Ice, Fire, Wind, and Human
Chapter1: Fire
I don't own the Yu Yu Hakusho characters (I wish I did). I just tell them what to do in my story. I do own Shannon, Angel, Jasmine, Elisa, Marshall, Kenzie (That's Me) and the other characters not normally seen in the show.
This is my first fanfiction ever so work with me if it's not perfect. I know Hiei would never act likes this but I think it's cute. Please R+R (Read and Review). I would like to know how my first fanfiction was. Oh Yeah anything in italics is a thought made by one the characters and anything with ( ) around it are my thoughts. Enjoy The Story!!!!!!!
" HELP!!! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!!! , LEAVE ME ALONE!!!". Hiei (who was sitting in a tree nearby) heard this and went to see who was making that noise. He found a human girl being chased by other humans. The girl had light brown hair with two pintails in the front and the rest of her hair in the back ( kind of like Yukina) to Hiei it looked like she had emerald green eyes. Hiei noticed something about the humans chasing her. They were demons in disguise. "Why are they chasing her, Demons like that don't just chase humans for the fun of it" Hiei thought to himself as he watched them chase her to a dead end. " Just come quietly and we promise we won't hurt you' one of them said to her. " Leave Me Alone" she yelled then she started to glow. Hiei watched in amazement while she started to float. She looked straight at the demons and blasted them with an ice beam of some sort. It knocked the demons down but not unconscious. They stood up and surrounded her. She shot one of them but the one on the opposite side if her hit her with a glass bottle (which broke on her head .OUCH!!!). She fell on the ground and was knock unconscious. The demons started to beat the girl up. Hiei jumped in at this point, one of them cut him on the arm but he killed all of the demons. He picked the girl up and decided to bring her to Kurama's house . "Something's different about this human, I don't think she's fully human" Hiei thought looking down at her. He finally got to Kurama's house
" Hey Kurama are you in here are you at that thing called "School" Hiei yelled into Kurama's window.
"Yes Hiei I'm here what do you ne.." Kurama was cut off when he saw the beat up girl in Hiei's arms.
Kurama gave Hiei a silly grin. " What??" Hiei asked giving him a cold stare.
" Are you starting to like humans because you saved a girl, a mortal girl." Kurama said taking the girl from Hiei. " I don't think she's fully human, I think she's part demon" Hiei yelled back." Just treat her wounds and we can ask her when she wakes up" Kurama treated the girls wounds." You're going to have to watch over her" Kurama said to Hiei. " ME WHY???" Hiei yelled back" Because me and mother are going on vacation and won't be back for awhile" " Feh , fine as long as she's not fully human" Hiei said turning a way from Kurama
~~~~ * 2 hours later * ~~~~
" She is waking up, that's good" Kurama said turning around from his computer. The girl opened her eyes and blinked a few times. She sat up and looked around
" Kuso, my head feels like it got hit by a truck, Where am I and who are you? She asked looking at Kurama.
" Oh well I'm Kurama and that's. "Hiei and I'm the one that saved you" Hiei introduced himself cutting off Kurama. Hiei stood up from the corner he was sitting in. The girl gave him a cold stare.
" What are you looking at???" Hiei said giving her a colder stare. "
You're a bad demon just like the ones chasing me" She said looking away.
" Oh don't worry about Hiei ha can't hurt a fly" Kurama said pointing at Hiei. " HEY KURAMA I HEARD THAT, I'M NOT TO WEAK TO CUT YOU IN HALF" Hiei yelled at Kurama and tried to find his sword but couldn't.
" Hey looking for this" The girl yelled holding up Hiei's sword. "HEY GIVE THAT BACK YOU YAROU!!!" The girl gave him a cold stare. " Fine" she stared at the sword and it started to float. Hiei and Kurama watched in amazement as she floated it to Hiei.
" So what's your name" Kurama asked trying to change the subject. "
Oh my name, its MacKenzie but my friends call me Kenzie," She said giving Kurama a smile
" Your not fully human are you???" Hiei asked her sitting next to her on the bed.
" Not really I'm only one fourth human, see my dad was half wind demon and half fire demon and my mother was half human and half ice demon so I'm one fourth ice, fire, and wind demon and one fourth human. My appearance is all human though but I can change my appearance to what kind of demon attack I need to bet my opponent ( like she can change into a ice demon appearance if he wants to use ice attacks) ." Kenzie explained to both Hiei and Kurama.
"Oh so you are part of Hiei's race" Kurama said giving a weird grin. " What powers do you have in your fire appearance have" Hiei asked Kenzie. "Umm.. lets see, Flame blasts, Fire balls, and mist of the mortal flame as my strongest" She said to Hiei " What's your strongest attack" she asked wide eyed " Dragon Of The Darkness Flame ( I don't know if that's the exact name for it so sorry if its wrong. If you know the right name then tell me please)." Hiei told her. " It seems she not as bad as you thought Hiei" Kurama said smiling.
"Well at least now I don't have to worry you will kill her when you watch her"
" Hold on he is going to watch me, for how long??" Kenzie blurted out.
"Yeah how long do I have to watch "IT" Kurama" Hiei asked at the same time.
"One month" Kurama said calmly " I spoke to soon, I think Hiei might just kill her" Kurama thought to himself.
" Great...an idiot is going to be watching over me for a month" Kenzie said thinking out load." "Hey I Heard That You Yarou"
Kenzie just glared at him. She and Hiei both stood up, Kenzie was about 1 inch shorter than Hiei. Then she backed up and walked outside. Kenzie just stood there and suddenly a flame went over her. When the smoke cleared Kenzie was different. She had dark red hair with black tipped bangs and in a ponytail so the end of the ponytail had black tips. She had on a black suit with a tight skirt and boots. Hooked on the skirt was a sword just like the one Hiei had. She had a dark red shirt covered by a long black jacket and she had long dark red gloves with it. " Wow, she changed " Kurama and Hiei watched as she walked towards them. " You see me now in my Fire Demon Form" She said looking at Hiei. " Feh, your power doesn't compare to mine" Hiei said with a smirk on his face. " I know because your all fire demon and I'm one fourth." She said but even though I'm one fourth I still have HALF as much power as you" Kenzie smiled and went back to her human form. " So can one of you take me home" " Yes Hiei can" Kurama said " Why Me, Kurama" Hiei yelled " Because you have to know where she lives if you are going to be watching her for a month". " Oh yeah I forgot that I had to watch IT" Hiei said leaning against the doorway. " Hey My Names Not IT it's Kenzie" Kenzie yelled at Hiei. " So are you going to take me home or what?"
So what did you think about my first chapter I think it was good but if you don't tell what I can do better. Well that's about all your going to see of Kurama ( sorry all your Kurama fans() but you will get to see Kenzie's other forms also I'm going to put Keiko and Yusuke in it ( as Boyfriend and Girlfriend ^__^) Well tell me what you think. I'll put up chapter two up really soon. See Ya Later(
Chapter1: Fire
I don't own the Yu Yu Hakusho characters (I wish I did). I just tell them what to do in my story. I do own Shannon, Angel, Jasmine, Elisa, Marshall, Kenzie (That's Me) and the other characters not normally seen in the show.
This is my first fanfiction ever so work with me if it's not perfect. I know Hiei would never act likes this but I think it's cute. Please R+R (Read and Review). I would like to know how my first fanfiction was. Oh Yeah anything in italics is a thought made by one the characters and anything with ( ) around it are my thoughts. Enjoy The Story!!!!!!!
" HELP!!! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!!! , LEAVE ME ALONE!!!". Hiei (who was sitting in a tree nearby) heard this and went to see who was making that noise. He found a human girl being chased by other humans. The girl had light brown hair with two pintails in the front and the rest of her hair in the back ( kind of like Yukina) to Hiei it looked like she had emerald green eyes. Hiei noticed something about the humans chasing her. They were demons in disguise. "Why are they chasing her, Demons like that don't just chase humans for the fun of it" Hiei thought to himself as he watched them chase her to a dead end. " Just come quietly and we promise we won't hurt you' one of them said to her. " Leave Me Alone" she yelled then she started to glow. Hiei watched in amazement while she started to float. She looked straight at the demons and blasted them with an ice beam of some sort. It knocked the demons down but not unconscious. They stood up and surrounded her. She shot one of them but the one on the opposite side if her hit her with a glass bottle (which broke on her head .OUCH!!!). She fell on the ground and was knock unconscious. The demons started to beat the girl up. Hiei jumped in at this point, one of them cut him on the arm but he killed all of the demons. He picked the girl up and decided to bring her to Kurama's house . "Something's different about this human, I don't think she's fully human" Hiei thought looking down at her. He finally got to Kurama's house
" Hey Kurama are you in here are you at that thing called "School" Hiei yelled into Kurama's window.
"Yes Hiei I'm here what do you ne.." Kurama was cut off when he saw the beat up girl in Hiei's arms.
Kurama gave Hiei a silly grin. " What??" Hiei asked giving him a cold stare.
" Are you starting to like humans because you saved a girl, a mortal girl." Kurama said taking the girl from Hiei. " I don't think she's fully human, I think she's part demon" Hiei yelled back." Just treat her wounds and we can ask her when she wakes up" Kurama treated the girls wounds." You're going to have to watch over her" Kurama said to Hiei. " ME WHY???" Hiei yelled back" Because me and mother are going on vacation and won't be back for awhile" " Feh , fine as long as she's not fully human" Hiei said turning a way from Kurama
~~~~ * 2 hours later * ~~~~
" She is waking up, that's good" Kurama said turning around from his computer. The girl opened her eyes and blinked a few times. She sat up and looked around
" Kuso, my head feels like it got hit by a truck, Where am I and who are you? She asked looking at Kurama.
" Oh well I'm Kurama and that's. "Hiei and I'm the one that saved you" Hiei introduced himself cutting off Kurama. Hiei stood up from the corner he was sitting in. The girl gave him a cold stare.
" What are you looking at???" Hiei said giving her a colder stare. "
You're a bad demon just like the ones chasing me" She said looking away.
" Oh don't worry about Hiei ha can't hurt a fly" Kurama said pointing at Hiei. " HEY KURAMA I HEARD THAT, I'M NOT TO WEAK TO CUT YOU IN HALF" Hiei yelled at Kurama and tried to find his sword but couldn't.
" Hey looking for this" The girl yelled holding up Hiei's sword. "HEY GIVE THAT BACK YOU YAROU!!!" The girl gave him a cold stare. " Fine" she stared at the sword and it started to float. Hiei and Kurama watched in amazement as she floated it to Hiei.
" So what's your name" Kurama asked trying to change the subject. "
Oh my name, its MacKenzie but my friends call me Kenzie," She said giving Kurama a smile
" Your not fully human are you???" Hiei asked her sitting next to her on the bed.
" Not really I'm only one fourth human, see my dad was half wind demon and half fire demon and my mother was half human and half ice demon so I'm one fourth ice, fire, and wind demon and one fourth human. My appearance is all human though but I can change my appearance to what kind of demon attack I need to bet my opponent ( like she can change into a ice demon appearance if he wants to use ice attacks) ." Kenzie explained to both Hiei and Kurama.
"Oh so you are part of Hiei's race" Kurama said giving a weird grin. " What powers do you have in your fire appearance have" Hiei asked Kenzie. "Umm.. lets see, Flame blasts, Fire balls, and mist of the mortal flame as my strongest" She said to Hiei " What's your strongest attack" she asked wide eyed " Dragon Of The Darkness Flame ( I don't know if that's the exact name for it so sorry if its wrong. If you know the right name then tell me please)." Hiei told her. " It seems she not as bad as you thought Hiei" Kurama said smiling.
"Well at least now I don't have to worry you will kill her when you watch her"
" Hold on he is going to watch me, for how long??" Kenzie blurted out.
"Yeah how long do I have to watch "IT" Kurama" Hiei asked at the same time.
"One month" Kurama said calmly " I spoke to soon, I think Hiei might just kill her" Kurama thought to himself.
" Great...an idiot is going to be watching over me for a month" Kenzie said thinking out load." "Hey I Heard That You Yarou"
Kenzie just glared at him. She and Hiei both stood up, Kenzie was about 1 inch shorter than Hiei. Then she backed up and walked outside. Kenzie just stood there and suddenly a flame went over her. When the smoke cleared Kenzie was different. She had dark red hair with black tipped bangs and in a ponytail so the end of the ponytail had black tips. She had on a black suit with a tight skirt and boots. Hooked on the skirt was a sword just like the one Hiei had. She had a dark red shirt covered by a long black jacket and she had long dark red gloves with it. " Wow, she changed " Kurama and Hiei watched as she walked towards them. " You see me now in my Fire Demon Form" She said looking at Hiei. " Feh, your power doesn't compare to mine" Hiei said with a smirk on his face. " I know because your all fire demon and I'm one fourth." She said but even though I'm one fourth I still have HALF as much power as you" Kenzie smiled and went back to her human form. " So can one of you take me home" " Yes Hiei can" Kurama said " Why Me, Kurama" Hiei yelled " Because you have to know where she lives if you are going to be watching her for a month". " Oh yeah I forgot that I had to watch IT" Hiei said leaning against the doorway. " Hey My Names Not IT it's Kenzie" Kenzie yelled at Hiei. " So are you going to take me home or what?"
So what did you think about my first chapter I think it was good but if you don't tell what I can do better. Well that's about all your going to see of Kurama ( sorry all your Kurama fans() but you will get to see Kenzie's other forms also I'm going to put Keiko and Yusuke in it ( as Boyfriend and Girlfriend ^__^) Well tell me what you think. I'll put up chapter two up really soon. See Ya Later(