so this starts at the MK club opening when eddie and loren are standing outside staring at each others eyes.


eddie's thoughts: i can't believe she cheated on me. how long has this been going on. and with tyler? why? i have to end it with her fast? i can't believe i was actually thinking about proposing to her tonight. i am so glad i didn't. why am i even thinking about chloe right now. i'm standing out staring at this beautiful girl who looks so familiar to me. i feel like i know her. but from where? how? why am i not talking to her? i want to know her. listen to me...i just found out that my girlfriend is cheating on me and all i really want to think about i the beautiful brunette that is standing in front of me. i should talk to her. she's saying something.

girl: i'm sorry about what just happened in there. god her voice sounds so amazing. snap out of it eddie and say something back!

eddie: no don't worry about it, it's not your fault. i'm the fool her

girl: no you're not. you didn't do anything wrong. from what i know you see the good in people, that's not your fault. she hurt you not the other way around, it's her fault not yours.

god i just want to keep talking to her all night

eddie: thanks i guess, maybe your right. i don't know really.

girl: i know i'm right. you seem to be a genuinely good person. if only more men were like you.

eddie: (stepping closer to her) what do you mean by that?

girl: oh what? oh umm nothing nothing at all don't worry about it

eddie: no no no...wait a minute. you know what happened with me. now i want to know what happened to make you doubt all men.

girl: okay...

eddie: first tell me your name

girl: loren...loren tate

eddie: well it's nice to meet you loren tate

loren: you to...eddie duran

eddie: okay. so now, tell me why you doubt men.

loren: umm, well, gosh this is really embarrassing

eddie: don't worry. i'm not gonna judge you. just take your time, and tell me why.

loren: my dad left. he left when i was little and i don't know i guess seeing my mom go through that heartbreak i just kinda started doubting men thinking they would always hurt me, and so far they have all proved me right and probably will continue to until i die.

eddie: well that's where you're wrong miss loren tate...i would never hurt you

loren: (nodding hesitantly) i believe you

eddie: good. so how old were you when he left?

loren: i was 4

eddie: so your 18 now?

loren: yes.

girl: LO!

loren: what mel?

mel: i am so sorry to interrupt, especially since you're talking to eddie duran...OH MY GOD THAT'S SO COOL! anyways back to seriousness. you have a phone call. it's some hospital.

loren looked very scared and confused she spoke in a small voice: put it on speaker.

phone convo

person: hello is this loren tate

loren: yes this is she

person: i am so sorry to tell you this, but we have your mother nora tate here in our morgue

loren froze not knowing what to think. her mom was dead? that's not possible, but they said it was her.


mel hung up the phone

mel: lo...are you okay?

loren: what yeah of course i'm okay why wouldn't i be.

mel: well they just said that your mom was de...

loren: no! there is no way she's gone. there's no way. she wouldn't leave me like that. she wouldn't. their lying. that's just some sick joke. i'm not going to believe that. no she's not gone she's not gone.

mel: lo...

loren: no mel no (she broke down crying)

loren was crying for a a little bit when she felt a pair of strong arms wrap around her. she knew it wasn't mel, so it had to be eddie. she immediately relaxed in his arms and held on to him while crying her eyes out. eddie just held onto loren tightly making sure she knew she was safe with him and that everything would be okay. just then someone walked out of the club to see what was going on...