Hi, well. This is another story of mine. The first one was/ is InkSpot/Clover. This one will be better/ worse. I think you know who I own and who I don't… so here it is, viola! First paragraph is 3rd person view, it's really from Brooklynn's pov.
Carlian sighed, it sucked being 21. She had to go to all the way to Oklahoma for her stupid job, she had to leave all her friends for a month more, she had been stuck here for two months so far, and the only person who really talked to her was Brooklynn, but she was strange…
I exhaled and looked over at Carla, she was twenty-one, I wish I could be that age, but. No, I'm still a 26 year old, I slowed down and walked beside her, reminding myself that Capricorn wanted her, and, if I got her to his horrible village, Dustfinger and I could go home. I still get a weird tingling feeling when I think of him, I don't know why though.
"Hi, Carlian."
"Brooklynn, I told you," Carlian said smiling, "Call me Carli."
"Err.. Okay, Carli."I corrected myself.
She smiled, "Hi, Brook."
I sighed, wishing I could be called Lezli, ahh.. those were the good days, when I knew nothing about Capricorn, Basta, Flatnose, Cockrell, ot any of the other freaks. Oh, ya, and when I never knew I was only a story book character.
"This is really boring, isn't it," I said, "you know, just going around taking photos of animals at the zoo, all day." I lifted up my camera and got into a good position, and snapped a photo of a sleeping panther,
Carli nodded, "Ya, I like animals, but…"
"But, what?"
"But I wish I could take pictures of wild animals," She saw my look and corrected herself, "I want to take pictures of animals that are really out in the wild."
Oh…
"Do you know what I mean?"
No…
"Brooklynn?"
Hmm…?
"Brooky?"
What…
"Brooklynn!"
Wha- everything went black, the last thing I thought was :
Holy. Crap. Whatwasthat.
Teeheehee, that was horrible. Review please.
~Moony