichi Shindo that everyone knew, left Japan for a new life.
this is the edted stroy Please review. let me know how it turns out and any ideals how I can make it better and I will be putting chap.2 up within a day or two. Thanks for reading my story. and thanks to a awsome beta reader clnv
