Here's for the late night readers on the site. My newest story. Hope it gets reviews, cuz I hope for about 50 on it. This chapter is short, but most should be 1000 words or so. Check for updates!
Idiot Brothers
Ch.1: Vortex
"So, Ryou, what do you want to do?"
"I don't know, Sakura. What do you want to do, Yami?"
"I don't know what the hell to do with myself," Yami Bakura said to the twins Ryou and Sakura Bakura.
"I know!" Sakura said. "Let's play Mario Party 2!"
"2? Why do you want to play 2?" Yami Bakura asked caustically.
"Because there's that one snowball mini-game and the one where you can steal gold from each other."
"if it involves stealing, I'm in!"
The three Bakuras set the game up, Ryou Being Yoshi, Sakura being Daisy, and Yami Bakura (forever undecided) being DK for this game. As usual, Yami Bakura won; of all of them, he had the best reflexes. Even on hard and with the maximum handicaps on the other characters, he'd still always win. His eyesight was so great that he almost always rolled what he felt like rolling on the dice, be it 10 or 1.
"Oh, well," Sakura said. "I came close, didn't I?"
She looked to her brother for some support and found that he was nearly passed out. His cheeks were slightly flushed.
"I think I need a walk...Ugh..."
He'd only just gotten up when he felt a total blackness envelop him...
"Ryou!" Sakura cried as her brother collapsed. "Are you okay?"
"Does the twit look okay?" Yami Bakura sneered.
It was then the spirit's turn. He felt a very painful jolt in his body, forcing his knees to give in. However, instead of passing out like Ryou, his eyes rolled back and his arms, legs, and neck started to twitch convulsively. Ryou soon began to twitch, leaving Sakura scared and confused. She kept hearing them talking in their state of...passed outness...
Colors...
Memories...
...
"Ryou, wanna play with me?"
"Whatcha wanna play?"
"Let's play Thief Adventure!"
"You already know you're a better thief than I am. D'you hafta rub it in?"
...
Ouch.
Why is this happening?
Where...who am I?
Why is Yami so like me?
...
"Let's go pester Sesshoumaru-niichan."
"Yami, its Sesshoumaru-niisama."
"Whatever."
...
"Yami, Ryou, I've had enough of your foolishness. Begone from here, or shall I use force?"
Sakura looked on in horror as her brother and his dark side began to change. Their ears grew into doggish ones, their fingernails sharpening into claws; their canine teeth grew into short fangs and they finally sprouted large white tails. Only Yami Bakura had an additional change—a blue crescent-shaped moon on his forehead, covered by his untidy bangs.
Their eyelids were squinched shut for about a second more before snapping open and revealing that the eyes were now doglike in appearance, though still brown.
"Ohh...my head..."
"Shut up, brother..." Yami Bakura moaned. He then caught himself. "Did I just call you..."
"Yeah...that's strange..."
Suddenly, a small tear formed on the wall. It gradually began to grow into a black spinning vortex.
"Niichan!" Sakura cried. "Yami-chan!"
Both boys were being drawn in. she grabbed their tails, causing them pain as the vortex drew them in.
"Iiiieeyaaaagghhh!!!" they all screamed.
WUMPFH!!!
That's the end of this chapter. I promise you it'll get better, so hang around for a few chapters before you think of discarding the story. And if you can (I don't mind if you don't) review every chapter you see. It's fun to read opinions, good or bad, even if I don't particularly like flames. R&R, peeps!