I don't own anything the BBC do but I have a homemade flapjack. So there.
My first wife was a modest and quiet woman. She was very different to River. We didn't marry for love, it was an arranged marriage but it worked out well. We were both fond of each other and slowly love blossomed. We were married and then 9 months later Eldane was born. In Gallifrey when I a boy was born. A ceremony would be held; Sooth Sayers would come and see the future of the child. They saw nothing different form the usual of happiness, which they always predicted. Eldane was a kind child. He always loved to play with wooden swords and shields. He always wanted to be a soldier. Although we warned him against it. When he was 8 he got a sister, Flavia was born. Eldane was a good brother to all his siblings. He was closest to Rastine. When he was 18 he was married to a girl named Mana. This time he was married for love. A year after their marriage they had a daughter Susan. All in all they had 3 children, two daughters Susan and Beth and a son Michael. Mana loved earth names and choose names that when translated into English they had traditional earth names.
When the time war broke out Susan was living on Earth but the other children were still on Gallifrey. Beth was 18 and Michael was 16. Eldane signed up for the army and fought the daleks. In the first year of the time war Mana, Beth and Michael were killed as they sheltered from the war. In the second year of the time war Eldane was killed in battle.
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