Journey to the past

This is my new story it's a D/N fic but is also has B/R and A/G

I won't post a chapter until I have at least 2 reviews.

"Hurry up Daine" Numair called to his wife "we have to get going soon, at least this time you don't have to deal with a lot of very moody ponies"

"Numair you help Sarra pack and I'll pack for Rikash" Daine called

FLASH BACK

"NO! IREFUSE TO GO" Daine yelled not bothering to notice she was in the king's study and was addressing the king "Daine I need both of my best mages to come on this peace mission" Jon replied patiently "besides you'll have Numair, Alanna, Thayet, Buri, Raoul and a squad of the own to protect you"

"I know the Majesty, But why Snowsdale? The place where my own people hunted me" Daine said trying not to cry

END FLASH BACK

Numair walked into the room large traveling bags under each arm he dropped them when he saw Daine slumped sobbing on the bed

"Sweet?" he asked

"I'm alright Numair just a bit nervous" Daine replied

"Don't worry Daine everything will be fine I promise"

"But Numair how can you promise" sobbed Daine.

Straight after lunch the traveler's set off with Thayet, Numair, Daine and Alanna in the lead.

The trip to Snowsdale was very uneventful apart from a couple of incidents involving Immortals.

When they reached Snowsdale they were taken to the keep where they were staying.

Once they were settled Daine, Numair and Alanna set off to where Daine used to live. On the way there Hakkon overheard Numair call

"Wait for us Daine"

"So she came back did she" he muttered to himself "this time well get her" then he ran off to gather a mob.

When the trio reached Daine's old house they were greeted by an eagle who told Daine that the animals had protected her home. Daine walked over to where she had buried Mammoth she couldn't help but cry Numair came over and comforted her.

"Numair I'm going for a walk" said Daine "come on Cloud"

"Be careful" Numair called after her.

Once in the woods Daine was greeted by Hakkon

"Morning Hakkon" Daine said

"Morning Daine" Hakkon replied

"What do you want?" Daine asked

"Just one thing ………. You dead" he said as mob of villages stepped out of the bushes.

"Numair!" Daine cried (a/n I was tempted to leave it here but I'm not that mean)

Numair and Alanna raced towards Daine's voice. Alanna was the first to reach Daine

"What do you think you're doing?" asked Alanna

"Disposing of this Madwoman for ye Mistress" Said a stout little man Before Alanna could answer Numair burst into the clearing shouting

"WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING TO MY WIFE"

Yay a cliffy. As you know I won't post another chapter until I get at least two reviews.

I need to know does anyone think I should bring Daine parents into this?