Just to clarify, I've decided to do a series where I write a collection of poems as well as my fics. This might not be something you enjoy, but I hope you do.
Better
That dress would look better if you smiled a little more.
You'd suit that skirt if your eyes lit up the way they did before.
That shirt would look great if you could let go of it all.
You'd suit those pants if you didn't hate what you saw.